Issues - Leslie's Promo

[paxmanchris]

i chuckled.

the scene at 6:33 needs some acting touchup.

the actor is just kindof standing there until the kid starts shaking the box. though the money drop from the kid was funny.

this is my suggestion of change:

[1] kid walks in, camera on the kid, pan to bobby who is at the register.

[2] kid scans for toy, he looks at bobby to see if she is alert. bobby is not.

[3] camera back on kid, kid places it in his shirt, turns quick and hits Bobby's legs. pan up to bobby angry expression.

[sarahsweetriot]

dan - you rock! :)

[IssuesTheSeries]

Glad you enjoyed it! Spread the word- there's more where this came from- we're just scratching the surface at this point!

[thunderginger]

ahhhhhhhh!

i love it <3