//christofer drew love story (:// The Perfect Scene//Chapter 1//part 2//

[Jvftwsvxubytdx]

You should write a book

[LtMcloud]

I liked it :) reminded me of old times xD even though my school was nothing like this

[mrswitzigreuterTRS]

u shuld make it longer, i loved it!!

[MrBubblyxDlikeaboss]

this story is sooo sweet!!!!!! :)

[xbox360freak40]

dang this is amazing. i love it :)

[xBieberPotterGleex]

Awuh! So cute, but all I can imagine is grown-up Christofer being tripped by a six-year old XD

[dropdeadozzy]

did he write a book where did u get this from please tell me :D

[sykes56497]

this is soo cute its really good.

[PeaceLoveHarmony77]

Damn haha im crying:(

[TheAnnemarie818]

That's so cute :)

[abbeyann14]

What is this meant to be ? Can someone please tell me ? IS christopher drew like in your own little world or what ? I am so confused ...............

[BoliviaRulez28]

WOW!! I really love the story and the pictures! please write more, when u have time of course hehehehe ;)

[MrChrisdrewlover]

I accualty had the attention spand to read it all. It just dosn't sound like something a kid would say. The perspective is really cool though. I likkkkeeee it :)

[MrEnviousMonster]

wait is this real?

[abcforlife3000]

did you make this up or is it legit ?

[kara5948]

just kidding. so dont send nothin stupid to me

[kara5948]

oohhh im first to comment!! i feel special now

[volleygato]

IM LOLING AT THE FACT THAT THIS IS A FAILUREEEE. i mean really, i thought the jonas brothers' love stories on here were bad....

[JustinBeiverSucks]

arent they like in thje first grade.

isnt that like...too young. lol

[honalulu123ghrt]

im confused are they supposed to be in kindergarten??

[MsCiachi]

I LOVED THE christopher PICTURES :D not the rest no offence nice job thoo :)

[MrChrisdrewlover]

@MsCiachi It's ChristoFer dumdass.

[NKOTBfan2009]

aww. i loved it. it's so kute! :)

[KarleighlovesAustinR]

awhhhh.(: cutest story ever,(: i love you Chris! your so sweet!

[fh4iff]

I LOOVEEE ITTT!!!! its really gooddd

wats this song called???

[xD3Sx]

this was really good, im not lying you shoudl write more, it was like i didnt want to stop reading. lol

[KarleighlovesAustinR]

awhhh! that story is sooo cute.(:

gahh, i love you Christofer.

[azzyamazing]

whats the point of these things?

[LuisC1495]

os the story true??

[sammymiller65]

dangg i love the story (:

[TandJProductionz]

Rocketship by: Shiny toy guns!!

Your welcome.

[Reality5694]

whats the song?

[WhyWouldntULoveMii]

I lik it! Kepp writing! I want toknow the rest!

[crazychick5631]

I LOVE IT! well i love anything by never shout never! so hot and amazing! love ya!

[immapimpn]

i'm confuesd. is this a song? A made up story, or a true story?

[ninjawithataco]

i lol'd when he pulled out sour patch kids. (:

[Jewels3398]

its cute :)

[gennasgotstyle]

What song is that at the end? With the little kids?

[gennasgotstyle]

OMG I can't remember song that music video at the end goes to!

[sophiedaniellee]

i really really really dont get it :/

[bubbley12009]

ur rlly good at thiss u should right a book i would sooo read it

[aniitubedotcom]

this is so cute!! write more! just imagining a little kid crying just about made me cry :(

[partytimeex]

i think it was reaally cute<33 but it just should have had a better ending...

[kristirudisill]

It's totally cute :)

[taylornicole64]

i reallllllllllllllly like this. seriously. its adorable, heart-warming, and it made me smile. you should really continue the story. it'll def go somewhere(:

[MISSROCKSTAR100]

cute story!!! ^_^

[livinsorandom]

its so cute!

haha.

you should write more. :)

[SerenaBoBena10]

aww I like it and ZOMG it doesn't suck :P its really awesome ^_^ so your really Christofer Drew? anyways... :3 its awesome that u have your friends and u still go out their to talk about them, i bet its hard getting caught up in the "star" life... XD

[xNailsXBlackx]

hey i love the story you should keep making more of the story plzzz its really good and cute

[YaItsCourtxD]

The Only bad thing is that the kids are a bit too mature, But I still love it! [:

[camille4273]

Hahaha Spencer Pattinson the guy is my friend Josh

[AliAndMicky]

great story:) also i liked the song...

does anyone know what its called??

i really want to know:)

[scenechic369]

i love it its so kute!

[katieisachampion]

I'm enjoying your story!

[j3tsKi94]

such a cute story :D u should write more!

[ashleyluvsolisykes09]

i'm really enjoying this story(: if u write more i would defintly ead it(:(:

[plsjesus]

Some advice;

one, you had many grammar mistakes, but I'm sure you knew that

also, you should try making it longer,

two pages isn't really enough to call it a chapter.

[sprinkleaddict101]

lmfao.

1.Yes hun, I did make many grammar mistakes in my story. I do know that. Are you the grammar police or something? Then you really should'nt care.

2. And. I would if i had time. Im deleting it anyways, so wtf. It doesnt really matter.

oops. I forgot the " ' " mark. My bad. (:

[MusicPro17]

wait so the story in the description is fake?

[xXCottonKandiiXx]

@sprinkleaddict101 plsjesus wasnt even being rude to you. In the description u wrote tell me what u think and he told u so u should just calm down and not be so rude.

[GTarMasta]

@sprinkleaddict101 Dont ask people for advice again your hella fucking mean to that person he was just giving you some advice and it was quite nice advice as well i agree with him its not a chapter more like a short story, Heres some advice next time you say "tell me what you think of it! i kno it sux but please comment (:" Dont get pissy at people that do

[may14gurl99]

@sprinkleaddict101 i like it :D it was cute

[o1kutie89]

lol, a chapter could be 2 words. It's all about the author's writing style..

[plsjesus]

I know, I know,

I just felt like there was some more description that should of been put into it.

[xxktourignyxx]

wat song is this??

[sarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrah]

is this even true????

[inlovewithHELLOKITTY]

Oh it's soo cute...please write more :)

-anna.

[30h3ISAMAZING]

wow. (:

i love it.

he IS the PERFECt scene (:

[jenandgurdy]

what is this song called i like it:)

[onyx123hrp]

hahah love it (little christofer ) haahh i can sooo picture it

[MCRMyLiFeMyLoVe]

okay there really cute storys lol you should write more!!!

[IZZYandEVA]

Write more i love it!!!!!!

[iloveflight29down]

oh oh oh so cute!!!! write more??? please ? hehe :)

[JOYCEonyt]

i kinda like it! nice work 8)

[BailleysoAbby]

It does not suck! I think it's so adorable.

I'm addicted to it.

and

ya

i'm sorry.