@KingKreem i ain`t that good to make a song ...i won`t do smth just cuz` im like this guy ..with a dream or idk ..hobby ...but belive me ..i`ve got better rhymes than this guy Sam ...and if you don`t. .well ....this is the life.
man, i think we both got each other wrong. I didn´t wanna front you. I just hate the fact that people always messin´ with other people, instead of accepting the fact that we all just of flesh and blood and remembering the main pricipiple of Hip Hop, wich is : "Each one, teach one" I think the world could be a much better place, if every human bein´ on the world would just take a sec and think about that. If you keep it real with yourself, you can´t blame this simple fact.
@Mmmjamm... I gave him time and advice. Don't be retarded you Fucking troll. Constructive Critisism is part of this business. You learn from your mistakes and become better. Fucking idiot.
You say Hannah Montana-i fucking punch you in the face
92% of teens have turned to Pop.If you are part of the 8% that still listen to real music,copy and paste this message to another video. Dont let the real rap die!
this is tight homie startin to really feel the sounds comin outta the uk with headliners like wiley an tinie temp. you definatly got some dirty lines definatley comin from a unique perspective i have trouble following some of the words ill listen a couple more times but your flow first glance is dirty
Not bad, time to move up and get a high quality mic and a sound booth. Both of you are popping p's and hissing a good share more than can be fixed post-production. Recommend using a local college station if short on cash, they'll have what you need, and getting DJs on your side is never a bad thing. Most students will help out locals. P.S memorize your lines (still write it down). You'll have the opportunity to show off if people request you perform on the spot. Just some recommendations, good
yur music is a piece of shitt. real talk. and p.s, yu WILL NEVER MAKE IT IN THE MUSIC BIZZ so STOP TRYING yu stupid european fuk... no offense lil guy
Cuz not lying its good and the sound quality is great, i spit aswell search up dylan whittle streotypical i spit and dylan sings but thats not why im commenting i saw your comment on p money SBtv and saw a part of myself in that comment its a matter of time before your noticed fam
whenever i see a spam mail i leave an honest comment, the music is good, the rapping isnt. you dont put any flare into it and you cant rap composure with dollar
dude, this mix is pretty damn tight. some of the instrumentation could probably be tweaked or updated with better plugs, but this is pretty vocal driven music and the vocals sound great. i'd suggest for the rap parts to maybe cut a dB or so and perhaps a very subtle reverb to make it flow with the synthlayers in the background and not be so dry in the mix, but honestly it's just a matter of taste really.
bro ur amazing i only wish i could do this but i need all the equiptment and shit im im just a poor asian i only wish i could meet a top rapper like eminem or lil wayne
You have a massive potential you just need gain that X factor that I think is lost in how your voice sounds, if perhaps you put more emotion into the song it would improve. :)
F*cking love this song! You could stand to slow down a bit and pronounce your words better but you got MAD potential
gold22flower 1 week ago
Great stuff! This guy deserves to be bigger than most of the faggot rappers today...
Why is this guy still trying so hard to make it big when faggots like Wiz Khalifa make it so big?
1ceMasterr 1 month ago
@1ceMasterr this guy is beast and wiz is king
ilovetheburn 1 month ago
Dope shit B real spill give me shit a check its not tha best but im getting better i want to get a collabo going some tyme soon
LilUziMidWestKing 2 months ago
Dam´n....this track is fuckin great! Respect!
KingKreem 2 months ago
Amazing
viking9598 2 months ago
where's the lyrics? This is good :)
hanzyb0ne 2 months ago
Good song
GarySFC 2 months ago
i like it man. keep it up
WarriorsAbug 2 months ago
eh...could use a better flow
TruSkillz5 3 months ago
Nice
Knicksdb 3 months ago
this soo sikk! love it
paper383 3 months ago
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keep on doin your thing and dont let any1 stop you! Im a rapper from sweden, feel free to check out my music too!
MarkusMusic94 3 months ago
Not perfect, but keep workin on it man. You'll get there one day.
