hey, well. good job doin this and its good to see a beginer machinama. there is one problem though. when u were in forge mode, we saw a respawn point and it realy didnt do any good with the scenery. but i realy liked the begining part. it was good. keep at it. hopefully you will get better. and i havent checked out the 2nd episode but im plannin on doin it. im not gunna leave a big ass comment on that one though lolz. and if ya need help, add me on XBL
PLEASE DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL GET KISSED ON THE NEAREST POSSIBLE FRIDAY BY THE LOVE OF YOUR LIFE. TOMORROW WILL BE THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. HOWEVER IF YOU DONT POST THIS COMMENT TO AT LEAST 3 VIDEOS YOU WILL DIE WITHIN 2 DAYS. NOW UV STARTED READIN DIS DUNT STOP THIS IS SO SCARY. SEND THIS OVER TO 5 VIDEOS IN 143 MINUTES? WHEN UR DONE PRESS F6 AND UR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR ON THE SCREEN IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO SCARY BECAUSE IT ACTUALLY WORKs
Good work on creating this machinima but most off your camera angels are realy bad and you need to work on your voice acting. Tip: don't move the camera all the time.
Action does NOT work in a game like this. Yes, the campaign had action, but the campaign had a lot more options than you did, better voice acting, and the characters moved more smoothly.
Look at RvB. It was good because it was Comedy. When working with the limited resources you have, Comedy is the only thing you can pull off successfully. With the poor voice quality, and the fact you sound like kids, you can't make it serious.
Thats why theres episode 2 dumbass. sorry but this episode 1 is to find our flaws and we found them stop making point less facts. you dont own youtube or our life.
One more thing. RvB sucked at its first few episode and they used the 1st episode to gather comments to find their flaws. We love the story. fuck off.
the action sequences were a bit all over the place. you need to think them out a bit more. im not sure who the enemy are supposed to be, but if theyre covenant=covenant weapons?
Yea, we kinda thinked about it. then we realize the Fist Of Rukt was left on halo 2. but it was said by the last grunt in halo 3 so.. what the hell? make a machinima about it. :P
This is ...weird
Tyannalyn 1 year ago
its really cool but nead work on camra angles
mcdan3030 3 years ago
its really cool but nead work on camra
mcdan3030 3 years ago
hey, well. good job doin this and its good to see a beginer machinama. there is one problem though. when u were in forge mode, we saw a respawn point and it realy didnt do any good with the scenery. but i realy liked the begining part. it was good. keep at it. hopefully you will get better. and i havent checked out the 2nd episode but im plannin on doin it. im not gunna leave a big ass comment on that one though lolz. and if ya need help, add me on XBL
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asqirttgun 3 years ago
hey u guys have to speak up more and the and I dont understand is their a sequal to this crap hope not
BadRickyRicardo 3 years ago
if u hate it why r u asking
halovsclones1234 3 years ago
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PLEASE DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL GET KISSED ON THE NEAREST POSSIBLE FRIDAY BY THE LOVE OF YOUR LIFE. TOMORROW WILL BE THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. HOWEVER IF YOU DONT POST THIS COMMENT TO AT LEAST 3 VIDEOS YOU WILL DIE WITHIN 2 DAYS. NOW UV STARTED READIN DIS DUNT STOP THIS IS SO SCARY. SEND THIS OVER TO 5 VIDEOS IN 143 MINUTES? WHEN UR DONE PRESS F6 AND UR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR ON THE SCREEN IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO SCARY BECAUSE IT ACTUALLY WORKs
IronMan44444 3 years ago
alrighty noow u guyz have a pretty great story line u just need a little more enthusiasm when you act but overall i give it a solid 4.5/5
Esquobar 4 years ago 2
rvb was better but this is a very close 2ed.
12we3r 4 years ago
Fuck what everyone else says, you did pretty good, RvB was awful when it first begin you're work will getr better. Keep at it!
Rickolee 4 years ago 2
red vs blue is better but this is ot bad either
stendhal99 4 years ago 3
Good work on creating this machinima but most off your camera angels are realy bad and you need to work on your voice acting. Tip: don't move the camera all the time.
pris1883cr 4 years ago
im gonna have 2 agree with u pris i reckon u should fix the angels of the camera
corulez94 3 years ago
good job
jrhSTYLE 4 years ago
My advice?
Drop the Series.
Action does NOT work in a game like this. Yes, the campaign had action, but the campaign had a lot more options than you did, better voice acting, and the characters moved more smoothly.
Look at RvB. It was good because it was Comedy. When working with the limited resources you have, Comedy is the only thing you can pull off successfully. With the poor voice quality, and the fact you sound like kids, you can't make it serious.
Do yourselves a favor and make a comedy.
Rush2201 4 years ago 6
Thats why theres episode 2 dumbass. sorry but this episode 1 is to find our flaws and we found them stop making point less facts. you dont own youtube or our life.
My Advice :
Fuck off.
Kuroda87 4 years ago
One more thing. RvB sucked at its first few episode and they used the 1st episode to gather comments to find their flaws. We love the story. fuck off.
Another Advice:
Don't Jump to conclusions. Retard
Kuroda87 4 years ago
rvb was the greatest machinima of all time
angrygrunt 4 years ago 8
Thats a stupid thing to say as time hasnt ended yet.
SigmaTeam 4 years ago
the camera angles made me dizzy
LoneWolfXJR6 4 years ago 2
Fixed on episode 2
Kuroda87 4 years ago
I like this series can i help or not???
Gamertag: TheSoldier1851
Yes my username....
TheSoldier1851 4 years ago
cool im inside!!!!!!!
iNooBoiD 4 years ago
aww nooboid hi there! :D
Kuroda87 4 years ago
hi bliss !!!!!!!!!!!
iNooBoiD 4 years ago
yo nooboid im prxldr7
thundersaver 4 years ago
the action sequences were a bit all over the place. you need to think them out a bit more. im not sure who the enemy are supposed to be, but if theyre covenant=covenant weapons?
hope my comment helps.
IxianoaI 4 years ago
Well, as story goes on it highlights the enemies plan/Identity. Well if you want to spoil yourself jsut ask. I'll tell you.
Kuroda87 4 years ago
u got this from the new halo book
urpwn3dstudios 4 years ago
Yea, we kinda thinked about it. then we realize the Fist Of Rukt was left on halo 2. but it was said by the last grunt in halo 3 so.. what the hell? make a machinima about it. :P
Kuroda87 4 years ago
Nice, but camera is waaaaaaaaay too sloppy.
wg64Z 4 years ago
Yea, Sorry about that. we will improve on episode 2. Im currently practicing camera angles.
Kuroda87 4 years ago
Hmm... great movie.. lookin forward to this series
andrewp001 4 years ago
Is this your first one?
Masterc712 4 years ago
Yes, so far ep 2 is on its Script planning.
Kuroda87 4 years ago