Brilliant work, Elly. Compelling, though a line of poetry has indeed been known to faulter in the wrong hands. However, in your hands, much is accomplished here.
Jerusalem is taken, the castle walls stormed. No failed crusade here.
You never cease to amaze me Elly... When I am older, I shall raise my children on your poetry in the hope that they will be as stupendous and talented and gifted with the English language as you are. I shall be thinking of you in my English exam tomorrow <3
Tragically beautiful. I feel the raw pain here "a line of poetry will never faulter
Like a line of men". Yes my friend, it is of great comfort to me too. I am left speechless by your gift. Thank you for sharing your light with us and I can't wait to hear more.
You are one of the few people who I look forward to on here, knowing that I will love each new video posted.
You had me at the first line!!! Beautiful!
themindcatcher 10 months ago
Wow that first ine..and that pharmacy line...nice..
meneedmoney 1 year ago
I think this is my new favourite of yours.
janeczka 1 year ago
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JoSieLove2Sing4u 1 year ago
excellent! definitely loved it.
the phrases you had in there were extraordinary. :)
claythepoet 1 year ago
Your wonderful video poem is a fabulous addition to my Visiting Poets Playlist!
Laurie:-)
Lauriewriter 1 year ago
One drop of cure. A grain of wheat in a shock of chaff.
Easy
ezseeker 1 year ago
Superb poem.
kel2corkey 1 year ago
Brilliant work, Elly. Compelling, though a line of poetry has indeed been known to faulter in the wrong hands. However, in your hands, much is accomplished here.
Jerusalem is taken, the castle walls stormed. No failed crusade here.
twohawksfucking 1 year ago
Great phrases as ever, a welcome return.
dashpoet 1 year ago
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JoSieLove2Sing4u 1 year ago
@JoSieLove2Sing4u Ooooh honey... Elly wouldn't wish that on anyone :P
thestranger11 1 year ago
I want your voice.
Jadabh3 1 year ago
Holy shit. Your best.
koryargonic 1 year ago
You never cease to amaze me Elly... When I am older, I shall raise my children on your poetry in the hope that they will be as stupendous and talented and gifted with the English language as you are. I shall be thinking of you in my English exam tomorrow <3
TofuBrown 1 year ago
love the dark feel to it!! excellent!!
elviradark6 1 year ago
Very beautiful, in every sense of the word.
fellowtuber123 1 year ago
very nicely done
chancellorpink 1 year ago
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JoSieLove2Sing4u 1 year ago
Nice
I like it.
all the best
Kean
keanghiero 1 year ago
Sweet again... faved again... :p
DavidRandallCurtis 1 year ago
Tragically beautiful. I feel the raw pain here "a line of poetry will never faulter
Like a line of men". Yes my friend, it is of great comfort to me too. I am left speechless by your gift. Thank you for sharing your light with us and I can't wait to hear more.
You are one of the few people who I look forward to on here, knowing that I will love each new video posted.
SingleEyeMovement 1 year ago