My Beautiful Rescue - A Jonas Brothers Story - Chapter 27

[TheGrandJonasFan]

this reminds me of "The Notebook"

Could you do a series with me in it? my youtube name(not my real name) Chloe

IL SUB IF U DO...and make joe kiss me lol

[ayayay8D]

i love them all and i someday want to marry everyone of them but when he kissed her i screamed! so happpy(:

your the best story writer ever

[XxLaraFan4EvaxX]

i screamed and fell off my chair again, when i saw that last bit, i would kill to be lidsay right now!!!!!!!

[mileycyrus4ever]

aw thats presh!

[sweetyhomealabama]

OMG!!!!!

It was really...beautiful,and nice,and cute...

moreee soon!!! please!!!!

[jbluvr48772]

Awh. It's so cute..

Kissing in the rain...

Kissing Joe Jonas in the rain...

Kissing Joe Jonas in the rain next to a river...

Kissing Joe Jonas in the rain next to a river next to the venue you first met him at..

AFTER HE TELLS YOU YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL.

I would have a heart attack. XD

Morrreee soooon!! Please!

Peace.Love.Jonas. <33

-Deanna

[claupretty13]

its so cute!! lol your comment reminded me of my story "kiss in the rain" haha

[ELM0xT0XiC]

awh cutee =D moree

[jonastopia]

NEXT! NEXT! NEXT! dang your almost as good as my favorite author Stephenie Meyer

[00driftaway00]

I totally agree with you!! i still havent read the last two books in the twilight series yet! they were all sold out in aust

[jonastopia]

ya the last one Breaking dawn is the best one (in my opinion)

[00driftaway00]

i know whats going to happen cause ppl have told me and that pinged me off majorly

[jonastopia]

that would tick me off to

[00driftaway00]

it did

now they have bruises hehe

i punched them lol

[MrsNickJonas12348696]

your an really good writer btw

[OmgItsStephnieee]

OMG!

I READ ALL OF THEM IN AN HOUR.

MAKE MORE. OR ELSE.

JKSJKS.

But seriously. More? Please?

[jonastopia]

dito here

[hannahluv13]

Hurry ppost the next one!!!!!!!!!!!

[pinkstarzlover97]

i love this video!!!

[xochocolateloverxo]

plz post the next chapter:D

ur stories r the best:))

[walmartman7]

woo! TIFFANYZ HOTT!!!!!!!!!

[swimxluvxjobros]

Really good!!!!

ur such a good writer its like amazing lol

check out my series!

[shortt123193]

such a good chapter! i can't wait for more!!!!

[Dolphingirl1541]

I Love it awesome job

[Jillygirl14]

love it!

[Robinlovefriends]

:O:O:O:O:O:O:O BEAUTIFUL!!!!

[nicehotticutieizjazz]

awmazing

[saucygirl13]

OMG U MUST WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!

[rachelxojonassxo]

awh.

thats sooo cuteee!. mann i would love to smell joe's cologneeee :D and nick's haha

[funnyperson200]

Wow, you just increased my writing skills. :D You're so good. :] It's totally okay that you're stopping, I did that too. :P Keep them coming tho, please and ty!

[lindsaycrump27]

OMG AMAZING!!

the kiss in the rain is so romantic!!!

WRITE MORE SOON!!!:D

[DanielleDeshongAct]

woah..............

[guitargirl112961]

u made the kiss sound so poetic

i LOVE it

i have been waiting [so long] for the next chapter i love ur series

[SKBproductions13]

I HAVE CHILLS!

[mileycyrus4ever]

aw that was so cute :D

[AlternativeEmoMisy]

Oh... my gosh. TOO AMAZING(: I love this. Make more. Yesh. Now. No ending. THIS IS NOT THE END, WOMAN!! xD I luffle these too much. Gahh. I can't find the right words to say.

[AlternativeEmoMisy]

It's not the end at 30, that is.

:]

[seriouslyohmyjonas]

omg that was totally amazing(:

TOO CUTE.

[mrweisman]

NOOOOOOOO EVERYONE IS ENDING THEIR STORIES! THE WORLD (or just the jb authors) HAS GONE MAD!!!! PLEASE DON'T STOP THEM! I'M BEGGING YOU! DON'T STOP AT 30! ITS TOO SHORT AND THESE ARE AMAZING! IS THERE A WAY FOR ANY1 TO CHANGE YOUR MIND?