A good video indeed....nicely done and edited...however, like MrOG said...You should use 'you' instead of 'u' as this serves as educational video.WE might not want to teach student the wrong term..am i right?
great vid!!! i think you had done a great job..but i think there are small mistakes that you can avoid to make it better..for instance in one of the dialog you should use "you" instead of "u"...besides that, the characters' voice are the same and this can confuse the pupils..apart from that, i think that the video is interesting..well done
A very interesting video!!! It can help students to learn about division in a fun way. Besides that, the voice projection also very good. But, be careful as the voice of Patrick and the man are sounds same sometimes. By the way, it is a great video. Nice job!!!
good job! interesting, simple, educational and colorful video. but the thing is that 'too much words'. it would be better if you narrate the video rather put in words because in my view, children love to hear something that extraordinary; in this case, you may want to insert your interesting voice or create sound that would attract children's attention.well done my friend!
haha...thnks all!!the comments are really helpful...not expect the perfect 1 cuz we r not in the animation field rite??n if all of the vids are perfect, what we should comment on??hihi
lurve the video its very simple and yet full of information. but the audio is quite weird u have the loud and so0o0 slow time,, reagarding the visual,, its alll alright~ congratx
in my point of view, this video will definitely capture the pupils' interest as it is very colourful animation/background. However, there's one part where the dialoge in the bubble seems to be too small,but it would be o.k as you use your voice to read it.
hey...a good job indeed...good usage of animation...colorful and attractive...hmm...i think if the words have been reduced, would have been better...otherwise its excellent...and i really love the part it actually has sound when they walk....children will be attracted to all the colour and animations and the learning is so easy.
Very related to real-life situation where children face some problems in dividing things equally as examples sweets and etc. The dialogue from 1.26'-1.52 should not be in one slide, it should have been shown in many slides to show the stages of dividing things clearly. I really hope that your second draft of this video will eliminate all the stated points mentioned above. Good Luck!
the animation is interesting. young kids would be attracted to it once they watch the video. the content is delivered clearly. but there are some grammatical mistake between the line such as "can I asked you something?"
it should be written like this.."Can i ask you something?" however, it is a good product to teach children to measure (divide) thing equally. nice job CATS..:)
its an interesting video may be there are certain part needs to be improved. for example, the voice is to slow, if it louder it will be a captivating video to watch.
the content in this video is clearly stated. GOOD WORK!!!
An attractive video yet still can be improved. Perhaps, fonts should be bigger and voice should be louder. Simple video but meaningful as the content is there. Good work!
i think the video is interesting interms of the colourful background and the movement of the characters. at 1.27, the dialog is too long for the pupils to read, maybe you should seperate the dialogs.. overall, a gud job
interesting video especially the introduction song.need to improve on the speech and the sound. a few grammar mistakes that need to be looked at.overall its interesting video.
very good real life example for children to practice Maths. interesting that children can join together to do the division. but, the voice is too slow and being overpowered by background sound... all in all.. good job...
Grammar mistakes. Fonts too small, not very suitable for children. Can use other perople to portray the characters too so that it does not sound boring listening to the same person all the time.
Good effort. Take note of your friends' comments - will help enhance your video.
eduvidum 2 years ago
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Some words are too small to read in the speech bubble. Why use wheat? Why not use something local like paddy?
sakinasofia1 2 years ago
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sakinasofia1 2 years ago
For me, this is a good video. You efforts were there. The ideas was clearly presented.
notakakidimuka:
1. Some of the dialogue are too wordy. You may want to change it a bit. So that the pupils will not has difficulty to read it.
MrRadunk 2 years ago
A good video indeed....nicely done and edited...however, like MrOG said...You should use 'you' instead of 'u' as this serves as educational video.WE might not want to teach student the wrong term..am i right?
wenque13 2 years ago
20ths century fox production? ahahahha informative and meaningful video..teacher can use it by pausing and teach! great job ma man!
LuQaSify 2 years ago
great vid!!! i think you had done a great job..but i think there are small mistakes that you can avoid to make it better..for instance in one of the dialog you should use "you" instead of "u"...besides that, the characters' voice are the same and this can confuse the pupils..apart from that, i think that the video is interesting..well done
MrOrdinaryguy 2 years ago
A very interesting video!!! It can help students to learn about division in a fun way. Besides that, the voice projection also very good. But, be careful as the voice of Patrick and the man are sounds same sometimes. By the way, it is a great video. Nice job!!!
