eh...well teh sound needs sum real improvment....the actors all talk really dum...the plot is corny...and the fight scenes need alot of wrk ...plus...explosions dnt mk everything kooler
Work on your acting, give your actors a motive, they look so bored, your martial arts looks like you guys were just practicing. Also, try to use a software and deals with wind noise. Other then that, graphics are great.
It's ok but here are a few constructive critiques, the acting isn't believeable, the fighting is a little slow and doesn't look real, the trailer is too long, and the storyline is a little corny.
However the graphics are very good. Sound effects are not bad either.
Vittu on paska :D
Wehveli 4 years ago
The fighting is ok.
AtGgNikke 4 years ago
eh...well teh sound needs sum real improvment....the actors all talk really dum...the plot is corny...and the fight scenes need alot of wrk ...plus...explosions dnt mk everything kooler
xXdaimpostaXx 4 years ago
Work on your acting, give your actors a motive, they look so bored, your martial arts looks like you guys were just practicing. Also, try to use a software and deals with wind noise. Other then that, graphics are great.
OriginalCopy 5 years ago
OK thanks killmonkeys! I'll focus on those points and many more once we make our next film ! :D
LWhong 5 years ago
It's ok but here are a few constructive critiques, the acting isn't believeable, the fighting is a little slow and doesn't look real, the trailer is too long, and the storyline is a little corny.
However the graphics are very good. Sound effects are not bad either.
Overall I give it a 3.5.
killmonkeys 5 years ago
Great stuff... Again! Well Done!
Will0No 5 years ago
Please comment on this trailer! :)
LWhong 5 years ago