I think you did a great job, not knowing much about film I can't really say much. I know it's a lot better than a ton of the crap on TV today so I would be extremely proud of yourself!
The yawn at the beginning serves no purpose. The toilet talking is funny and original (to my knowledge at least). Dropping the toothbrush was weak. Funny segue into a commercial. The water in the face at the end . . . ?
Omg your so funny and cool John.
Bowers1989 3 years ago
thanks
Kazerone1 3 years ago
TRENTON79 <----- way better!
coreystapleton 3 years ago
would have been funnier if it showed you pooping in the toilets mouth as punishment for when he splashed you
gleegin 3 years ago
That wouldn't really be punishment, as that is what a toilet is for.
Kazerone1 3 years ago
I think you did a great job, not knowing much about film I can't really say much. I know it's a lot better than a ton of the crap on TV today so I would be extremely proud of yourself!
jenine482 3 years ago
nice 5/5
dbzru1es 3 years ago
Very Funny
djmanjeff 3 years ago
The yawn at the beginning serves no purpose. The toilet talking is funny and original (to my knowledge at least). Dropping the toothbrush was weak. Funny segue into a commercial. The water in the face at the end . . . ?
starman2765 3 years ago
Thanks for your honesty!
Kazerone1 3 years ago