NEw BEat with SICK GUITAR HOOK!

[killarayne420]

i dunno y but im fienin to use this as a chorus can someone please find me a beat that goes with it that i can spit that would be awesome

[killarayne420]

u got this beat with a verse this would be a nice chorus did u remake it

[pelon13775]

i ma record sumthin to this beat wen i go to norwalk

[masscreation]

dope man this beat is murder i worte a song to it about my son and i

[masscreation]

getting to grips with reality\ it was a cold night met this fly shorty at the clubz cruzed round n the benz\ coped some head went back to my place hit the sheets turned the lights out\ woke up in the morning n she was gorn got a phone call asking for me got on the phone n this trik n my ear saying i got her pregnant n if i dont show she gunah have an abortion\ so im pacing back n forth with forts running though my head shits deeps n im up shits creek im bout to\

[masscreation]

become a father n im still a young buck at the age of 17 still so many things to see got in the s class benz cruzed to middle more hospital to see what all the fuss bout\ i get to the floor she on walk n the room n see this baby boy bourt a tear to my eye\ emotions i never felt before held him n my arms n saw my self in him\ as life progressed on i woke up one morn early for my sons 2nd birthday turned to my side n no one there\ went down the hall n all i could hear was baby crying\

[masscreation]

his mother not n sight so now i just became a solo dad

a year latter on n now you enrolled n school

same smile as yah dady same eyes as yah dady\

u my soul

u my every thing\

n we gunah make it though this stormy weather together

ur my one n onli for eternality my son I love u deeply.

[308beatZ]

ey man if u can send me the loops u chopped from that song and ill rip this shit up lol

[Shavebehave]

Haha...

Very good. I love it!

What about the second part of the original riff?

Think it would sound good too. But feel free to use the original as you want.

NICE WORK MAN!!!

[X13SURSIDE13X]

I was trying to but it was hard 2 loop the second part because it detunes.. i'm also using ur 1sta riff! ur very good at these!

[killarayne420]

@X13SURSIDE13X yo dude did u remake the beat and did u find a verse that goes with this hook because this hook is awesome for a rapper

[oneworld140]

hey this is sick how bout we talk bout that extended version check my channel out got some of my songs on there tell me if u think im good enough to us yo beat hit me up you decide

[Cr33py]

Good shit ese i like that allot homie, do u have a extended version of this? hit it back man cus i realy need someone to make beats i havnt realy fucked wit dat shit u know hehe

[X13SURSIDE13X]

yeah dawg but im working on it.. this is just a lil sample u knoe so mothafuckers wont claim it as theirs

[Cr33py]

JaJa yah i feel u homie, pwes hit it back