Damn she's bad ass lol
xXBrendatheVampireXx 5 months ago
LOL im starting to like this story!! ;D LMAO niceee
camigirl270 1 year ago
asome!
123369cutiepie 1 year ago
cool, i just started reading this now =P....its good because i know i dont have to wait for the next episodes. ahah =D
NileyStories0894 1 year ago
LOVED IT :)
GoodGirl28379 1 year ago
awsome!
MrViktoriaaa123 1 year ago
loudwisper new backwords style check it out loudwisper loudwisper he the best under rated
loudwisper1 1 year ago
Awesome!!!!!
cherrydao96 1 year ago
Bahaha, that was amazing!! WOOOOOOOO!, going to read the next one now!! :D
xTheVampireDiariesx 2 years ago
Did You Get The Idea From a Spy Movie Or Something? Lol. I Usually Do Things Like This Right After I See a MyStery Or Spy Movie. AWSOME! MAKE MORE!!
hannahandtay1 2 years ago
@hannahandtay1 haha nope I just woke up one morning with a new story plot in my head
demilovatolover1993 2 years ago
i luved it. make the next one soon plz
dawgzfromthehood 2 years ago
that was breathless! lol
amazing first ep :D:D
AllAboutJEMI 2 years ago
omgggg best first ep everrrr :P
demi is baaaaaaad xD
minimuffinsjemilove 2 years ago
wow... that was pretty intense!
post more! (:
kuddly691 2 years ago
luv it! post soon!!
JonasRox149 2 years ago
that was intense and nice start for a story =)
jemixjemi 2 years ago
haha that was awesome! love it!
AshleeT224 2 years ago
wow intense love it!!!post another soon plz
tina24tinker1 2 years ago
this is so cool i give it 3 thumbs up even if i have 2 thumbs lol
28cantbetaken 2 years ago 2
XD loved it it was so intense post soon
BricelaBMJ 2 years ago
WOW
4everamericangirl22 2 years ago
good wow or bad wow :S lol
the story id GREAT but that persons URRRGGHHH
like larry and him
aww thanks hun haha
ahaha thats intense
PINAYL0VE 2 years ago
Damn she's bad ass lol
xXBrendatheVampireXx 5 months ago
LOL im starting to like this story!! ;D LMAO niceee
camigirl270 1 year ago
asome!
123369cutiepie 1 year ago
cool, i just started reading this now =P....its good because i know i dont have to wait for the next episodes. ahah =D
NileyStories0894 1 year ago
LOVED IT :)
GoodGirl28379 1 year ago
awsome!
MrViktoriaaa123 1 year ago
loudwisper new backwords style check it out loudwisper loudwisper he the best under rated
loudwisper1 1 year ago
Awesome!!!!!
cherrydao96 1 year ago
Bahaha, that was amazing!! WOOOOOOOO!, going to read the next one now!! :D
xTheVampireDiariesx 2 years ago
Did You Get The Idea From a Spy Movie Or Something? Lol. I Usually Do Things Like This Right After I See a MyStery Or Spy Movie. AWSOME! MAKE MORE!!
hannahandtay1 2 years ago
@hannahandtay1 haha nope I just woke up one morning with a new story plot in my head
demilovatolover1993 2 years ago
i luved it. make the next one soon plz
dawgzfromthehood 2 years ago
that was breathless! lol
amazing first ep :D:D
AllAboutJEMI 2 years ago
omgggg best first ep everrrr :P
demi is baaaaaaad xD
minimuffinsjemilove 2 years ago
wow... that was pretty intense!
post more! (:
kuddly691 2 years ago
luv it! post soon!!
JonasRox149 2 years ago
that was intense and nice start for a story =)
jemixjemi 2 years ago
haha that was awesome! love it!
AshleeT224 2 years ago
wow intense love it!!!post another soon plz
tina24tinker1 2 years ago
this is so cool i give it 3 thumbs up even if i have 2 thumbs lol
28cantbetaken 2 years ago 2
XD loved it it was so intense post soon
BricelaBMJ 2 years ago
WOW
4everamericangirl22 2 years ago
good wow or bad wow :S lol
demilovatolover1993 2 years ago
the story id GREAT but that persons URRRGGHHH
4everamericangirl22 2 years ago
like larry and him
4everamericangirl22 2 years ago
aww thanks hun haha
demilovatolover1993 2 years ago
ahaha thats intense
PINAYL0VE 2 years ago