You shouldnt have had the music play in the begginning as much, Michael looked like he was having spasms sometimes. but it wasnt bad, that first attack made me jump.
I thought the feel for the film had been laid here, and Michael Myers looked quite intimidating at first. But this short film ruined its chances of being labelled decent after the girl punched Myers and started up the stairs and also the lame finish of pushing him down the stairs. I liked the sudden onslaught by Myers though, kinda got me there.
Only problem is that michael is a bit sloppy......he should stab her,at least once....she dont even need to die,just some running from him.....but still its good....next time make him more evil...;)
it was decent , but not great. I liked the mask , and the use of the music , but would have probably been better if you'd recorded your own themes for it. Girl looked really good too! That's a plus. The only complaints I have about it are that Michael moved too fast and he was shown doing too much. Keep the visual of Myers strictly to just appearing and disappearing in the shadows , and don't show him doing anything unless he's killing. I'll rate 7/10
This isnt very good. 1 you should have used something that wouldnt stick to the knife that just looked stupid. 2 she should have lost her accent. just dont sound scary when its english. 3 It got ruind completely when Michael got knocked back from a womens lame punch to the head. And then he got pushed down the stairs by her. What is he a pansy now?
nice i think you really filmed this accurately the way the actual halloween movie was filmed with the parts like the sheets blowing in the garden and michael looking through the window and the way he lunges forward to choke someone :) but where's pt2?
Not bad dude, but wheres part 2? Really liked the acting. If any ones interested check out my Halloween fan film, I only have part 1 and 2 up so far but, it's worth checking out.
Very well done. I wasn't expecting much, but what you managed to do is what JOhn Carpenter did: Mind Mess with the viewer. Great surprises, suspenseful...great cinemetography (love the girls eye blinking as shes hiding)...nice job.
hey great movie. Nice directing and actin from girl too. But as a fellow filmmaker, a piece of advice. At 4;28, she punches him, the sound effect was a bit silly. Use a better sound effect next time. Also, that punch wasnt hard enough to hurt someone like michale myers. She should have scratched him really hard or soemthing.
But hey, pls dont think im bein horrible. I enjoyed ur movie and just pointed out 2 errors as advice. Keep up the good work. Are u hopin to become a movie maker?
Awsome man! great film I love it, I also have the same mask as you, its a really cool mask, i'm looking to buy my third mask soon, i'm starting a collection which I will show on here soon.
Good effort, but your myers didnt work out, the head tilting was way off, the walkl up the stairs was off as well, also when he turns toward the crack in the door he wouldnt do it that fast, study his movements before your next one, since its your first, you get 3/5 for effort
Very well done, although I would suggest more of Myers with most of the movie the girl hearing things and what not, but it was excellent. Good job getting different angles, although, a tripod would be better in some scenes, although the camera was settled pretty good. I hope to see more, oh and check my channel because I should be making a horror film soon.
Quite frankly, I don't know how in the hell Michael made it to England. lol. But it was very, very well-made. My only gripe was the mask. It looked like Michael was smiling or something.lol. But it's cool, I liked it and it was your first time! I know some people who've been making these for a long time and your movie still surpasses theirs! Pretty good. What equipment did you use to shoot and edit, out of curiosity?
hey that was really good. but wheres the next part? if you have one post it cus i would be interested in seeing it. nice job and keep up the good work
I've seen some terrible Halloween fan films, and this isn't one of them! Nods back towards Carpenter's original more so than I've even seen in the studio sequels. My onlt suggestion would be to invest in a new Myers mask, some damn near spot on to the originals available online though you'll have to pay more! Well done.
Wow, that was really impressive! I jumped a bit when he grabbed her the first time. Embarrassing, but I think it's a good thing in terms of your efforts :)
rite not bad at all needs some work as micheal myers wood not be hert by gettin punched in the head by a girl.. come on hes been shot stabed set of fire and run over a puch in the head wont even make him flinck lol maybe a hamma in the head and the name of the movie should be halloween 10 micheal has unfinished bizzness in england lol but its ok well done
say bro that was good i actually jumped when mike grabbed the shit out of her, but the best part was when she clocked him up side the head ya know the "phssrt" sound...classic man
pretty good for a first time. I like the camera angles a lot, reminded me a lot of the original Halloween with the POV shots. Great job with the scare point in the bathroom, i thought it was well exectuted.... my only suggestions would be, a little less of seeing Michael at the very start. Its a Halloween movie, so we know we are going to get him eventually, and clean up the music cuts a bit... other than that, good job -kudos-
Thanks I appreciate all feedback it helps alot. There was no real plan to part 1 just made up as we went along. I have put more thought into part 2 but the star is reluctant to return so get commenting to bring her back and change her mind!!
good music at intro
theLAngeles1 2 weeks ago
Very good!
