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  • dam goku has a sister

  • why in the hell is goku a kid

  • THE BEAUTIFUL STATE TITLE 6 A GENIUS

  • Wait a sec gohan is a kid and pan is alive!!!

  • @NightFallBoys And Janemba's in it.

  • wats the music dat starts at 2:37.

  • @4thFireShadow I recognize it from Dragonball Z Budokai 3

  • dbz ultimate battle 22

  • cool awesome storyline! i'm getting hooked on fanfics now and days! Keep 'em coming!

  • what theme did u use on that kid gohan scene? i've been looking for it for a long time.

  • sorry but i forgot. I think it was a video game theme

  • thanks for the support :)

  • Funny it's called dragon ball yet you use dbz's funimation music you're some piece of work.

  • what?

  • your a fag,

  • stefan, to who did you right that for, lol

  • no not you yamisupersaiyan haha the guy Green pheonix hes so concerned that the title is dragonball not DBZ that he wasted like 20 seconds of his life telling you that.

  • lol thanks

  • song name at 5:31?

  • Boring Fight man Goku Didn't Even hit back he just standed there

  • this series look awesome

  • i know my first ep sucks but I promise you, i got a lot better as the eps kept going so please keep watching. j0ngbl0ed, i made this by buying something called Dazzle. Its a lot to explain. If, you're really interested, PM me, and ill tell you all the details, ok?

  • how did you make this ?

  • Wow, I'd say this is pretty great! Solid core storyline and everything!

    I'm glad I subscribed :D

  • Copy and Paste on different videos Hey everyone let's go around telling people about quest for the zswords since Dman does such a good job he should deserve more credit

  • great

  • nice but ur edits have to be a bit more good with some really good text

    overall i like how you progressed its a good storyline anyway

  • nice episode seems a bit rushed though. next time i tihn kyo ushou lalso have the text bigger i had some trouble reading it

  • nice man this story is very interesting

  • really good first ep. i like the storyline.

    And i think its fine if you continue to fight the com. until you get the hang of editing then you can use 2 controlers and plan out a fight, but what your doing now is fine(its what i did)

    i also thought the text was fine, if anything just make it a little bigger, but thats not a big deal....good job and keep it up 5/5

  • ok will do sorry. im still new at this but thanks for the support

  • good story line try to make the text al little longer i thought goku and pan were going to die overall 5/5

  • great

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