hey whats good bro just checked out your video and i gotta say... dude you sound like kanye west but you had your own twist on it i thought it was tight man
Ur good but u lose the flow about 13 times through the song and u lose the beat ... keep it up i dont want a reply sorry but if u have questions make another vid with everything i told u about the song fixed and then ask me to tell you all about that video... but besides timing and feeling the music is all you have to work on as a musician personally i dislike hip hop but its still music and i love to critique music so yea take that and run with it ... and plz dont comment back
@monra336 timing is everything, you're right....but I think my timing is pretty good...check my other vids...piano playing/scratching etc....my timing is on......now it might not be on every 1/4 note but watch any drummer especially jazz music..they will go in between the quarters and eighths and sixteenths, just makes it more musical......thanks for viewing though and have a great night.
when u started singing i was thinkin this was gonna be some other lame wannabe, when u started spittin though i realised i was way off the mark, shit was tight bro.
defo stick to the rappin, would give the singing a miss next time though :P
im gonna b subscribing, hope for more of this in the future, best of luck to you
@speckyben thanks for checkin' it out..........Imma keep singing though....cuz I love music to much just to rap.....but thanks for viewing...have a great night.
Your ridiculously good, your lyrics are amazing and your flow & and voice makes it work big time. I like your lyrics better then the original lyrics :)
@guitardiable229 Wow, thanks.....just havin' fun with writing and being creative......I hope one day I can do this for a living!!!!! Thanks again for viewing!!
that was good... i like the comedy in there too... nice work.
Scottiebizzle 9 months ago
hey whats good bro just checked out your video and i gotta say... dude you sound like kanye west but you had your own twist on it i thought it was tight man
wcalic 1 year ago
Ur good but u lose the flow about 13 times through the song and u lose the beat ... keep it up i dont want a reply sorry but if u have questions make another vid with everything i told u about the song fixed and then ask me to tell you all about that video... but besides timing and feeling the music is all you have to work on as a musician personally i dislike hip hop but its still music and i love to critique music so yea take that and run with it ... and plz dont comment back
monra336 1 year ago
@monra336 timing is everything, you're right....but I think my timing is pretty good...check my other vids...piano playing/scratching etc....my timing is on......now it might not be on every 1/4 note but watch any drummer especially jazz music..they will go in between the quarters and eighths and sixteenths, just makes it more musical......thanks for viewing though and have a great night.
djquestionthis 1 year ago
to be true...
your lyrics are not really extraordinary, far more pretty standard stuff,
BUT
i really, very like your flow, rapping!
you are quite dope, i guess...
props and love
frequenzT 1 year ago
@frequenzT Thanks for viewing.......I really appreciate that!
djquestionthis 1 year ago
@djquestionthis
for sure, bro...
keep it up
frequenzT 1 year ago
when u started singing i was thinkin this was gonna be some other lame wannabe, when u started spittin though i realised i was way off the mark, shit was tight bro.
defo stick to the rappin, would give the singing a miss next time though :P
im gonna b subscribing, hope for more of this in the future, best of luck to you
speckyben 1 year ago
@speckyben thanks for checkin' it out..........Imma keep singing though....cuz I love music to much just to rap.....but thanks for viewing...have a great night.
djquestionthis 1 year ago
@djquestionthis i respect that man, best of luck to you
speckyben 1 year ago
awesome
SuperWillis13 1 year ago
Man your actually fucking sick
keep this shit up :D
Goyemproductions 1 year ago
Your ridiculously good, your lyrics are amazing and your flow & and voice makes it work big time. I like your lyrics better then the original lyrics :)
krissyluvzmusic 1 year ago
You just kilt weezy.....Nice job
Thugglifeinme 1 year ago
wow this wuz excellent. i hate rihanna but this wuz awesome 5/5.!(:
ilovesublime10 1 year ago
I agree with errone else, I'm diggin this! :)
omgitsesther 1 year ago
@omgitsesther Thank you!!!!!
djquestionthis 1 year ago
That was friggin awesome man!!! Idk how u came up with all tht, it took talent thts fo sho!!! And u got lots of it!!!
guitardiable229 1 year ago
@guitardiable229 Wow, thanks.....just havin' fun with writing and being creative......I hope one day I can do this for a living!!!!! Thanks again for viewing!!
-deejay ?this
djquestionthis 1 year ago
@djquestionthis Anytime man
guitardiable229 1 year ago
bad ass bro, seriously, keep it up
BurnTheRecord 1 year ago
@BurnTheRecord thanks man....I appreciate that.
-deejay ?this
djquestionthis 1 year ago
sounds wricked =)
AllysGoneCrazy 1 year ago
FUCKIN KILLED IT MAN
long notes = good
dont hold way to long tho then its not as good
blackflametictacz 1 year ago
@blackflametictacz Thanks for viewing....I will take that advice
djquestionthis 1 year ago
Killer lines homie, honest feedback? You fuckin killed it
TheSkellz 1 year ago
@TheSkellz Wow......you think so.........thanks.
djquestionthis 1 year ago
this is awsome epic vid
omarab1000 1 year ago
@omarab1000 I really appreciate that.
djquestionthis 1 year ago