Pages of the book of my life

[007Frankly]

@hohapplebottom

I think it's "pages of the book of his life" and that's where he just stopped at that time :-)

[stevalianarbone]

Great song great lyrics. I wish i had half your talent at age 12 amazing! I think you best keep doing your own songs and avoid covers. Very inspiring!

[A7Xforlife1999]

Hey man,

I didn't realise what sch a good song writer you are

What recordin gear do you use?

its olly btw :L

[bReAhWWWR]

wow,i luv this song,you should write more songs like this,you hav lots of talent, this is my favorite song now =Þ keep it up, you have alot of talent, im sure it will bring you somewhere...

[BellaVita1890]

Amazing. :)

[stringakias18]

dude i wish i could do this:P

[justtex1975]

Great stuff Stephen. Very thoughtful, excellent composition.

Did you compose, then cut separate guitar, drums & voice tracks, then mix this yourself? If so, very impressive.

I'll be watching your page & hoping the best for you. Keep it up & don't cut the corners out. In the end, it really all matters.

Tex

[BethMcRobb]

should make more songs similar to this

[BethMcRobb]

Wow, My new fav

[0a0m0y]

YOU SHOULD TRY SINGING but ur really good

[0White0Wolf0]

I love this song, keep it up. My new fave song

[TheDrugMusic]

Mind sharing your story Stephen Fiorentini. The Drug called Music, greetings.

[cijeicj]

the finish with the drums isn't good enough but you are making amazing songs. good job. keep singing!

[GuloFromGeorgia]

wish u succsess!! you are a really good .... )))

[bReAhWWWR]

how old r u now?

[Shannuhtjuh]

i really really really love this song.

it's just perfest, the lyrics, the music.

i think it's just great you made it yourself :O

much love from a dutch girl!

xxx

[bReAhWWWR]

absolutly luv it <3^^

[LaurelsTeamEdward]

love it :)

[bReAhWWWR]

(nothing 2 do wit the song)but ily edward cullen!!!!!!!!T.E.F.L!!!!!

[seancon37]

i bet he moved away, from a girl he liked. just a thought

[CreativeAndSimple]

i love the lyrics. a person can relate to them. awesome job

[Preciosa00Estrella]

im trying to get where you are right now sigh, im just so scared that no one will like my stuff

[Preciosa00Estrella]

wow i love this alot!!!!

[behindtheboathouse]

great lol

there could be better vocals though

but anyway cclassic rebellion :)

keep it up and try harder :))

[azlyna5680]

Nice lyrics ~

[dimm54]

i just found a new favourtie song:P keep it up man

[ssmkssc]

man you is wonderful!!!

[eazy2k7]

You Should do a gig at The Guild,Best place to get Reknown, Ever heard Of Dragon force, or Glamour of the kill, They Got Big From there, If you like, i could pass your name on?

[LazerRaider13]

hey dud u r really goodd i play some guitar my self but i didnt start til i was eleven and im thirteen and i suck but im gettin btr but i do write some songs my self i wrote one aabout a year ago and its not to bad so my friends say keep up the good work

[ainhoaybill]

enserio, tienes arte :)

really, keep writing please.

and tell me when you write or record a new song please ;)

[akidbudak123]

i love the lyrics!

[girlylolita]

WTF

THIS SONG'S GREAT =O!!

[yugiohpokemon101]

a better name would be:

pages from the book of my life :)

juat aYIN

[moscowgirl03]

nice !!

[quiksilvr112394]

dude u are amazing!!!!

[Excuseify]

This song gives me such a nostalgic feeling; and that's great that you can reach out so far with a few words. It's sweet, really bitter sweet. I like it. You'll...definitely get somewhere, and that's from the bottom of my, well, intuition...and heart! Don't stop trying, you're brilliant.

[koolkat1784]

i give u gazzilion stars! you ROCK dude n keep ROCKIN'!!!

[AlisonMartinMusic]

i love this song... its really good (:

[jaggie1990]

hey steve man its tp well done on this one dude gr8 song

[ScissorsSC]

nice

[odoityourself]

WOW.... .............

[sargentcocks]

Man I love this song.

You are a fucking genius.

[TopCoolCat]

Hi dude me again.

Very nice original tune.

5 Star.

[deathisourdownfall]

im subscribing ur very good

[SacajaweaX]

Dude, I like it. If you were only 12 when you wrote this song (music and all) you're going to be great. Keep at it and don't give up!

