yr tempo abit off in the ending part,ur rushing too fast in the end.
Some parts got " break", i believe u can hear it too...
U are too self conscious alrdy , not even in the song .All u want to do is to show yr skills and technique, but not conveying the msg of the song...U dont even sound sad engh.
If u can shed a tear at the end of the song, means ur realli in it..
唱得好好arXD''''你地聽慣左台灣聲唱背叛遮''''
HiNS11htss 1 year ago
太油 , 有些動作 太怪...
技巧不足.. 主歌, 同副歌 個key 都差唔多. 由頭到尾 無乜變化 .. 聽唔到首歌既層次..
成首歌整體 感覺係比過賣弄技巧 , 但係最基本首歌既首歌既內容 同感情帶唔到 出黎..
請認真 思考成首歌 每字 每詞 每段 點唱 吧
Gommendy106 2 years ago 5
@Gommendy106
有事請教~何謂有變化呀?
如果一首歌有層次又係係點呢?
點樣可以帶出最基本首歌既首歌既內容同感情呀又??~
可否示範一次~thx~~~
powerrangershk 2 years ago
唔得........
AGNES92427 2 years ago 3
小黑, 唱得好
gapgapgap140 3 years ago
the way you sing the song does not fit the lyrics at all... this is a sad song, and not one for u to be playing around and smiling for...
wrathofmight 4 years ago
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dude...u sing really good. i also uploaded my version of this song...pls give me some of your comments... thanks
yhw 4 years ago
you sound like a choir boy singing...
think ur from choir , thts y so "you"
yr tempo abit off in the ending part,ur rushing too fast in the end.
Some parts got " break", i believe u can hear it too...
U are too self conscious alrdy , not even in the song .All u want to do is to show yr skills and technique, but not conveying the msg of the song...U dont even sound sad engh.
If u can shed a tear at the end of the song, means ur realli in it..
come on , u can do it!
D3nni588 4 years ago 2
WOW!! I love this song! well done!
kartepedro 4 years ago