I just wish that he'd come back to me. That he could realize how much I love him. I tell everyone I've gotten over him, but what they don't know is that I spend day and night thinking about him, crying over him, and wishing he was here. I can't believe that he's gone. I just want him to wrap me in his arms and tell me it will be okay, even though it's not. I'm so sad. All the time. I just want him back. Please.....
even though none of you care....the one true love i've ever had juss dumped me. i do not know why. he told me a few hours ago he loved me...what could've changed that fast? sorry for saying it...just wanted to get it out.
its hard to stop some one going out of your life,we cant becuase if we cant stop anyone comming into your life ,because some time we have to consider ourseleves just an options for others, which they might take it or leave it.
why we cant stop any body going from our lifes, why we are so helpless, some time i remember i couldnt stop him when he came in to my life thn how come i can stop him now, or may be i was just an option for him.
beautiful poem! i love writing poetry..... i write about that someone special who i cant go a day without thinking of. its hard not to have him in my arms....... <3
wow butiful poem...... my dad past away on this new years on new years day =;[ i still miss him i cryed cuse he was my dad and he stuk by me throghu thik and then =;[
It wasn't a grammar thing so much. More so, an effort to keep the flow of the poem. Like I said, though... This is really good. Normally the love poems on YouTube, well... Suck. This is far from suck. This is seven flavors of awesome.
yes its hard to pretend that we are ok and hard to let go , specially when you realy love that someone and she or he left you , its just hard to accept,
Because I LOVE HER so much that i am willing to forgive and really forget everything... after this comment i am going upstairs and embrace her with all my love.. i'm not being stupid or what,, its just i'm being truth to myself. I CANT LIVE WITHOUT MY ONE TRUE LOVE... .
Funny how this moved me... well in fact i am not the type of guy.... But when your hurting inside i guess it will break every pride you've got.. i just found out that my wife is flirting with some guy who happens to be her so called ( soulmate) back in high school... IT DOES HURT A LOT especially when i saw the e-mails and archive chat they made in ym.. awhile ago i was thinking whether to continue our relationship or end it up. but after seeing this, i think i consider my self lucky --
She doesn't know how much i think about her. And she doesnt feel the same about me. I think I'm in love with her but I'm scared of being turned down. I just want to be there for her, but I guess now I never can be. Loved the poem - means a lot. sorry about moaning, i just had to get it out my system...
Ehm, wait a secound I have heard this one before? Have you really wrote it ALL ?
Or can it just be some likeness between them. Still Im sure I have heard something very similar to this, I can still remeber it because I think of it every day... :'(
i promise you, it's all original work, but you have to remember that sometimes people go through similar pain. so yes, you probably have heard a similar poem to this before. i hope you liked it anyways!
Love is like the wind, Though u cant touch it, But u can always feel it, Love is carry by your touch, Everytime you touch, everytime you stand by me i feel the warm air, Everytime we fight, everytime you yell, i just wanna break down, But all of these fight cant win our love, Love is stronger then anything, To prove you my love is true i'll travel the sea, Make no mistake, Search the anywhere, give you back your dream, And go to hell with you to prove you my love is true. This is mine
Man that was a really really sad poem...I got to admit..It made me cry....That was a nice poem tho....But i have one question can you tell me what song did you use?
when you find that special somone they became your worl you trust them wd the most valuable thing you have ur heart... u tll them how u love him and how they are ur dream come true...but its not easy to fall inlove coz it takes a risk...
I just wish that he'd come back to me. That he could realize how much I love him. I tell everyone I've gotten over him, but what they don't know is that I spend day and night thinking about him, crying over him, and wishing he was here. I can't believe that he's gone. I just want him to wrap me in his arms and tell me it will be okay, even though it's not. I'm so sad. All the time. I just want him back. Please.....
scar1467 1 month ago in playlist love songs for broken hearts
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umairbinmalik 9 months ago
:( upon reading some of your comments, somehow it makes me feel good knowing that IM NOT ALONE HAVING A BROKEN HEART:(
MsKhryz 10 months ago
"After sleepless nights i welcome dawn..."