IzzyIsland 3 months ago
i don`t really feel you guy`s ... you need better lirycs ...cuz` its sounds like shit sometimes ...
alexx0xx 3 months ago
@alexx0xx
Do you have some better lyrics?...this is storytellin´stuff, it ain´t about lyricism....fuckin haters always don´t know what you talk about!
KingKreem 2 months ago
@KingKreem well yes i have better lyrics ...
alexx0xx 2 months ago
@alexx0xx
proof it...where can i listen to your rhymes?
KingKreem 2 months ago
@KingKreem i ain`t that good to make a song ...i won`t do smth just cuz` im like this guy ..with a dream or idk ..hobby ...but belive me ..i`ve got better rhymes than this guy Sam ...and if you don`t. .well ....this is the life.
alexx0xx 2 months ago
@alexx0xx
man, i think we both got each other wrong. I didn´t wanna front you. I just hate the fact that people always messin´ with other people, instead of accepting the fact that we all just of flesh and blood and remembering the main pricipiple of Hip Hop, wich is : "Each one, teach one" I think the world could be a much better place, if every human bein´ on the world would just take a sec and think about that. If you keep it real with yourself, you can´t blame this simple fact.
KingKreem 2 months ago
@Mmmjamm... I gave him time and advice. Don't be retarded you Fucking troll. Constructive Critisism is part of this business. You learn from your mistakes and become better. Fucking idiot.
OnslaughtTV2020 3 months ago
some minor adjustmants as some people say in the below comments and it would be fine (: but seriosuly your awesome O.o
arwinjr 3 months ago
unlike you ? oké ! XD
joke!
no serious
joke! XD
MrGtfom 3 months ago
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Your patterns are off man. Slow it down. Take time with the song.
OnslaughtTV2020 3 months ago
@OnslaughtTV2020 ey shut the fuck up, he got flow, give a new artist time to make his music
Mmmjamm 3 months ago
Nice man i will be sure to share this
Theveryanoyingorange 3 months ago
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This is embarrasing -_-
EVGRP 3 months ago
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flow and contents need working on bro, but trust youve got sumthin there your vocal is on point!
austin197110 3 months ago
Aye I could edit your vocals, email me g33k314@gmail.com
TheMookyyy 3 months ago
Pretty good!
RFT15ify 3 months ago
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You say Justin Bieber-I say Eminem
You say Lil Wayne-I say Tupac
You say Drake-I say dr.dre
You say Soulja Boy-I say snoop dogg
You say Gucci Mane-I say 50 cent
You say New school-i say shut the fuck up
You say Pop-I scream HipHop
You say Hannah Montana-i fucking punch you in the face
92% of teens have turned to Pop.If you are part of the 8% that still listen to real music,copy and paste this message to another video. Dont let the real rap die!
xR34lxSH1Tx 3 months ago
this is tight homie startin to really feel the sounds comin outta the uk with headliners like wiley an tinie temp. you definatly got some dirty lines definatley comin from a unique perspective i have trouble following some of the words ill listen a couple more times but your flow first glance is dirty
mitch7868 3 months ago
Good job
DMPIRECORDS 3 months ago
hey ur pretty good man! i was listening to eminem and seen ur comment and decided to check u out and u r really good
BlackOpsZombiesEPIC 3 months ago
WHO SUNG??
AliOfficialMusic 3 months ago
Not bad, time to move up and get a high quality mic and a sound booth. Both of you are popping p's and hissing a good share more than can be fixed post-production. Recommend using a local college station if short on cash, they'll have what you need, and getting DJs on your side is never a bad thing. Most students will help out locals. P.S memorize your lines (still write it down). You'll have the opportunity to show off if people request you perform on the spot. Just some recommendations, good
gordian512 3 months ago
I refreshed the page 100 times to give u more views and subscribed and liked all ur videos :) btw its itmovingtarget you sound kinda like like jayz
briansf999 3 months ago in playlist Liked
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tonycomtec 3 months ago
Yo my man don't forget that its not a career unless you are getting paid. If your not getting paid then its just a hobby. But good luck
ruffstuff0621 3 months ago
I really like it:)
iSmile365 3 months ago
ur a beast mate how come u aint been signed yet?