[Aparition42]

wish I'd been this good when I was twelve. Everything I wrote back then is just embarrassing.

[OneOfTheVampires]

Awesome! :D

[bonestilly]

dude ur awsome im

[Katiz7]

Excellent.

[killerwolfje]

Amazing! I sure will be a fan of you :D!!

Awsome music and lyrics not to forgot that great voice you have!

[chilli17]

I love that song. It's so deep. And the lyrics are just brilliant! :)

[EelizabethBathog]

I like it good work! whould love to get it on a cd ore on my MP4=3

[thankGodforDavidG]

I like this very much, good music, nice vocals, great lyrics. keep rokin !

[XxTheBethCxX]

awesome song dude i love to sing myself but i'll never be this goodx

[lootweb]

Fantastic, Stephen!

Reminds me Geddy Lee, that certainly was not as good with your age.

[MrScottey]

To all the people asking for new stuff, hes actually got a few new songs, but youtube is being a fag and isnt accepted the files, so please bare with him.

@Music, Love it man :) Keep up the keep work x

[elliobot]

Sweet.

[NeichaMooonfire]

nice guitar

[tigersquishy]

u are so inspiring. i write songs too but probably not as gd as u stephen... i love what u sing about.

[TheJoker14132]

Nice man. I like your sound, I find it unique.

[DVGaleon]

Fab Steven! Didn't realize you are so talented...Got anything newer?

[abilaveen]

dude i luv ur lyrics they are soo cool!!! i think u should write more songs so that people on youtube can enjoy them. Ur awesome!!!!!

[sophiepraed]

you are awesome and i'd as a singer myself i woud LOVE to hear more songs like this...... carry on writing :)

[dianeiles]

Yes, I should have spelt it right !!

But what about his music ?? I LOVE IT !!! That is more important !!!

Where is your comment about that , Skatraman???

By the way a sentence starts with a capital letter !! So check out the m on your maybe.

[nameless954]

i got this link on the video choclate rain and found out this video in some comments you posted no some other videos. Well all i have to say is that you have potential and wish that you can continue to work hard to continue to bring more good music out of you

[101Volts]

Before anyone replies, I'm not judging the song based on how old it is. I don't care about the age of songs, I just want to hear if he improved his vocals since this recording.

[skaeterkid]

me too..........

[101Volts]

Could you upload something that is more up to date? I mean, This was recorded three years ago. I'd like to hear something from you much more recent, Like in the last month.

[xoLoveTwilightox]

This kid is awesome he is 15 and he sang acoustic on K-C 101 this morning he's awesome!!!!!

[shadowofanight]

i found about u about 5 mintes ago when i saw your comment on some vid and i gave it a thumb down.[spam]. I wanted to say i am sorry.

this is phenomenal. Fantastic lyrics!!

Great great great job!!!

I want more.

[Julius3365]

I really like this song, especially when the distorted guitar rocks out... well done mate!

[peterj2o]

Omg dude love your lyrics man, i write songs myself and have been doing so since i was about 11, and my lyrcis are really really similar to yours, your feelings on things are just like mine, keep it up man your really good!

[nightvish1993]

u r really good! keep going! :)

[Crufflespugchen]

Woweee :D

Ha I like love him :)

<3

[paramorewhore1]

Wow

your Amazing

*mesmerized*

iloveyour voice

[Baugher117]

Dud your awesome!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!

[dianeiles]

Forgot to say respect Steven !!!

Ignore any negative comments , its usually jeolousy!!!

[dianeiles]

I loved this !!! Left me wanting to hear much more!!!

[erikternsjo1]

nice!!!!! 5*

[patsyberet]

impressive.

[l0lma0mgtf0mfg]

U  S U C K >>> jks ur good :D

[kvaraba]

i like your song ;) it's nice and ur voice is lovely ;D

[IronHeart90]

nice... with a bass guitar it would sound awesome... :)

[Darkdevil1584]

so true.. but this is to slow for my metal soul

[dotschi00014]

jep.

good song. but too slow ;D

[sadmoon108]

very nice. keep it up and u will get there.

dont listen to those who say u need to change ur lyrics because they don't understand them. i understood every word. so write the way u want to write them.

[xtongueoftoxinsx]

oh this is cool but i give you honest opinion--if yu vaulted your voice higher at certaian parts and made the lyrics less ummm smart bcause i have no idea what some of them mean but otherwise for ppl who listen to this stuff its great!!!!keep going and dont give up!!

