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  • This is ...weird

  • its really cool but nead work on camra angles

  • its really cool but nead work on camra

  • hey, well. good job doin this and its good to see a beginer machinama. there is one problem though. when u were in forge mode, we saw a respawn point and it realy didnt do any good with the scenery. but i realy liked the begining part. it was good. keep at it. hopefully you will get better. and i havent checked out the 2nd episode but im plannin on doin it. im not gunna leave a big ass comment on that one though lolz. and if ya need help, add me on XBL

    gamertag: a_sqirtt_gun ( _= space )

  • hey u guys have to speak up more and the and I dont understand is their a sequal to this crap hope not

  • if u hate it why r u asking

  • alrighty noow u guyz have a pretty great story line u just need a little more enthusiasm when you act but overall i give it a solid 4.5/5

  • rvb was better but this is a very close 2ed.

  • Fuck what everyone else says, you did pretty good, RvB was awful when it first begin you're work will getr better. Keep at it!

  • red vs blue is better but this is ot bad either

  • Good work on creating this machinima but most off your camera angels are realy bad and you need to work on your voice acting. Tip: don't move the camera all the time.

  • im gonna have 2 agree with u pris i reckon u should fix the angels of the camera

  • good job

  • My advice?

    Drop the Series.

    Action does NOT work in a game like this. Yes, the campaign had action, but the campaign had a lot more options than you did, better voice acting, and the characters moved more smoothly.

    Look at RvB. It was good because it was Comedy. When working with the limited resources you have, Comedy is the only thing you can pull off successfully. With the poor voice quality, and the fact you sound like kids, you can't make it serious.

    Do yourselves a favor and make a comedy.

  • Thats why theres episode 2 dumbass. sorry but this episode 1 is to find our flaws and we found them stop making point less facts. you dont own youtube or our life.

    My Advice :

    Fuck off.

  • One more thing. RvB sucked at its first few episode and they used the 1st episode to gather comments to find their flaws. We love the story. fuck off.

    Another Advice:

    Don't Jump to conclusions. Retard

  • rvb was the greatest machinima of all time

  • Thats a stupid thing to say as time hasnt ended yet.

  • the camera angles made me dizzy

  • Fixed on episode 2

  • I like this series can i help or not???

    Gamertag: TheSoldier1851

    Yes my username....

  • cool im inside!!!!!!!

  • aww nooboid hi there! :D

  • hi bliss !!!!!!!!!!!

  • yo nooboid im prxldr7

  • the action sequences were a bit all over the place. you need to think them out a bit more. im not sure who the enemy are supposed to be, but if theyre covenant=covenant weapons?

    hope my comment helps.

  • Well, as story goes on it highlights the enemies plan/Identity. Well if you want to spoil yourself jsut ask. I'll tell you.

  • u got this from the new halo book

  • Yea, we kinda thinked about it. then we realize the Fist Of Rukt was left on halo 2. but it was said by the last grunt in halo 3 so.. what the hell? make a machinima about it. :P

  • Nice, but camera is waaaaaaaaay too sloppy.

  • Yea, Sorry about that. we will improve on episode 2. Im currently practicing camera angles.

  • Hmm... great movie.. lookin forward to this series

  • Is this your first one?

  • Yes, so far ep 2 is on its Script planning.

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