Crazy skydiving accident long island des jerry 1xxstrawberry

[vZipFilev]

she is mexican so who cares

[jdhxb]

sucks too many replays and too many shit songs

[postulify]

To many triple takes.

to many audio edits.

Tried to hard.

[ariesboi8668]

Hope ya ll didnt jinxx urselves!

[ariesboi8668]

Gay az Hell !

[lawinorder101]

Thumbs down, what accident? They need to get flagged down and off YouTube. Thumbs down!

[BenWaren1]

fake

[PotatoGunsRule]

It's a fun vid man.  I liked it.

[Stusse7]

Crazy accident? What accident? Lame-o.

[Iceblade157]

talk about stealing all the tracks from garage band, no originality

[outlawer89]

how dumd is this i say real real dumd.

[TheFijiWiji]

Is it normal for people to jump in Jeans and T-Shirts?

[skydiveelsinore]

There is nothing worse that Handcam video...Hire a real video person next time

[jordzzzzzzz]

LAME

[JustHulls]

endless skydiving never gave me vertigo, but this video did~

[acbiketrial]

che stupidi...

[chittychad18]

i am sooo jumping there when i get certified lol

[steviet1960]

tooo long

[txlittlestar]

Did anyone notice the first guy to land didn't put his feet up-- but still ran out the landing? Not bad.

As far as the editing goes: lay off the guy. Some parts are a little redundant.

After my first jump I practically watched and rewatched my video over & over until my next jump..and the next, etc. What better way to re-experience than to get down & dirty with the frame by frame? Of course, skydiving vids don't need editing to be cool :)

Hopoe you had fun!

[killall217]

dude your editing sucks

you used garage band for all the song loops, put a real song in their...

[txlittlestar]

dude, your grammar sucks.

you misused the word "their."

[killall217]

Dude its youtube, you actually think i care about my spelling and grammar on here?

go slit your wrists..

[JaceMullen]

Jeez who cares just watch the video

[Scrutiny1]

The video editing sucked.

[wikid14141]

Cracks me up they thought bill booth was a rabbi !!

[NSB0953]

Sweet vid. Don't know why she was so scared. I went skydiving at the same place back in the spring 09' and it was awesome. Check out my vid if you'd like.

[SuperCurnel]

omg u were yelling the whole time........ROFL

[VideoDave2]

The annotation balloons were not necessary, kind of like saying "now here is a funny part". Also for what happened, I found it way too long a big part of successful editing is getting the idea out without boring the audience. That said, it was pretty good for a first attempt.

[FaberOptime]

the outcome!

Keep up the good work! :)

Kind regards,

Faber.

[FaberOptime]

good for you.

- Mis-classified - whilst it does have some funny content, it's more a film about a personal trip.

- Consider the best films you know and think about structure. Best films have some opening impact (to capture viewers' attention), some plot or storyline and some finale (/payoff/punchline), that "fit" together (though it does loosely).

- Don't try to do too much! The old theme of KISS (Keep It Simple, Stupid!) very much applies. Oftentimes the more you pack in, the less "punchy" >

[FaberOptime]

Good first try!

Some feedback, as requested:

- Brevity is the soul of wit! Try being a bit more sparing in your editing to keep the pace of the piece up.

- Soundtrack is very cobbled together. Better when it's more cohesively assembled, so it "flows" well.

- Tidy up your title and description. Keywords are good, but your title/description needs to be more as they sound - descriptive, since they serve more than just indexing purposes and will be seen more broadly. Search results will not look >

[desmatia]

let me know what you think, it's my first video attempt

[desmatia]

i like it

[HenryVanEpps]

ROFL at ending

[desmatia]

thanks man i'm glad you liked it....my first movie