[airidys]

i'm listening you everyday, you are just simple awesome :)  respect

[NaNaa707]

hey Stephen, what do you plan to do next? Make music, I get that, but are you going to try and become famous? Or just make music and watch if anything happens? 'Cause you seriously have talent. This is something what I would love to hear from the radio, I love this song very much. I've got my own dream too, so I hope you achieve yours!

[hknuddv]

good... i just think that the lyrics are trying too hard.

still an awesome song (i couldn't do it lol)

just too many lines of tought with the lyrics....

never give up, seriously you have the raw talent missing from most modern musicians...

[NSASTAR]

u should go the X factor or britain's got talent m8!

[iFlipFlop25]

I can't believe that you were just 12, i don't believe that, but nice song!

[StephenFiorentini]

12 years old, and the song was written the day before I had to perform at Caird Call Dundee for the first time.

Thanks

Steve

[Mrcj1959]

keep working it kid...you got talent. You just need a little more life under your belt but it will happen.

[qwertyzml]

7 stars!!!!!

[wickham777]

hahahaha 69 ratings

[LeeRushGEE]

Great voice. Guitarplay and drums. It works xD

[234satan666]

You really got Talent

[sciabolona]

complimenti 6 bravo

[energizerbelgium]

it's fine, it's realy great, but i think your chorus could be a little better :D

Grtz

[thebrightdreams]

I liked this one more!!

Maybe cause it was kinda classic and that's what i like :p

But keep On going, you do great!!

[nicksoccerstar266]

I agree with hollywoodchic, stick to one genre... I say classic rock...

[TopCoolCat]

Man you are fucking great!!!

Good Luck you deserve it.

[lordy500]

i disagree, jo bonamassa does blues, rock and coutry. Listen to him, he'll prove that moving in a one genre direction is poor choice

[hollywoodchic3101]

hey your really great. you need to work on ur mixing some, my brother is also really into music and plays the guitar and sings so i have some experience in music. yeah the mixing covers up your voice. and also youre great kid keep going, but really tone down on back instruments and pick a genre. dont go rock, then somewhat country then blues. keep it one way.

[ukeplay123]

whatever. He shouldn't stick to one genre because that closes the doors to everything else. He should explore EVERYTHING. Like the Beatles, Led Zeppelin, The White Stripes, I could go on.

[QWERTY1428]

u should so go on britains got talent if u havent made it yet (which i doubt so much since you have so much talent)

[231294kgb]

yeessir. ^^ great shit. usually i only hear rap. but a frend of mine showed my this an its great! ... you have to know i live in ny. =D go on litte man! save the music!

[tokiohotebillkaulitz]

ok i love da song the background music instrumentals but i think u need to balance ur voice out btw i am 12 lol

[rashkavar]

Wow. You wrote and played that while you were 12? Nice!

[Dragon2sword]

That was amazing.

[MorphosisBassist]

The bass sound got some weak ... sry if i wrong

[StephenFiorentini]

Thats because there is no bass on it lol

there is only one guitar in this song,

and i had to play rhythm,lead, and bass, all on the same guitar and at the same time

Thanks

Steve

[duelforce1]

Brilliant song dude some guy commented another video recomending people to check your music out Im glad I did sounds well good.

Only thing I wasnt sure on was the way you seem to be putting on a slight american accent. Apart from that it was sweet as

[ParkourDenmark]

Did u see that comment on: Green day - Know your enemy

Well i did , and i just cheked it out :D

[robbieofdoom]

(I'm aware you're now 16, but I'l lcomment as if this was current)

You're a great lyricist, I imagine once your voice matures aswell, you'll be going places- until then, hold tight :D

[Beefcake287]

nice song

[Sodlig]

Awesome, keep it up.

[pieman69please]

sounds good dude

[Minaud0]

WOW you are amazingly TALENTED!!! keep it up mate!!! and for the people who said you sucked their ears where obviously painted on!!!

[PhilGizzle]

Wow... Really nice, hear ur voice for 1min and i love it ! nice ! Keep it up

[Shulangot]

nice! compose more please! hehe

[wizwizzey]

Yeah, i agree with everyone. You do have talent...keep it up kid....dont give up. i know ull make it someday if you dont quit

good luck!