Shawndos22 2 years ago
good job! interesting, simple, educational and colorful video. but the thing is that 'too much words'. it would be better if you narrate the video rather put in words because in my view, children love to hear something that extraordinary; in this case, you may want to insert your interesting voice or create sound that would attract children's attention.well done my friend!
acikg13 2 years ago
haha...thnks all!!the comments are really helpful...not expect the perfect 1 cuz we r not in the animation field rite??n if all of the vids are perfect, what we should comment on??hihi
mrmrscats 2 years ago
lurve the video its very simple and yet full of information. but the audio is quite weird u have the loud and so0o0 slow time,, reagarding the visual,, its alll alright~ congratx
ermabutang 2 years ago
in my point of view, this video will definitely capture the pupils' interest as it is very colourful animation/background. However, there's one part where the dialoge in the bubble seems to be too small,but it would be o.k as you use your voice to read it.
NAEmnzr 2 years ago
hey...a good job indeed...good usage of animation...colorful and attractive...hmm...i think if the words have been reduced, would have been better...otherwise its excellent...and i really love the part it actually has sound when they walk....children will be attracted to all the colour and animations and the learning is so easy.
gowri87 2 years ago
Very interesting video. The scenario in your video will sure enable pupil to learn and understand better as you are using a real-life situation. N
dhaya0787 2 years ago
Very related to real-life situation where children face some problems in dividing things equally as examples sweets and etc. The dialogue from 1.26'-1.52 should not be in one slide, it should have been shown in many slides to show the stages of dividing things clearly. I really hope that your second draft of this video will eliminate all the stated points mentioned above. Good Luck!
syahrezacesc 2 years ago
the animation is interesting. young kids would be attracted to it once they watch the video. the content is delivered clearly. but there are some grammatical mistake between the line such as "can I asked you something?"
it should be written like this.."Can i ask you something?" however, it is a good product to teach children to measure (divide) thing equally. nice job CATS..:)
Whitelucifer1 2 years ago
very attractive background and characters. I like the man touching his butt.
Note: Sentences are quite long
Good Job!
avucaldz 2 years ago
its an interesting video may be there are certain part needs to be improved. for example, the voice is to slow, if it louder it will be a captivating video to watch.
the content in this video is clearly stated. GOOD WORK!!!
awienana 2 years ago
An attractive video yet still can be improved. Perhaps, fonts should be bigger and voice should be louder. Simple video but meaningful as the content is there. Good work!
misschuyana87 2 years ago
i think the video is interesting interms of the colourful background and the movement of the characters. at 1.27, the dialog is too long for the pupils to read, maybe you should seperate the dialogs.. overall, a gud job
shamy870509 2 years ago
the song is too loud while the voice is too mild. There are few grammar mistakes especially tenses.
sanzovenom 2 years ago
interesting video especially the introduction song.need to improve on the speech and the sound. a few grammar mistakes that need to be looked at.overall its interesting video.
ufetra7 2 years ago
Interesting video, but could be much better if the fonts are bigger and some corrections with a few pronunciation. Overall, good work!!
amylaifie 2 years ago
very good real life example for children to practice Maths. interesting that children can join together to do the division. but, the voice is too slow and being overpowered by background sound... all in all.. good job...
mrschumil 2 years ago
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attractive....but the font has to be bigger within the bubbles....
fieracomey 2 years ago
attractive...must have bigger fonts within the bubbles.....
fieracomey 2 years ago
Attractive video but need to improve more on the speech's sound. But overall it will surely catch the children attention
azlala87 2 years ago
attractive. but i think pronunciation can be improved like saying the word "has" clearly. good job
kintang87 2 years ago
Grammar mistakes. Fonts too small, not very suitable for children. Can use other perople to portray the characters too so that it does not sound boring listening to the same person all the time.
Viva1109 2 years ago
interesting..however cant see the words clearly other than that its fine..good job.!!
faustina1610 2 years ago