Very nice, the message was projected well. However, there are some important things you need to consider next time. Remember that sound is MORE important them picture when creating a film, the quality of your sound depicts the entire quality of your production; the sound in this production wasn't the best, it was very noisy when music wasn't playing.
You also need to consider what the target audience wants, and who them what they want; there were a few moments where I was cringing for you to show me a certian angle, but you didn't, and it therefore put me out of the zone and made it seem less believable.
Very nice, the message was projected well. However, there are some important things you need to consider next time. Remember that sound is MORE important them picture when creating a film, the quality of your sound depicts the entire quality of your production; the sound in this production wasn't the best, it was very noisy when music wasn't playing.
dayofchaosfilms 2 years ago
You also need to consider what the target audience wants, and who them what they want; there were a few moments where I was cringing for you to show me a certian angle, but you didn't, and it therefore put me out of the zone and made it seem less believable.
dayofchaosfilms 2 years ago
Thanks for wathcing, and thank for the tips
1bobo1 2 years ago
great concept
MEOSHABEAN1 2 years ago
what type of camera do you have nice work
love the music :)
M.V.B Films
MEOSHABEAN1 2 years ago
Thanks for watching :)). I have a sanyo xacti. I don't really know anything else about it, but it works really good.
1bobo1 2 years ago
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MEOSHABEAN1 2 years ago