with the section at like 2:48, you have a really good opportunity to drop something huge. the dissonant harmony of the main section is nice, a bit weird, but works. i reckon you should balance it with a phat resolution back to the original harmonies for that second section. combine with drum development, rising synths, bulging bass and low pass filter for ultimate mind fuck.
I can see where people are coming from with the melodies being off in some places, but I can see where you were trying to go. Certainly a good start for your first remix.
I am a HUGE Muse fan, a growing techno/electro fan, and a musician myself. I think this is a fantastic mix and honestly hope you add on the chorus once you figure out how to isolate vocals.
There is only one thing wrong... and that is the really eerie piano chords at one point. They don't really fit in with the song. Otherwise I like it alot!
dude i was watching tv and a comercial came on for a local strip club and this song was acually in the comercial. just thought i would tell you that i guess your famous in west lafayette indiana
Structure is way off, wheres the chorus, you had a nice build up, choppy at start but you should have rounded it into the chorus, i was waiting 4 minutes 17 seconds for it to kick in and then it ended. try again. (this is constructive not an attack, i would never harm another muse fan) :P
Not bad. but like a previous commenter said, the start is a little choppy. "Bury it" and "I think I'm drowning" do repeat themselves a bit much towards the end. Over all worth listening to. Nice beat, keep up the good work! ; )
This is really not a bad effort. I don't think it would be improved by keeping the chorus, in fact for reasons I can't explain, I think I would have prefered shorter lyric bursts. I don't like a complete vocal track put over new drum & bass.
I don't remix myself, I only hit on this because I was looking for Muse tracks.
Not bad tbh, tho a bit of a squelchy overall sound. Perhaps work on clearing it up, try to foreground the vocals a bit, dip the mids in your synths, think about frequency ranges, and which are too crowded.
Also the loop at the start's a bit dodgy, are you sure it's in time?
Good job tho.
Check out my hysteria remix (search beat bob remix).
Would you fuck with off with the advertising of your remixes on other people's videos. Your version of Hysteria is not that good, and is very incoherent with tempo, compared to the this which is very good.
Well, I said that it's incoherent with the tempo which is technically not the same as being out of time. Your sections are in time, they just don't at all fit together.
I like it how you can't actually explain why you think it's right, you just say that I'm 'wrong'. And no, I won't mark your comments as spam, I'm just suggesting that you fuck off before some one else starts marking your comments. How would you like it if everyone who did a remix spammed on your video?
well please explain what you mean by 'dodgy with the tempo'.
there are no tempo shifts in that song so it's not an issue. To be honest, if someone with a related remix wanted to comment a link onto my vid they'd be welcome to. That's why youtube is a community, see?
The general structure of your remix is too loose compared to the original, the contrast in moods is dramatic (in a bad day) was and just sounds like sloppy musicianship.
True, but keep your fucking adverts off and then I will not have a problem in the future. Nothing annoys me more than people advertising their own videos through other people's videos.
this is a great remix. it does need work though... i think the transition at :27 is great. like you said it is in need of a chorus and the prechorus part needs to be redone. lol. cant wait for the new version. so far so good
1:36 realy needs to be fixed =S but the remix is O.K. u should see the remix for muscle museum. type in. muse muscle museum remix, pick the first one. its good =]
I love it! really like the mood of it, but there's some part that i love and dislike, some transition could have been done more smoothly. But this is so going on my favorites!
@exenocap dude the bpm was the same as the original time is running out lol..
straberry12345 5 months ago
Damn. This is pretty awesome.
Diianosaurr 9 months ago
for your first remix it's pretty nice. heard better things but hey.
CaptainLimecat 10 months ago
Well, that part at 1:25 with those descending arpeggio`s was just out of key. Sounds pretty awful, try to fix that
olpaxis 10 months ago
with the section at like 2:48, you have a really good opportunity to drop something huge. the dissonant harmony of the main section is nice, a bit weird, but works. i reckon you should balance it with a phat resolution back to the original harmonies for that second section. combine with drum development, rising synths, bulging bass and low pass filter for ultimate mind fuck.
good job though, nice take on the song.
