I believe this would've been better without the narrator. It seems like it must've been placed for your class. Was the intro voice the main character? If so, then it's cool. Maybe something to reference would've been cool. But yeah, definitely the viewer would have grasped the concept without the narration and I believe, would've made for a better short. Otherwise, awesome! Keep it up!
I believe this would've been better without the narrator. It seems like it must've been placed for your class. Was the intro voice the main character? If so, then it's cool. Maybe something to reference would've been cool. But yeah, definitely the viewer would have grasped the concept without the narration and I believe, would've made for a better short. Otherwise, awesome! Keep it up!
shotrun2k7 1 year ago
Enjoyed it. I like the editing, and the angles you chose. Especially while he was contemplating whether or not to end his life.
SilentChaos011 1 year ago
Awesome.
That Michael Millichamp is hot stuff.
bocaj1014 1 year ago
One of the best shorts I have ever seen out of SFA. Great Job.
crazyiman 1 year ago