[theyuyu]

holy shit dude...... this is daym sick,

ya good, for real man

[macaronyfairy]

oh my god

bloody hell you are so talented!

keep it up

i really want to hear more from you

xx soph

[shannymx]

Wow if u wrote this u r one talented guy seriosuly ur lyrics had meaning and ur music was great too im subbign and watching ur other vid xx

[Bus1588]

wtf these words can't have been written by a twelve year old.

[StephenFiorentini]

They were mate, and i know, i wrote them

Thanks

Steve

[ruth7784]

Why are people always suprised lol, kids have talent as well you know! I remember what went on in my head at that age, I was writing poetry at that age and all I got was "did you really write that", "you must have an old soul" and "you're really intense, for a kid" lol. It was irritating and patronising!! lol. I'm not being funny with ya lol, but I felt defensive towards Steve just then so I had to say what I was thinking :-) X

[mencot89]

hey i thought this is great for a young singer like you.and you're serious about making music.good luck! =)

[Purekill500]

nice job dude =) you do really good lol keep it up make new songs =)

[Adz1155]

TheMaskTV

I agreeeee!

just keep practising! (:

[coolmurr]

I totally love this, it's amazing. Anyway I can download XD

[MarkieFan200]

Thats better than i expected it to be!!! Keep up the good work!!!

[TheMaskTV]

I thought you where spamming when you sid you wern't spamming but you wasn't spamming. Kid, youv'e got potential. Just get some lessons to make the best of your voice and please don't let yourself slip into and American accent. be different, try in a scottish accent.

Peace out.

[icebergschill]

Man ur awsm , great lyrics and guitar!

Keep on rocking!

[7646586]

Your a true musical genius kid. I cant believe that a song like this came from someone who was 13 years old, its fantastic. Keep on writing son and one day you'll be famous.

[RetroBabyyy09]

Steve Rocks ;P

His music is great (:

So is his banter ;)

xxx<3

[kaattz]

nice, for someone who is just starting out, i am sure you will get better and better. lyrics are ok but always try not to sound preachy. a good effort, keep it up!!!

[HerticORwhitey]

thats fucking amazing man dont sell out to anyone make ur self the nest era of music iam really impressed my friend id be glad to call u that

[Grimstringer]

Nice kid, you still got raw voice, but when your voice becomes deeper it gonna be awesome, nice lyrics keep it up

[tranquilbluewater]

is there anywhere we can get the .mp3 version of these 2 songs?

[SGFVampwulf]

I like everything about the way you sing except the way you enounciate your "R's"

I'm a guitarist myself, not much of a songwriter.

[EmoGavero]

The high voice bugs me in this song, but it sounds pretty good in Kiss Goodbye. This song really needs a deeper voice.

Try getting some recording equipment [if you don't have any already] and re-record this.

You're a great musician, I expect more songs from you!

[Jebbp978]

awesome

[tranquilbluewater]

nice to see some lyrics with substance

[AcDcDrummerJake1215]

on that cymbal comparing thing u said tell me wat you think i think your cymbals sound ALITTLE dry but it doesnt sound bad

[bridson10ak]

u need to get a new drummer.timing is way out.u need a decent sound engineer to put track together n stuff.keep practicing n good luck

[ADHDspider]

Love your voice, keep up the good work.

[DCLugi]

You've got a good raw sound mate.

[BomfuckMcs]

Cool Song and lyrics man!!!

[shufflemonkey16]

If you played all the parts yourself, then that makes this about 4x more impressive. Awesome

[shufflemonkey16]

You guys just need to work on being tighter with keeping a steady tempo, but that's really the only criticism I have. This is excellent.

[StephenFiorentini]

well theres no 'us guys' lol

and plus

it was recorded at like 8am after a long trip to the other side of the UK and i was half asleep lol

but thanks mate

[aWierdo]

Awesome song :] hope you get somewhere with songwriting, you truly are capable of it.

[ilikefoody]

sweet lyrics! 5 star!

[HorrificHollie]

Wow, love it ;]

Your so talented ^__^ 

xxxx

[micwats]

I love this song

i love the tune and lyrics!

Your an amazing musician! (:

Good luck for the future (Y)

xxx

[EmmaFallOutBoy5]

I love your lyrics, they're really good and the song it's self is amazing ^__^ you're a really good musician, hope you get something from it all! xoxxx

[Mad4Heroes]

Great lyrics (Y) :)