Adam O'Riordan

[Stoeltafelkleed]

dude, poetry needs to rhyme. Where the hell did you get your education? That sounded like something I would have written on toilet paper

[Missleanneiscool]

@Stoeltafelkleed Poetry doesn't need to rhyme. Where did YOU get your education? If you thinks its bad then say that. But don't make wrong statements about what poetry needs to do.

[Dillej]

Good poem, bad recording, bad reading I'm afraid. But still, good poem.

[harrybinladen]

the wind on her breast

[montykerr07]

What a dashing young man-

[harrybinladen]

I agree. His good looks distract from his poetry. He should just stand there and lip sync silently.

[hettymum]

This film doesn't do justice to this very promising new talent.

[ledburyportal]

This film records the poet reading his poem.

[hettymum]

For whose benefit is this comment?

[ledburyportal]

The reader

[scottleeuk]

Good stuff mate, but it doesn't rhyme??

I am a Neanderthal when it comes to poetry, I know!!