you are a really good lyricist and your voice is beautiful as well. WIth the guitar, everyone has to start somewhere. I remember when I started, never thought I would get anywhere lol.. One piece of advice I might be able to give you is to use your fingers to mute some of the other strings so there isn't so much buzz and also, it will mute the strings that aren't in the chord. Other than that, keep on writing and singing. You can only get better from here 8-) Be blessed
thanks guys :) i was happy with it myself. it was spontaneous, and that's always the best writing for me. for me, the more i over think it, the less natural it sounds.
though, some great songs have been written after great thought i believe.
you are a really good lyricist and your voice is beautiful as well. WIth the guitar, everyone has to start somewhere. I remember when I started, never thought I would get anywhere lol.. One piece of advice I might be able to give you is to use your fingers to mute some of the other strings so there isn't so much buzz and also, it will mute the strings that aren't in the chord. Other than that, keep on writing and singing. You can only get better from here 8-) Be blessed
nerdyouare1 3 years ago
why has no1 else commented this yet? i still love this song :D
Norksy 3 years ago
that is fuckin mint!
i love your style and the way you connect your lyrics. very inspiring.
you earned a new subscriber!
and i thought the guitar helped actually :)
Norksy 3 years ago
thank you so much!
i really appreciate it.
i'm glad you liked the guitar. i'm still improving, but i can't help writing music with it haha.
urbandavidlem 3 years ago
uhmm ur voice is just pfffffffbeautiful
but the guitar.... i know uve gottn this a lot and that youre new at it. but still, its my opinion, work on it
do nooooooooooooooooooooooooooot work on ur voice, its already PERFECT
Plaxtic 3 years ago
im quite the fan of your voice, and the lyrics are amazing. but im not sure about the guitar. great work though.
jaimecore 3 years ago
yeah im just learning guitar, so i'd have to agree with you there. i started playing in january as a new years resolution :)
urbandavidlem 3 years ago
well, ill keep looking out for you cause i think you'll go far ;D
jaimecore 3 years ago
thanks guys :) i was happy with it myself. it was spontaneous, and that's always the best writing for me. for me, the more i over think it, the less natural it sounds.
though, some great songs have been written after great thought i believe.
urbandavidlem 3 years ago
:D nice! i love it :)
pianoxprincess 3 years ago
i dig it.
mad nice.
InsideOutVin 3 years ago
Great job man! Great song, nice writing :)
aplace2listen 3 years ago
thanks! i'm glad you like it
urbandavidlem 3 years ago