Oh how i know that! *im crying* and yeah, guys have feelings too! =,(
solitajre222 1 year ago
Touching poem:) but true and sad:(
Yamileth1124 1 year ago
even though none of you care....the one true love i've ever had juss dumped me. i do not know why. he told me a few hours ago he loved me...what could've changed that fast? sorry for saying it...just wanted to get it out.
kiwifruit44 1 year ago
its hard to stop some one going out of your life,we cant becuase if we cant stop anyone comming into your life ,because some time we have to consider ourseleves just an options for others, which they might take it or leave it.
happyhiyya 1 year ago
why we cant stop any body going from our lifes, why we are so helpless, some time i remember i couldnt stop him when he came in to my life thn how come i can stop him now, or may be i was just an option for him.
happyhiyya 1 year ago
@happyhiyya Bunny boiler alert!!!! Once you enter her house you never leave!!!!
wordsofwisdom2009 1 year ago
good :(
TheBrothersVideo 1 year ago
Really lovely poem and the music is nice,, my eyes filled up.
markirish37 1 year ago
That was really good...
Ravengence 1 year ago
beautiful poem! i love writing poetry..... i write about that someone special who i cant go a day without thinking of. its hard not to have him in my arms....... <3
LPJDMJPOTC 2 years ago
wow butiful poem...... my dad past away on this new years on new years day =;[ i still miss him i cryed cuse he was my dad and he stuk by me throghu thik and then =;[
Kittle8777 2 years ago
That's beautiful! I'm a poet too! I loved it! :)
kcam311 2 years ago
good job wow i lovecd it
Freshhy17 2 years ago
beautiful. whats the name of this song????
SevenEleven901 2 years ago
good job..
AbS2Sweet 2 years ago
very strong
13notgood 2 years ago
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nice song man.can anyone check out my original song thax
coldvamp6 2 years ago
you are beautiful inside :)
strike3yurgood 2 years ago
what's this song called?
LOVExTWIRL 2 years ago
wow....such a heart touching poem..
TheDreemgirl 2 years ago 6
~very beautiful~
sweetblessingangel 2 years ago
i like it
aries06able 2 years ago
really like this poem great job X
XpoetryX101 2 years ago
Gorgeous! I am quite surprised at the word choice and depth, considering it rhymes. Great job once again!
ChromeWorks64 2 years ago
yhhh i agree, it touched me ....... very gd, very emotional :)
MrMyhellotoeverygirl 2 years ago
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MrMyhellotoeverygirl 2 years ago
Wow. Just wow!
OMG! Lol. No that was really awesome, and you chose the track so well it goes with it so good... omg lol... that touched me inside.
I'm a poet too... I just recently started up my channel so if you wanna take a look you might find something you can relate to there.
Hehe great video! 5 star, favourite ;)
PoemsOfTheSoul 2 years ago
That was Really awesome
Basszz0002 2 years ago
yeah dude.. i feel ya thats how i feel
fspopshuv 2 years ago
well done. You're very good!
RestlessWriter 2 years ago
I'd change "seems" to "seemed" but this is really good! Five stars.
ShatteredPuzzle 2 years ago
ah, grammar never was my forte! thanks for watching!
cocoloco246 2 years ago
It wasn't a grammar thing so much. More so, an effort to keep the flow of the poem. Like I said, though... This is really good. Normally the love poems on YouTube, well... Suck. This is far from suck. This is seven flavors of awesome.
ShatteredPuzzle 2 years ago
thanx alot this poem means a lot...life is full off heartbreaks thanx for makin me realize that
RASHIDA718 2 years ago
beautiful poem.
and sadly, i can relate ):
closerrfaceee 2 years ago
dude, i went 2 fucking years. :\
rishahahah 2 years ago
all your hearts will heal..be patient..and you will see.. please be patient
strongtheme 2 years ago
wow the poem was so sad it made me cry!
