This is alright but I think you could improve this further. For example, when the looter was going into the room, he had a hood but when you filmed him inside he didn't... Also, when he said "I ain't been in town mum" at 1:07 he looks up. It probably seems that I am just critisizing this but really, this is good for your first video and for only one actor. But an advice I would give is that when you film a scene take time to watch it over a few times and spot mistakes like I have. Well done.