:)
4juxtapose4 1 year ago
play it a few times and u will get hooked.AWSOME!!
ddtar 1 year ago
play it a few times and u will get hooked.AWSOME!!
ddtar 1 year ago
like the remix...not so much the picture there. :D
cutiecookie23 1 year ago
i like it, continue like this : p
solidleon 1 year ago
reverse the base its fucking awesome
jack101093 1 year ago
I think people are just associating this with the original too much.. Try and see it as a completely new song in itself.. Damn good sound.
DigitaIL0VE 1 year ago
this remix haves something^^
nice
TheRaphiable 1 year ago
I like it =)
Adoriakashite 1 year ago
its a really good first try. muse is my favorite band and ive found some really crappy remixes but this is one of my favorites to be honest
kadajfan09 1 year ago
MAGIX?
micahcolister 1 year ago
This is amazing,
just needs a bit of work.
That pre chorus with those odd spacey broken chords sorta don't work.
But, I LOVE the first minute of this.
A few timing issues here and there.
Try it again.
It's worth a bit more effort.
saifwins 1 year ago
BPM, tune, sync. apart for that like it! good job!
99ktulu1988 1 year ago
This song is scary now x( Lol but nice
csschampmy 1 year ago
i think im drowning i think im drowning (8)
MrKingzfin 1 year ago
If you could turn the volume of the vocals up and use shorter lyrical bursts, and put the chorus back in, it would be near perfect.
Dellazice 1 year ago
i like it :D send me it?
1331Blackout 1 year ago
sorry didnt like it but appreciate the effort and time you put into so 5/5
damez123 1 year ago
@damez123 LOL at your maths.
saifwins 1 year ago
@saifwins huh?
damez123 1 year ago
I can see where people are coming from with the melodies being off in some places, but I can see where you were trying to go. Certainly a good start for your first remix.
0Genus0 1 year ago
nan mais arrêtez, il a essayé, quoi !
TheMarizouille 1 year ago
it starts well but then turns into a dissapointment. X
bexado 1 year ago
pretty ownaaaaaaaaageeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xxxcagriersozxxx 2 years ago
you just ruined an amazing song
cheekygirl2904 2 years ago 2
there should be a 'satisfaction remix" which is like this main electro rhythm.
any1 knows it? i wanna know.
thx
xxxcagriersozxxx 2 years ago
@xxxcagriersozxxx That song is epic :D
MarginalLiaison 2 years ago
the lyrics could be lauder but this i pretty good ^^
ilovesgir12725 2 years ago
I am a HUGE Muse fan, a growing techno/electro fan, and a musician myself. I think this is a fantastic mix and honestly hope you add on the chorus once you figure out how to isolate vocals.
If anything, turn the vocals up just a tiny bit.
JCCasto 2 years ago
I like the main electro rhythm to it, but overall the harmonies just don't work at all...
MarginalLiaison 2 years ago 2
yea this ownz!!!!!!!!!!!
xxxcagriersozxxx 2 years ago
WTF!!!
Pascoolfull 2 years ago
"WTF!!!" in the positive way or the negative way?
xxxcagriersozxxx 2 years ago
sounds like puke XD jk but there can be better ones....or not!
UniSyk0 2 years ago
If the title wasn't showing.... I wouldn't know what the hell this was supposed to be!
MissHarajuku1 2 years ago
screw you =(
emmelbemmel 2 years ago
what the hell is this ! you murdered an unreal song you should be shot in the knee..............twice .
you wasted 4:17 seconds of my life :L
Ciantimmy 2 years ago
wtf is this
RichSaysRawr 2 years ago 3
.......sigh......
Shizzer117 2 years ago 3
the first 4:17 seconds are the worst
tiasarahellielorna 2 years ago 5
sorry but you dont have any idea of music... the melodies doesnt mix good.. even in some parts the timing is out of place..
joselchino 2 years ago 2
agreed sux
smutery 2 years ago 2
This is the worst piece of shit remix i've ever heard.. seriously dude, ur ruining this song! If I were you i would be ashamed ..
