I remember you making the distinction between love making, sex and fucking. I obviously get how love making is diffenet but I've always thought of sex and fucking as the same thing. What's the difference in your opinion? Is fucking just dirtier and even further away from love making than sex?
Yeah, sex is most common.... it's the every-day norm routine that couples get into. Love-making is sensual, agonizingly slow and overwhelmingly sensational. Fucking is fierce, fast, thrilling as hell, maybe a little 'dirty' (in a good way), etc.
I like it. Ehh. It's a good poem don't get me wrong, I'm just the type of person who notices odd things in songs and poems such as, in the case of this one, "Wow, this person is trying to sex up a person in every country perhaps? Is this a world record attempt?"
Sorry, I mean no harm in my comment, as I said, it's a good poem and I like it, I just can't stop myself from thinking things like that now and then.
I haven't even been in most of those countries. The poem, at least at it's most basic nature, is about how every lover, or even just 'person you've loved' is unique and different. But that, loving yourself is most important and most constant. THAT is what was meant, at the base of it, when the poem was written.
Ahhhh, I gotcha. Thanks for the clarification. I can be a little dense sometimes when it comes to poetry, though I'm capable of thinking metaphorically, sometimes things just go over my head.
Still, it was a nice poem, and thanks for clearing that up for me (Don't worry, even before that I knew that the literal interpretation of the poem my mind tossed at me was wrong, I'm not THAT dense ^_^;;)
lol very cool/different. oh did you mean your gonna be talking about anal sex in your next video? by saying this 'My NEXT Video will be the one debuting my ass and a condom. I promise. In about 2-5 days it'll be out.'
I swear my ass is in it and I swear one of my condoms are as well. People keep saying 'tits or stfu' so I'm just making a compromise. Juuuuust kidding on that last part.
This is good! I think it'smy favourite so far. I especially liked the paris verse. Did you actually write this in class? It doesnt seem like something that was written in a few minutes.
I actually wrote this in about 5-8 minutes from the teacher making a reference to the saying 'When in Rome, do as the Romans do...' And a doodle of the beginning of that statement became a poem.
It took a lot longer for me to decide how it was supposed to be read. The inflection could have given it SO many different meanings....
So true. I watched the video and then read it from the description box a few times. Every time I read it t made me think of different things. At one point it made me kind of sad too. But I guess thats what a good poem does right? Bring out emotions.
p.s. When I heard "when in Rome... I was sure you were gonna say "do as Romans do" after that pause. "I took a lover" was a pleasant surprise! :)
Definitely. It's my belief that every poem should have 3 meanings. At least one that anyone can get from a cursory reading. At least one that can be received from tearing it apart and really getting to know it. And at least one that ONLY the author understands. :-)
Well... I really don't think that a poem (or any piece of art for that matter) "should" have anything. I guess it should be aesthetically pleasing at least to the person that created it but besides that it could be anything. One could write down a series of words that only makes sense to him and even if nobody else gets it, to him it could be a moving poem.
The truth is though that most of the time a poem has just as many meanings as the people who've read it. The same way everybody is unique because of our different experiences every poem has a different meaning for each individual.
This is fun! I like the pattern, the organization of it. You read it so well.
I tend to think that if you keep writing poetry regularly and consistently over the years, that makes you a poet by definition, whether you or anyone else likes it or not.
i really liked it it was very hot you have a way with words
davidfromregina 2 years ago
This is brilliant!
LukeTheRocker666 2 years ago
Very creative. Keep up the good work.
Ilikebikes1200 2 years ago
nice vid..keep cumming them xD..I mean coming xD..
Kurail 2 years ago
Yeah, usually when something that's just born from the inside is restringed by rules, it becomes something to hate.
I think this is a beautiful poem... :)
andreagrimaldi 2 years ago
Thank you so much!
thelitcorner 2 years ago
very nice poem, and a great "animation" (images). Congrats! hope you post more often material like this!!
manuelmeljem88 2 years ago
Kicesie said "fucked"!
cre8edc8 2 years ago
There are many kinds of sex, and 'fucking' describes one kind that no other words can. IMO....
thelitcorner 2 years ago
It's just so hot to hear.
cre8edc8 2 years ago
I remember you making the distinction between love making, sex and fucking. I obviously get how love making is diffenet but I've always thought of sex and fucking as the same thing. What's the difference in your opinion? Is fucking just dirtier and even further away from love making than sex?
fnbetanco 2 years ago
Yeah, sex is most common.... it's the every-day norm routine that couples get into. Love-making is sensual, agonizingly slow and overwhelmingly sensational. Fucking is fierce, fast, thrilling as hell, maybe a little 'dirty' (in a good way), etc.
thelitcorner 2 years ago
I like it. Ehh. It's a good poem don't get me wrong, I'm just the type of person who notices odd things in songs and poems such as, in the case of this one, "Wow, this person is trying to sex up a person in every country perhaps? Is this a world record attempt?"
Sorry, I mean no harm in my comment, as I said, it's a good poem and I like it, I just can't stop myself from thinking things like that now and then.