TVFeiticeira 4 months ago
e esse filme e terror quem concorda
yanvictorcunha 5 months ago
y ouput all thi time int omaking a movie and used THAT mask?
jasongood100 7 months ago
Very nicely done! i gotta say i liked it alot!! keep up the good work and i hope u do make a part 2 for yt i dont see it up tho
DBZTrunksFREAK1 1 year ago
yur mask is ok but no store mask looks like the reaal deal
djrest17 1 year ago
Cute Chick... Lol
godzillr 1 year ago
very nice job
creepyfreak88 1 year ago
wheres part 2 !
dolo013 1 year ago
@gazcarr even if i was part of this film makin it with you , i'll still be scared i probably wouldv juss stayed in tha closet tha whole txme l0L
dolo013 1 year ago
This is a good halloween fan film you guys did a great job good work!
mittens493 1 year ago
You shouldnt have had the music play in the begginning as much, Michael looked like he was having spasms sometimes. but it wasnt bad, that first attack made me jump.
BDpartnercoJM 1 year ago
The only thing I likedin the vid is when he slammed the girl to the wall, lol. and the girl is not hot. sorry
ObiWanSolami123 1 year ago
the chick is kinda hot
zombie161 2 years ago
i like
heartsrlovable 2 years ago
I thought the feel for the film had been laid here, and Michael Myers looked quite intimidating at first. But this short film ruined its chances of being labelled decent after the girl punched Myers and started up the stairs and also the lame finish of pushing him down the stairs. I liked the sudden onslaught by Myers though, kinda got me there.
DwayneMiller 2 years ago
holy crap i jumped when the mask appeared at 45
wyatthall09 2 years ago
Not bad but would like to see a part 2.
Mysticblademastergun 2 years ago
Only problem is that michael is a bit sloppy......he should stab her,at least once....she dont even need to die,just some running from him.....but still its good....next time make him more evil...;)
Hekalunushmau92 2 years ago
Where is your film at. and what have you done if you have not done a film then you should not say anything it makes you sound dumb.
hambrick 2 years ago
I AGREE
heartsrlovable 1 year ago
it was decent , but not great. I liked the mask , and the use of the music , but would have probably been better if you'd recorded your own themes for it. Girl looked really good too! That's a plus. The only complaints I have about it are that Michael moved too fast and he was shown doing too much. Keep the visual of Myers strictly to just appearing and disappearing in the shadows , and don't show him doing anything unless he's killing. I'll rate 7/10
drewdaspriest 2 years ago
Its ok but michael does to much! slow him down
06traskm 2 years ago
Its good.....But you should create a second part,to finish the story.....its awesome in the beggining....
Hekalunushmau92 2 years ago
this is so bad
akroyd 2 years ago
This isnt very good. 1 you should have used something that wouldnt stick to the knife that just looked stupid. 2 she should have lost her accent. just dont sound scary when its english. 3 It got ruind completely when Michael got knocked back from a womens lame punch to the head. And then he got pushed down the stairs by her. What is he a pansy now?
scsarulz 2 years ago 2
not bad at all. It's good. I want to see the second part of your fan film. I have just a question for you: where did you get your mask?
davyjones63 2 years ago
lol the cucumbers are sticking to the knife. this is very well made! 5/5
deidarafan0237 2 years ago
This is actually really, really good. This is one of the best fan films I've seen and the acting isn't bad either.
NoHorrorCliches 2 years ago
If there is subtitle i will be understand :s so dommage I really love Halloween and your film look like so good.
Petitguiguy 2 years ago
nice i think you really filmed this accurately the way the actual halloween movie was filmed with the parts like the sheets blowing in the garden and michael looking through the window and the way he lunges forward to choke someone :) but where's pt2?
johnjw1994 2 years ago
Not bad dude, but wheres part 2? Really liked the acting. If any ones interested check out my Halloween fan film, I only have part 1 and 2 up so far but, it's worth checking out.