Pineeappl3 2 years ago 3
the first remix of muse i really like!
you didn'T jsut fit in a boring rythm into it.
AWESOME !!!!
BouXIII 2 years ago
i write again... IT SUCKS
Fraps32 2 years ago 2
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too slow... but nice
Fraps32 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
best remix of this song on youtube no question
hollowedsoul 2 years ago
shit
abetoymachine 2 years ago 3
too slow. speed up the bpm.
liked the bassline.
with practice youll get it
exenocap 2 years ago 15
The first 30 seconds were the worst.
aspectra 2 years ago 23
If this is your first remix... Woah. Well Done. Sounds good to me!
bbspacemanbb 2 years ago
like it but lacks"polish" that is gained with experience
M1XR 2 years ago
quite a good remix
kinda bordering inspector gadget tho =P
daveisafatty 2 years ago
I LUV this mix:)
ThePchyolka 2 years ago
needs a bit more practise
musicdevil113 2 years ago
you did ok but honestly the repititon is a bit much.
blissfulguitarist 2 years ago
There is only one thing wrong... and that is the really eerie piano chords at one point. They don't really fit in with the song. Otherwise I like it alot!
EmilyAnneSucks 2 years ago
speed it up will be nicer
gibsonrocker121 2 years ago
i agree with gibsonrocker, up the tempo for some parts. but i actually really like it!
YOsoyELmacho 2 years ago
U have it ... u just need exercise...
keep up
PEFANIS1 2 years ago
FAIL
imageignition23 2 years ago
pretty good
callowcomedians 2 years ago
not good
Parosh 2 years ago
nice job mate!
cheers!
WaterGallon 2 years ago
dude i was watching tv and a comercial came on for a local strip club and this song was acually in the comercial. just thought i would tell you that i guess your famous in west lafayette indiana
carramrod232 2 years ago
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MobiusBJGS 2 years ago
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MobiusBJGS 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
actually, its the first time I make such a meaningless commentary on youtube
MobiusBJGS 2 years ago
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MobiusBJGS 2 years ago
Structure is way off, wheres the chorus, you had a nice build up, choppy at start but you should have rounded it into the chorus, i was waiting 4 minutes 17 seconds for it to kick in and then it ended. try again. (this is constructive not an attack, i would never harm another muse fan) :P
Museman05 2 years ago 3
he's not even a fan look at his page no muse in fave bands. he a poser
carramrod232 2 years ago
psh....i dont think i have a muse in my fav bands, yet its my fav band and i know every song ^_^
alguinam 2 years ago
j'aime bien mais on reconnais pas bien la chanson
BigRockeur 3 years ago
i like it :)
CharlieBeeJOSHIEE 3 years ago
0 45
sanim9999 3 years ago
Not bad. but like a previous commenter said, the start is a little choppy. "Bury it" and "I think I'm drowning" do repeat themselves a bit much towards the end. Over all worth listening to. Nice beat, keep up the good work! ; )
LoouLost 3 years ago
this is FUCKING awesome!
fr0mfinland 3 years ago
Well done VERY NACE!!!!!!!!
can i download it somewhere giv html
SPOON2393 3 years ago
You are strange :D
Bertnol07 3 years ago
i don't like it . original song is much more better. why do you change something that is great?
michkolu 3 years ago
hey take it easy dude i dont see you doing any better. nut the original is totally badass
carramrod232 3 years ago
this is awesome! you should let ppl download it!
kingdomheartsfan93 3 years ago
im listening to it right now...
the beginning is quite "choppy"
the verse is badass though...
overall, i liked it. it was a cool twist on the real song.
NorskMexiFry 3 years ago
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carramrod232 3 years ago
I LOVE the remix... I'd love to download it, it's amazing.
Good work! :D
PrettyRaveGirl13 3 years ago
i really like ur remix
i want to download it! plspls :D
alyaWATCHING 3 years ago
yeah good mixinggg
what programme isit??
TotalJames 3 years ago
Niiiice. Program?
(FL owns!)
