Introduction to the Power of vision-comment, we need your feedback today! :)

[tepapamuseum]

Hi guys,

Just strictly technically speaking, the work on the sound and voices on the second part sounds amateur. Sound level changes should not be so sudden, and same as some people above: the voice is far too... just too much. It doesn't even sound natural.

Good luck with your work.

Florence, web admin at Te Papa

[zabones]

Maybe a little less Robert Stack voice dramatizations, but I think you are on the right track for potentially informing people of the true reality in this world that not many can fathom.

RESIST CONTROL!

[koolmom21]

Sorry I was not impressed. Tell us something we do not know. No offense to you or your hard work.

[novice8814]

So wait, let me get this straight. If they make you memorize stuff from stacks of dusty old crumbling books. The grim, English accent says you will take drugs and hang yourself. Thank you.

[Signzit]

want to know, from a sales prospective?

I would make my lead piece with a little more meat, more tease & drop the people names.

Many folks want to be impressed first by the presenter, then they will seek out his/her names in earnest, this is the kind of branding you're after.

I see your, "the power of self" but until people are aware of your efforts... it appears as ego. just a marketing thing you may wish to ignore. :)

[TakeTheGreenPill]

Great vid! It sucs to see so many people sleepwalkin! Drugz are crazy but only when abused, because anything abused abuses back! so our society has been abused, for a long time, and now its time for LOVE and PEACE! 1 Luv

[FreeDayton]

My take on the second part is that we are brainwashed from birth and when we try to break free some of us choose drugs and or death... slow and tormenting suicide of society.

[korndog86]

the power of our minds are much greater than we know.

[JimTalbott]

I like the first part and that you have included all the players. It is, after all, a team effort. I'm still not sure abou the second part.

[GlobalInspiration]

music by Dj Mental Blue, thanks brother (:

[CDmagz]

smashing!

Luvs from all of us

xox