Dagonslayer2007o9 2 years ago
y such big ofa knife to cut cucumbor.. lolzzzzz
maria3fp 2 years ago
i dont know if anyone has thought of this i would rent A KILLER TO CUT MY VEGGIES OR HER LOLS
alexmini123 2 years ago
wheres part 2?
johnyboyy17 2 years ago
where did you get the songs from?
pinadjin93 2 years ago
4:26 laughed the teeth out of me, bad hair.
YipekiyayMotherFuker 2 years ago
4:18 scared the CRAP out of me
TheCinemaReporter 2 years ago
Not too shabby, I just think that you should have picked a taller person for michael. and where is his knife?
killleer3789 2 years ago
at 4:42 it scared the holy hell outta me Great film
DXFan1269 3 years ago
this pretty good better than i thought the acting was good!!
AstonishingAllyssa6 3 years ago
the actress is cute
Colts07SB 3 years ago
Very well done. I wasn't expecting much, but what you managed to do is what JOhn Carpenter did: Mind Mess with the viewer. Great surprises, suspenseful...great cinemetography (love the girls eye blinking as shes hiding)...nice job.
ursenbobbles 3 years ago
very good great job on the music and camera
Horrorfilms666 3 years ago
I wish to see part 2. Why isn't it up here?
ScaryStoryFilms 3 years ago
you should of had her running out the door and michael myers grab her back in haha rob zombie
Horrorfilms666 3 years ago
Where is Part 2?
AES90210 3 years ago
hey great movie. Nice directing and actin from girl too. But as a fellow filmmaker, a piece of advice. At 4;28, she punches him, the sound effect was a bit silly. Use a better sound effect next time. Also, that punch wasnt hard enough to hurt someone like michale myers. She should have scratched him really hard or soemthing.
But hey, pls dont think im bein horrible. I enjoyed ur movie and just pointed out 2 errors as advice. Keep up the good work. Are u hopin to become a movie maker?
kingfbi 3 years ago
The acting was ok. But this is good for your first try
moviemakerjames 4 years ago
Actually not a bad film. Mask could be better though it's only a DP mask.
DrenTheLiar 4 years ago
Awsome man! great film I love it, I also have the same mask as you, its a really cool mask, i'm looking to buy my third mask soon, i'm starting a collection which I will show on here soon.
killerpp666 4 years ago
I thought the acting was OK but the costume and mask were great along with the music! Please make part 2!
CamuelPapillon 4 years ago
what camera did you use?
josephchoi 4 years ago
Very Impressive your scene at 4:17 actually startled me. and Its hard to startle someone like me off a YOUTUBE video. good work.
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wacfilms 4 years ago
thats was soooooo scary looking...lol....i screamed when michael popped out and grabbed her....lol....make more please!
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CorruptedHero4321 4 years ago
wow this video is fab! hehe Im such a good actress!only kidding, I did have a right laugh making it glad you all like it ! :)
deefitz84 4 years ago 2
Nice cant wait for pt 2
OfcarcikFilms 4 years ago
Halloween: The Devil's Eyes Fall 2007. Surely will be the best Halloween fan film ever. Search for Martekproductions on youtube for info!!
bigeazy101 4 years ago
Nice mask, where did u get it from, what's it called, and how much?
cowboysfan28 4 years ago
The mask is an official halloween michael myers mask,I got it off Ebay for around £20.
gazcarr 4 years ago
Do you know how much that is in american money?
cowboysfan28 4 years ago
Probably around 40 dollars I think
gazcarr 4 years ago
that's not bad, it's not called "The Mask" is it? because that is sold in stores and doesn't look as good as that one
cowboysfan28 4 years ago
Its by Don Post I think they make replica masks try that.
gazcarr 4 years ago
@gazcarr aye 4:17 was really qood it scared tha shxt out of me .
dolo013 1 year ago
Not bad at all. i enjoyed this very much. What kind of camera did you use. Me and my brothers are maing one as well. Any pointers.. Thanx
TheTNA55 1 year ago
dude that was fucking awesome!
i have a similar closet scene in my halloween movie
JakeUnrated 4 years ago
This was great....i also make horror movies go check them out!
CoreyChinnis 4 years ago
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bigeazy101 4 years ago
Good effort, but your myers didnt work out, the head tilting was way off, the walkl up the stairs was off as well, also when he turns toward the crack in the door he wouldnt do it that fast, study his movements before your next one, since its your first, you get 3/5 for effort
bigeazy101 4 years ago
more!!!