RainbowSprinkle123 2 years ago
exactly how i feel... why? why? i'll never understand... you walked away and broke my heart... how will it ever heal?
o0ThePeach0o 2 years ago 2
god damn dude
seminolman15 2 years ago
I Love your style of how the Poem was written very Strong hearted to say such a real thing like that Very Amazing and So many people can relate too!!
writetosandra 2 years ago
that really touched me.
Brookagal123 2 years ago
what a true love!
loveuhillal 2 years ago
im actully crying...you cant heal a broken heart...it hurts..alot
emmagirl567 2 years ago 2
im crying right now..that poem is so sad
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jiveshbhatti 2 years ago
Respect
michelleaimee92 2 years ago
yes its hard to pretend that we are ok and hard to let go , specially when you realy love that someone and she or he left you , its just hard to accept,
asalistics 2 years ago
holy shit
I am crying right now
kboss2011 2 years ago
fuck you, just fuck off
sweet518 2 years ago
this inspired me
thats how good it is =]
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urbanManny09 3 years ago
I miss you nan! This really touches me! Love it! When i just listen to this song, like a slideshow of memories floods my mind!
BloodPoppy 3 years ago
thats beautiful i feel ya and the sad part is this is 4 months later and its not any easier
mandms12566 3 years ago
Because I LOVE HER so much that i am willing to forgive and really forget everything... after this comment i am going upstairs and embrace her with all my love.. i'm not being stupid or what,, its just i'm being truth to myself. I CANT LIVE WITHOUT MY ONE TRUE LOVE... .
xenonhid21 3 years ago
Funny how this moved me... well in fact i am not the type of guy.... But when your hurting inside i guess it will break every pride you've got.. i just found out that my wife is flirting with some guy who happens to be her so called ( soulmate) back in high school... IT DOES HURT A LOT especially when i saw the e-mails and archive chat they made in ym.. awhile ago i was thinking whether to continue our relationship or end it up. but after seeing this, i think i consider my self lucky --
xenonhid21 3 years ago
She doesn't know how much i think about her. And she doesnt feel the same about me. I think I'm in love with her but I'm scared of being turned down. I just want to be there for her, but I guess now I never can be. Loved the poem - means a lot. sorry about moaning, i just had to get it out my system...
ToteTaube 3 years ago 5
this is beuatiful.. Made me cry :( I Love you Grant.. x always :( x
Lilstarx90x 3 years ago
that was really good
paintball4symbolizm 3 years ago
it has a deep meaning...... it makes me cry
Summercruise2008 3 years ago
hey that was really good.
bobbiesmonkeygurl 3 years ago
wow your poetry was so simple but yet touching the heart! good work
fearlessaltaf 3 years ago
Ehm, wait a secound I have heard this one before? Have you really wrote it ALL ?
Or can it just be some likeness between them. Still Im sure I have heard something very similar to this, I can still remeber it because I think of it every day... :'(
GTAspelaren 3 years ago
i promise you, it's all original work, but you have to remember that sometimes people go through similar pain. so yes, you probably have heard a similar poem to this before. i hope you liked it anyways!
cocoloco246 3 years ago
swishabiz 3 years ago 3
that's beautiful. is it from a true life experience?
cocoloco246 3 years ago
no its just a poem i wrote.
swishabiz 3 years ago
nice poem. you made me cry):
miqmulle 3 years ago
i hope it didn't make you cry too badly! i wrote the poem on the spot because that was what i was feeling.
cocoloco246 3 years ago
Man that was a really really sad poem...I got to admit..It made me cry....That was a nice poem tho....But i have one question can you tell me what song did you use?
wafflez847 3 years ago 2
when you find that special somone they became your worl you trust them wd the most valuable thing you have ur heart... u tll them how u love him and how they are ur dream come true...but its not easy to fall inlove coz it takes a risk...
sweetal91 3 years ago 2
im going through that now...its so hard to go on with these thoughts in my head
yunarikku2723 3 years ago 2
how sad..but its happening in real life..i've experienced that already...nice video..touching...
levyDK 3 years ago 2