your gonna make it part 1

[cherichery18]

yh good story excepted seventh graders are meant to be like twelve and yet this girl wearing make up heels mini skirts contacts curled hair WOW :-O bit much don't you think still good story

[blackcherrypie3]

that was real good keep goin

[MiXedBicHYADIGG]

hehehe

Cynthia sOundss Like ma Cousin LmaO.

The descriptIon....Lonq Curly Hair.Light

brOwn eyes -glasses it all adds up! Dang 2001.

..She makin Lance sOund like a Celebrity.

WTF Is Lance gOn dO..Mann

[MiXedBicHYADIGG]

bOttom Field makes me think

Of Bikini Bottom =D Hey Ms.James!

..Shoot i wish that Ma fam tOld me

we mOvin ta ATL...I Would Deff try ta find

summ Peeps..& yuo knOw whO they are xDD

But if this is a stOry & she dOnt knOww whO

..Ma "5 Babies" Are...then id understand.

ive alwayss wanted ta mOve tO ATL Anywayss!

...Ha if the teacher called us Monkeys.

& It was bein Racist...=OO Id blOw up!

[popoil9663]

uh oh lol loved it cant wait for part 2

[MaKia845]

keep it goin dat wuz gud gurl =]]]])))}}}

[kashoph]

yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy­yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy good work

[AllischaGermanyb5lov]

Good story!

Keep goin'!=)

[B5loved]

plz keep it goin i luvved it

[iluvbryan95]

:]]]

[Kidkiddy1002]

gone sis that was good.

[allwaysDizzyBear]

wow that was so gud great job gurl

[blackcherrypie3]

that was real good keep goin