also work on your german sound, "ich" "Luftwaffe" "Dachau" "Auchwitz" "Belsen" "Meinkampf". i'm not giving you notes because this matters, it just looks more professional when you honor the pronunciation of the words the author uses
the line is "to get back, back, back, to you" and the word is swastika, not shwastika, taroc, not tarot (in the poem) some more notes on word notes, and i guess the nine years is personal and will have to be excused, don't know much about you so i can't judge to much, but overall good and entertaining, though a little bit hokey at times especially the beginning telephone conversation, and the tarot pack, also, memorization is your friend… i give constructive criticism, not flowery garbage
fantastic reading...it felt like you brought Sylvia's father back from the grave for one more hard cry for Lady Plath's beautiful yet painful poetic confrontation.
also work on your german sound, "ich" "Luftwaffe" "Dachau" "Auchwitz" "Belsen" "Meinkampf". i'm not giving you notes because this matters, it just looks more professional when you honor the pronunciation of the words the author uses
JTIllusion 6 months ago
the line is "to get back, back, back, to you" and the word is swastika, not shwastika, taroc, not tarot (in the poem) some more notes on word notes, and i guess the nine years is personal and will have to be excused, don't know much about you so i can't judge to much, but overall good and entertaining, though a little bit hokey at times especially the beginning telephone conversation, and the tarot pack, also, memorization is your friend… i give constructive criticism, not flowery garbage
JTIllusion 6 months ago
I really liked this :)
CanUFeelMyLovebuzz4 9 months ago
This is so dirty, when my mum walked in I swiched onto porn
MrBenenenenen 1 year ago 2
shits crazy.
InsertHypernova 1 year ago
Mandem aint gonna lie. Shes a topLAD.
zach700940 1 year ago
This galdem is producing pure bantiful banter. She has the BANTERFACTOR.
zach700940 1 year ago 2
@zach700940 i still would.
COELHOBOII1993 1 year ago 2
Actuall bantarr
MrBenenenenen 1 year ago
seriously, she gone, waaaa waa waaa..
MrBenenenenen 1 year ago 2
shes dead get over it
COELHOBOII1993 1 year ago 5
@COELHOBOII1993
Allow the bants.
zach700940 1 year ago
@COELHOBOII1993 im joking this is wonderful, top lass
COELHOBOII1993 1 year ago
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MrBenenenenen 1 year ago
@MrBenenenenen i know its all about that blac guy who reads it out, what a lad!
COELHOBOII1993 1 year ago
@COELHOBOII1993 what guy? post a link, ima favorite that shiz
MrBenenenenen 1 year ago
fantastic reading...it felt like you brought Sylvia's father back from the grave for one more hard cry for Lady Plath's beautiful yet painful poetic confrontation.
avisualfeel 1 year ago 2
nice...whats the music in the background?
trance104 1 year ago