ZeonTwilight 2 years ago
I haven't even been in most of those countries. The poem, at least at it's most basic nature, is about how every lover, or even just 'person you've loved' is unique and different. But that, loving yourself is most important and most constant. THAT is what was meant, at the base of it, when the poem was written.
thelitcorner 2 years ago
Ahhhh, I gotcha. Thanks for the clarification. I can be a little dense sometimes when it comes to poetry, though I'm capable of thinking metaphorically, sometimes things just go over my head.
Still, it was a nice poem, and thanks for clearing that up for me (Don't worry, even before that I knew that the literal interpretation of the poem my mind tossed at me was wrong, I'm not THAT dense ^_^;;)
ZeonTwilight 2 years ago
awesome
spyders03 2 years ago
it's pretty good.
I'd like more if you please.
keep up the good stuff
willymessenger 2 years ago
Nice poem! Good reading voice! Well matched visuals! Thanks for sharing :-)
Dave256onYT 2 years ago
I loved it!
peppoj 2 years ago
very good. first comment.
DragoKwan 2 years ago
woot 1st
ripsticklord 2 years ago
glad you mentioned you had this other channel, I had no idea.
This is very passionate :) thanks for bringing this to us.
GretchenDawntreader 2 years ago
interesting.
tylerzchance 2 years ago
lol very cool/different. oh did you mean your gonna be talking about anal sex in your next video? by saying this 'My NEXT Video will be the one debuting my ass and a condom. I promise. In about 2-5 days it'll be out.'
and is it gonna be on the kicesie Channel?
thank you!
karramia14 2 years ago
Yep, on the Kicesie channel.
thelitcorner 2 years ago
Wow.
Lukie99 2 years ago
Really? People flag the other one but not this one? Ah well, shows you how retarded society can be. Great job, Kicesie, loved it.
jjaapp18 2 years ago
oooooo!! how raunchy!!!:P
iamlionproductions 2 years ago
VERY impressive!
AngusGibsonT 2 years ago
What do you mean by "debuting my ass"? are you for whatever strange reasons going to show your ass on youtube....
cheftimeninja 2 years ago
See previous response... :-P
thelitcorner 2 years ago
By the way,we fell for the threesome, we're not falling for the ass+condom! :) But if it's true i'm really interested in what they have to say!
fnbetanco 2 years ago
I swear my ass is in it and I swear one of my condoms are as well. People keep saying 'tits or stfu' so I'm just making a compromise. Juuuuust kidding on that last part.
thelitcorner 2 years ago
wait where?
chrian09 2 years ago
This is the truth!of all the great sex out there, no one does you better than yourself. Just you and your imagination
handsuvlove 2 years ago
That's HAWT!!! very sexy and erotic. Great job Kicesie
handsuvlove 2 years ago
This is good! I think it'smy favourite so far. I especially liked the paris verse. Did you actually write this in class? It doesnt seem like something that was written in a few minutes.
keep'em coming!
fnbetanco 2 years ago
I actually wrote this in about 5-8 minutes from the teacher making a reference to the saying 'When in Rome, do as the Romans do...' And a doodle of the beginning of that statement became a poem.
It took a lot longer for me to decide how it was supposed to be read. The inflection could have given it SO many different meanings....
thelitcorner 2 years ago
So true. I watched the video and then read it from the description box a few times. Every time I read it t made me think of different things. At one point it made me kind of sad too. But I guess thats what a good poem does right? Bring out emotions.
p.s. When I heard "when in Rome... I was sure you were gonna say "do as Romans do" after that pause. "I took a lover" was a pleasant surprise! :)
fnbetanco 2 years ago
Definitely. It's my belief that every poem should have 3 meanings. At least one that anyone can get from a cursory reading. At least one that can be received from tearing it apart and really getting to know it. And at least one that ONLY the author understands. :-)
thelitcorner 2 years ago
Well... I really don't think that a poem (or any piece of art for that matter) "should" have anything. I guess it should be aesthetically pleasing at least to the person that created it but besides that it could be anything. One could write down a series of words that only makes sense to him and even if nobody else gets it, to him it could be a moving poem.
fnbetanco 2 years ago
Exactly why I hate that people say there are 'rules' to poetry... some tricks that help play to the ear or eye, yes... but no rules!
thelitcorner 2 years ago
The truth is though that most of the time a poem has just as many meanings as the people who've read it. The same way everybody is unique because of our different experiences every poem has a different meaning for each individual.
fnbetanco 2 years ago
Of course the truth is always stranger than fiction eh?
paul20072007 2 years ago
Haha, yes, my truth is probably much stranger than this fiction. =-D
thelitcorner 2 years ago
i have missed you!
xgobobeanx 2 years ago
nice
googlerist 2 years ago
: )
ECTBWHO 2 years ago
tl;dr masturbating is always best
greenday07ryan 2 years ago
This is fun! I like the pattern, the organization of it. You read it so well.
I tend to think that if you keep writing poetry regularly and consistently over the years, that makes you a poet by definition, whether you or anyone else likes it or not.
JasonMelancon 2 years ago
OMG!! What a poem. This piece of art would get an A+ in an art/writing class. You should definitely be proud of this one.
I love it :)
88Ypsilon 2 years ago