A POEM BY ME: Inside Out...

[RecycledTrashHole]

"Ice Birch Girl" Unable to stop thinking of you I wonder if I'm obsessed Is this feeling true? Or just another delusion of my mind? A fantasy I cannot bear wanting to spend time with you Talking, laughing aimlessly This is my hope and my dream Is it the future written in the stars? Do I honestly love you? Is it make believe? would you rather a fool for you? Or a cowboy in jeans? My heart says you are for me Ice Birch Girl.

[finehomemadewine]

Don´t throw away your poems- they contain exactly the feelings you need to work with, maybe just put them into box till you are ready to deal with them. If You keep them in chronical order you might even see some progress in healing. Thank for shring, it helps to others when they know they are not the only ones to feel that way and so that it is not because they was worse than other kids..

[poetrykiid411]

This poem wasn't bad at all.. I've been looking around for good poems, haha, just because i just made this channel to post my poetry on. Most of the poepke on here who write poems about depression suck at it.. I gotts say, you're good, haha..

[peruanaGorda]

this poem is so sad but so beautiful at the same time. Please, if you have more of them share with us!!. I am so sorry you feel in that way. Sometimes I do too.

[PoemsOfTheSoul]

Wonderful poetry, you should not feel ashamed of your work. Whilst it may remind you of horrible emotions, they are truly beautiful words - talent that has arised from a situation you may have thought was only darkness.

I enjoyed your poem a lot, I can sympathise with it. I also love the piece you chose! Simply beautiful sonata =]

Feel free to check out any of my poems if you are interested, but please - keep writing :)

-Elena <33

[sasukeplushie2002]

I went to cry and i saw this.Thank you for making this.

[xXPwinc3ssLil1Xx]

This is a poem by me tell me if you like it i wrote it by myself and im only 13!! tell me if its good!! kk here goes : i have been there for you not ever, Even though i said that i would be there i was not that clever for so i left you and said it was a lie, Then you come to me and let out your cry, I feel so foolish to let you know that i cant oh so ever let you go!! thank you its short yeah i know but i hoped you enjoyed it thanks its my first try lol!!

[Seerofvisions]

That is a very nice poem. Thank you for sharing it with me. :)x

[TTjyk]

Love it reminds me of my self when I am alone...nice video

Please visit my channel dunno why I wrote this :P

[Seerofvisions]

Thanks for recent comments. I've been off-line for some time due to personal problems. I'm hoping next year will be a better one for me. x

[XboxLiveSecrets]

how old are you that just brings a tear to my eye

[kaddykay]

how she describes it,,.... i have been trying to describe what has happend to myself,.... its so hard to explain, and she pin points its,..... its like.... we think the same??? i donno,... so hard to explain,!, i love this poem,... its me. the poem its like is just decribes ho wi feel, i wish i could describe it like you, but .. maybe i would just rather 4get.

[Seerofvisions]

I find it hard to speak about the way I feel, but it comes out easily in words. Thank you for your comment. x

[Seerofvisions]

I'm 33 and still suffering...x

[zozoann]

just lovely...

[Manicpanicanticant]

the empty tomb ran wild and free

the cross was never found

the dogs began to houl

i never ran could not

the gold faced police man came and ducked

that was not it, twas a prosatute, you know

oh, god he says....

[24TheAnswer24]

hey check mine out

[angelhearts3]

that was so so goood

[SARAWOOSH]

Great poem! keep it:D

Btw,

whats the music called?

[greendaygirl09]

I.S.T.T.M.P.W.W.B.T.Y. ;P

[slapingtheone]

that is thats music playing

[AlyciaMalibu]

That's an amazing poem, I hope you never throw it away! Thank you so much for posting it!!!

[CANYONMOON]

SO TRUE

[onlyloveyou4ever]

You did awesome.

You wrote your feelings down.

I think it's really good(L)

[vergie13]

this is really good keep hope alive!!!

[xGothicallyxEmox]

It reminds me of Elfen Lied! x3

[jdpasino]

that poem was touching

[xXxJessiie007xXx]

Omg dis video is awsum =] keep up the gud werk =]

luv yahh xxxx

[biggoblyds]

omg i totaly realte to that poem its really good

[minaskye]

nice

[OrangeOrnage]

The music is very scary as your eyes stare at my soul. have a good day. Good Poem keep up the good work