STEF54 4 years ago
Very well done, although I would suggest more of Myers with most of the movie the girl hearing things and what not, but it was excellent. Good job getting different angles, although, a tripod would be better in some scenes, although the camera was settled pretty good. I hope to see more, oh and check my channel because I should be making a horror film soon.
cowboysfan28 4 years ago
Quite frankly, I don't know how in the hell Michael made it to England. lol. But it was very, very well-made. My only gripe was the mask. It looked like Michael was smiling or something.lol. But it's cool, I liked it and it was your first time! I know some people who've been making these for a long time and your movie still surpasses theirs! Pretty good. What equipment did you use to shoot and edit, out of curiosity?
gorboy 4 years ago
Hey thanks for the feedback. It was shot with a standard jvc digicam and edited using iMovie.
gazcarr 4 years ago
very nice very nice
ONEFilmInc 4 years ago
hey that was really good. but wheres the next part? if you have one post it cus i would be interested in seeing it. nice job and keep up the good work
rayjig3 4 years ago
I've seen some terrible Halloween fan films, and this isn't one of them! Nods back towards Carpenter's original more so than I've even seen in the studio sequels. My onlt suggestion would be to invest in a new Myers mask, some damn near spot on to the originals available online though you'll have to pay more! Well done.
niallon 4 years ago
Wow, that was really impressive! I jumped a bit when he grabbed her the first time. Embarrassing, but I think it's a good thing in terms of your efforts :)
originalsteven 4 years ago
nice acsent 4 real i like it. where do u live?
RUMELSKIN 4 years ago
Cheers,I live in sunny England near Liverpool.
gazcarr 4 years ago
not bad! I like it.
drewdaspriest 4 years ago
want to see a good halloween plus more videos check out my profile.
jkka 4 years ago
eh.....an england gir in a Michale myers thing....akward
lushlust 4 years ago
Not bad.
the only flaw is its a little bit too dark.
thelegendofjerry 4 years ago
I like it, Myers takes Irland....
claudiaalpert 4 years ago
i liked it was cool i sort of got scared anyways good job
zacobsessed28 4 years ago
rite not bad at all needs some work as micheal myers wood not be hert by gettin punched in the head by a girl.. come on hes been shot stabed set of fire and run over a puch in the head wont even make him flinck lol maybe a hamma in the head and the name of the movie should be halloween 10 micheal has unfinished bizzness in england lol but its ok well done
TerminatorGary 4 years ago
say bro that was good i actually jumped when mike grabbed the shit out of her, but the best part was when she clocked him up side the head ya know the "phssrt" sound...classic man
mixedsuperman 4 years ago
oh im a dumbass, i guess where he jumps out isnt the bathroom, its by the front door... *smacks head* boy do i feel retarded.
DJX187 4 years ago
pretty good for a first time. I like the camera angles a lot, reminded me a lot of the original Halloween with the POV shots. Great job with the scare point in the bathroom, i thought it was well exectuted.... my only suggestions would be, a little less of seeing Michael at the very start. Its a Halloween movie, so we know we are going to get him eventually, and clean up the music cuts a bit... other than that, good job -kudos-
DJX187 4 years ago
why was he so weak? other than that, great fan film, could of been longer, mine isnt bad, I'll post a video reply...
luckyluke 4 years ago
nice job! although I personally think Michael could've been a bit stronger imo lol
josephchoi 4 years ago
good job,need part2!
horroricon 4 years ago
Don`t be so pants Dee the world needs part 2!
gazcarr 4 years ago
I have my reasons for not wanting to participate gaz and u know what they are!
deefitz84 4 years ago
Thanks I appreciate all feedback it helps alot. There was no real plan to part 1 just made up as we went along. I have put more thought into part 2 but the star is reluctant to return so get commenting to bring her back and change her mind!!
gazcarr 4 years ago
I have good reasons gaz!
deefitz84 4 years ago
great job!, I was wondering when are you going to put part 2 up?
spidermanwebslinge 4 years ago
lol wheres part 2 hehehe this was awesome
PiperP369 5 years ago
Thanks check out the trailer too!
gazcarr 4 years ago
freaking awesome video i like it
PiperP369 5 years ago