First shot last about 45 seconds and you zoom in and out like 3 times??? WTF
what with saying goodbye like 10 times everytime you get a package
whats with the dialogue cutoff mid sentence from postal lady
why is the character angry about receiving free packages?? is it because they are clearly empty boxes??judging by the sounds and the way the character holds them eg. plasma screen tv with one hand above head.
I've only touched the surface of the possible areas for improvement, you should find a honest critic to appraise your work before uploading any future vidoes.
NO i dont think. Why enter this stuff? no point.
alexmatheson1337 2 years ago
inadiquate brain activity or retard???? not thinking is a good way to insult people, oh wait, IT'S NOT.
next time review your comments before you post or you'll look like a bigger retard than the person who launched this vid
robo003d 2 years ago
mate ur about 2 months to late, but thanks for the reply. By the way the film that i helped out on won the competition so yea GG trolled robo003d
alexmatheson1337 2 years ago
Hey man, I still reckon we done pretty good for rookies don't you think?
AhgoXoruree 2 years ago
sorry to be critising
First shot last about 45 seconds and you zoom in and out like 3 times??? WTF
what with saying goodbye like 10 times everytime you get a package
whats with the dialogue cutoff mid sentence from postal lady
why is the character angry about receiving free packages?? is it because they are clearly empty boxes??judging by the sounds and the way the character holds them eg. plasma screen tv with one hand above head.
alexmatheson1337 2 years ago
I've only touched the surface of the possible areas for improvement, you should find a honest critic to appraise your work before uploading any future vidoes.
alexmatheson1337 2 years ago
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