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[altophil]

Great voice, lyrics, track, I'm mean perfectly put together but...it was missing uniqueness. The style has already been done. I do know as you mature as as an artist you will find your true niche....Many blessings and successes to you.

[anitacosmical]

Muy bonita.

[maliboo2k4]

im really feeling this song, as a new artist you are straight putting it out there. LOVE YOUR STUFF KEEP IT COMING!!! (YOUR COMMENTS SHOWS YOU ARE TRULY A MAN WITH TALENT)

[courcam]

ok so im new to your page and i have to say your songs have meaning and i can identify to all of them at one time or another in my life. so i just want to say thanks and keep it up God has a plan for that voice to go far....

[Mezmorize09]

Beautiful Song!

[charlespoohbear1971]

hey man i love your music, keep up the great work ,

you need to bring it up to nj where you are a appreciate if the carolina's dont know great talent. look to here your headline posted real soon,

its about time someone bring back real rb music,

[bridiva]

dude ur awsome!

[annalizamayer]

Very nice your song! I like it very much.

[berlynn2]

u have a very strong voice brotha, i think your a star already. 2 thumb's up for u.

[berlynn2]

this brotha has a very strung voice, in my opinion, your gonna make it brotha 2 thumb's up for u, good luck.

[byang26]

Love this! Very nice. Love the lyrics.

[Shevon71]

Hey Patrick you are the **it! There are a lot of people who was told no before they got that one yes. Your gonna get that yes, and don't take no for and answer the criticism will just make you that much better and stronger. You've got it, just keep doing what you do and it's gonna happen. Stay prayered up. A true fan! Thanks for the invite, this is really cool.

[NeNe9460]

I love this!

[MyPureBeauty10]

Request neyo mirror.... Please lol

[JadesInTheSky]

I love it. Great Vocals really because if you know anything about my reputation I'm brutally honest and give props where it is deserved.

[RawnduhP]

I can listen to you all night long! As I said b4; your voice is PRISTINE. May I add that it also helps that you're handsome in a rather ... sensual way! May you reach your dreams and share with the world all your heart has to offer....I applaud you! I look forward to hearing your work on my favorite radio station: KBLX the quiet storm! 102.9 San Francisco's sexiest neosoul, r&b frequency!

Wishing you peace beyond passion,

Rhonda (SF Bay Area)

[rb142832]

really nice song. i love your voice. :)

[AmourInfinity]

You know this song is like one of those you can listen to over and over. The music is so smooth and the words speak volumes. Blessings.

[n1ghth2wk]

Pat, you sound great. You are going to make it BIG.

wes_AP@1492 BB

[nygrrl99]

As always, your voice in incredible but I have to agree with Doulie and say the lyrics are weak. To me it sounds like the lyrics just don't flow right. Hope this is constructive to you because that's the only reason for it. I love your voice Patrick and always wish you the best!

[MissGrayKitty390]

Nice...very nice!!!

[Eaglesmusic]

You really have a good voice. I hope you keep going ahead with your music. Real great!

[accidentalsongman]

Awesome !

Jim

[noahanderson15]

great job great lyrics but more meaningfull lyrics

[dreamgirl2872]

I have to disagree with Doulie..........

To me the lyrics are on point but I guess that is a matter of opinion. But if a person has ever been in the situation they can totally feel where the vibe is coming from. So you have my vote!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! Keep writing with your heart JP. These are your words and your feelings from your point of view. I'm sure we could all put a different spin on it or add our own twist or flava to it but that is what keeps creativity flowing.

[doulie]

Man on the real you have a good singing voice and your flow is on point but the lyrics are weak.

The chorus is alright but the rest of the song needs work.

- Doulie

[JustPatrick09]

I really appreciate the constructive criticism and the compliments on my voice. I like to write what is in my heart my man, sometimes lyrics are intense, sometimes in the mood to be simple. But again, thanks for the honest opinion. JP

[doulie]

@JustPatrick09

Hey thankx for taking it like a grown up and not calling me a hater. I think after hearing it a few times it can still become someone's "song." But as a new artist i don't think thats what you should shoot for. It should be impressive the first time anyone hears it.

Good luck man

- Doulie

[JustPatrick09]

No, I appreciate it honestly. Keep giving me honest opinions. That is what helps me get stronger. Well I have about 5,000 other songs, so hopefully one of those will be impressive to you. I am slowly posting them all on here. Just takes a lot of time. But I really appreciate it when someone tells me their hones opinion.

JP

[msHalo77]

@doulie Man, yall is trippen. He got a voice and he needs to be on the scene for reals.

[pussylicious44]

well ,constructive critisim is a good thing as long as it comes from sumone who knows what he is talkin about

[Lecadragos]

Very nice. Congratulations!

[MJrocksmyworld98]

Fantastic beautifull voice thanks for sharingxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[zokabmel]

WOW ...Really great my friend ..:)

[kiayana1990]

This Song is Great ! <3

[charleighh34]

Very nice. Very very nice. And you're fine on top of it! I think a music video is in order please and thank you! ; p

[faith8412]

I am saving this to my music list. 5 star all the way!

[Lis025]

Bravo Pat c'est magnifique

[Uniquelise3]

I like it!! Sounds Great!

[bambigjenkins]

love it

[MyDestinyIsThere]

Awesome song !! I love your voice <3

[anotharemix]

damn....perfection, perhaps? this shyt is on fiya

[habibiyaeini3]

loved it :)

[RedAMilli]

Nice- smooth sounding flow and clean.

[Mslady41]

Beautiful:0)