Praise: Nice choice of a beat, and you seem to be in sync with it.
Criticism: Your rhyming is very basic, and you don't really sound like you're rapping, more like you're copying the sound of the beat and adding words, which would work if this was a rock song, but doesn't work because this is a rap song. You need to be more creative with rhyming and the way you deliver your message.
Hey what the song called? that u guys used for ur back gound best cuse i gatta do a rap for my school and i rlly liek ur guys beat and i'm guna use some of ur lines i tink but dont worry it's not gunna e a copy
what song did you use as the beat?
biscuitmafia 2 years ago
Praise: Nice choice of a beat, and you seem to be in sync with it.
Criticism: Your rhyming is very basic, and you don't really sound like you're rapping, more like you're copying the sound of the beat and adding words, which would work if this was a rock song, but doesn't work because this is a rap song. You need to be more creative with rhyming and the way you deliver your message.
jaychant0 2 years ago
lololololololol funny but true
123pokemonmaster123 3 years ago
Hey what the song called? that u guys used for ur back gound best cuse i gatta do a rap for my school and i rlly liek ur guys beat and i'm guna use some of ur lines i tink but dont worry it's not gunna e a copy
18sunnyp18 3 years ago
it was ok i guess. i have to write a rap about global warming for school too!!! this didn`t help
MandT4eva 3 years ago
Good video styll.
shayasta 4 years ago
YES ONE
twhyler 4 years ago