DooDooDooDoo4 3 years ago
I wanna download this so bad love it though
PuddingDragon625 3 years ago
You can! Its sooo easy!!!!
gothiccitizen 3 years ago
wow this really blew me away @ 0:27, good job! One point though, I would've preferred less small repeated loops.. (especially in vocals)
Nice!
StevDevil 3 years ago
what program are you using?? i gotta know how you isolate the vocals because i use audacity and i cant figure it out.
caleyboyer 3 years ago
u useing the cdj's???
gerry8u 3 years ago
This is really not a bad effort. I don't think it would be improved by keeping the chorus, in fact for reasons I can't explain, I think I would have prefered shorter lyric bursts. I don't like a complete vocal track put over new drum & bass.
I don't remix myself, I only hit on this because I was looking for Muse tracks.
MyOwnPrivateUniverse 3 years ago 3
thanks, i keep meaning to work on it, but i just never have time, but i like your idea, i think i might try going mostly instrumental
OvercastHeart 3 years ago
This is a Pretty Good remix hi
I love muse I'l subscribe you and i hope ya make more
irishlad1420 3 years ago
Not bad tbh, tho a bit of a squelchy overall sound. Perhaps work on clearing it up, try to foreground the vocals a bit, dip the mids in your synths, think about frequency ranges, and which are too crowded.
Also the loop at the start's a bit dodgy, are you sure it's in time?
Good job tho.
Check out my hysteria remix (search beat bob remix).
Beatboxbob 3 years ago
Would you fuck with off with the advertising of your remixes on other people's videos. Your version of Hysteria is not that good, and is very incoherent with tempo, compared to the this which is very good.
Excellent job OvercastHeart!
NorthLimitation 3 years ago
you really reckon it's out of time?
you're wrong.
If you really like you can search out any advert from me and mark it spam. If you're really that sad.
Beatboxbob 3 years ago
Well, I said that it's incoherent with the tempo which is technically not the same as being out of time. Your sections are in time, they just don't at all fit together.
I like it how you can't actually explain why you think it's right, you just say that I'm 'wrong'. And no, I won't mark your comments as spam, I'm just suggesting that you fuck off before some one else starts marking your comments. How would you like it if everyone who did a remix spammed on your video?
NorthLimitation 3 years ago
well please explain what you mean by 'dodgy with the tempo'.
there are no tempo shifts in that song so it's not an issue. To be honest, if someone with a related remix wanted to comment a link onto my vid they'd be welcome to. That's why youtube is a community, see?
Beatboxbob 3 years ago
The general structure of your remix is too loose compared to the original, the contrast in moods is dramatic (in a bad day) was and just sounds like sloppy musicianship.
True, but keep your fucking adverts off and then I will not have a problem in the future. Nothing annoys me more than people advertising their own videos through other people's videos.
NorthLimitation 3 years ago
I'm sure I'm very sorry to have annoyed you.
whoever you are.
Beatboxbob 3 years ago
this is a great remix. it does need work though... i think the transition at :27 is great. like you said it is in need of a chorus and the prechorus part needs to be redone. lol. cant wait for the new version. so far so good
hxcmusician 3 years ago
When is the next version comming!? :D
it's hard to wait
Hamburgare43 3 years ago
wow good for a first try :)
Sapiano 3 years ago
why thank you ^.^ <3
OvercastHeart 3 years ago
1:36 realy needs to be fixed =S but the remix is O.K. u should see the remix for muscle museum. type in. muse muscle museum remix, pick the first one. its good =]
pdfriends 3 years ago
oh god i've heard it, its so good, i need some raw tracks, but thanks for the comment, the improved version will be up soon, then i need a new song
OvercastHeart 3 years ago
I love it! really like the mood of it, but there's some part that i love and dislike, some transition could have been done more smoothly. But this is so going on my favorites!
Give me more! :D
Hamburgare43 3 years ago
Why thank you, ^.^ i may just have to make more now, but alas i must work.
/shuns evil boss
OvercastHeart 3 years ago
After listening a few time i found things i can fix aboot it. an improved version is commin soon.
OvercastHeart 3 years ago