orangotango24 3 months ago
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yur music is a piece of shitt. real talk. and p.s, yu WILL NEVER MAKE IT IN THE MUSIC BIZZ so STOP TRYING yu stupid european fuk... no offense lil guy
s8432523 3 months ago
No top comments... heres my chance! Ermmm I HAVE A TURTLE!
tommyogy1 3 months ago 2
instant sub =)
AceTrainerDave 3 months ago
I WAS ON BEST I EVER HAD *DRAKE! AND SAW UR COMMENT! I DECIDED TO CHECK U OUT! PRETTY GOOD SONG! I SUBBED!
mememola1 3 months ago
I saw one of the comments you left where you say you hope someone reads this and listens and I did and you didn't dissapoint:) new subbie
PoliticalDeviantHAHA 3 months ago
subbed dude, gl in the future
IL00KC00L 4 months ago
hey this is some good stuff :D
Leolyon01 4 months ago
Cuz not lying its good and the sound quality is great, i spit aswell search up dylan whittle streotypical i spit and dylan sings but thats not why im commenting i saw your comment on p money SBtv and saw a part of myself in that comment its a matter of time before your noticed fam
CRYSIS2982 4 months ago
this is amazing keep it up but return the favor and subscribe back
beenballin732 4 months ago
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whenever i see a spam mail i leave an honest comment, the music is good, the rapping isnt. you dont put any flare into it and you cant rap composure with dollar
Realthx 4 months ago
nice
KINGMP3TV 4 months ago
make a mixtape and put it on dattpiff it would probably help u get noticed
bloodzero667 4 months ago
love this!
rooney6571 4 months ago
this is sikk!
rooney6571 4 months ago
He's right, all you have to do is mix in the rap vocal a little better
JanPeter22 4 months ago
dude, this mix is pretty damn tight. some of the instrumentation could probably be tweaked or updated with better plugs, but this is pretty vocal driven music and the vocals sound great. i'd suggest for the rap parts to maybe cut a dB or so and perhaps a very subtle reverb to make it flow with the synthlayers in the background and not be so dry in the mix, but honestly it's just a matter of taste really.
this shit has soul.
Lashmush 4 months ago
I love this
10vball01 4 months ago
nice collab
DeeJRoxon1 4 months ago
very good work bro,i read ur coment on drakes video and i hope that u will make good songs, i write too,but don't sing
all the best ! :D
1manaco1 4 months ago
this track sound well professional man.
TanniBoy999 4 months ago
que??
what did he say?
Xepher227 4 months ago
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i didn't like it, you don't have the right sound
FunkTheJunkPunk 4 months ago
bro ur amazing i only wish i could do this but i need all the equiptment and shit im im just a poor asian i only wish i could meet a top rapper like eminem or lil wayne
MrDemon4700 4 months ago
aesome!
Clovitox2476 4 months ago
YOU ARE AMAZING
themrblake3331 4 months ago
I wish you the best of luck man, maby some day youll actually make it. Keep up the good work :)
solrac18619 4 months ago
great one!
Borntomusic 4 months ago
you're great man!
nigguhhhhhhhhh 4 months ago
You have a massive potential you just need gain that X factor that I think is lost in how your voice sounds, if perhaps you put more emotion into the song it would improve. :)
bowiecansnipe 4 months ago
Keep up the work man! Potential right here!
narimx 4 months ago
R u singing this??
Sharlenxxx 4 months ago
cool 5 star
RandomVideos19971 4 months ago 2
gr8 song love it so much :p
shauntait36 4 months ago
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Say ariana grande 2 times clap 5 times post on 2 walls chack ur voice
ssaabboouurr 4 months ago
this is sikk! love it
samsung6564 4 months ago
fuck ya
piegodbarry 4 months ago