ahhhhh this is song version i've been looking forr! not the other version. the one that has all the extras at 1:30. this one just has ben folds rockin the solo at 1:31 :)
Wow.. Tough crowd. It is so much easier to critique than create. It is a lot of work and I couldn't have done better if tried. Although it is good, I think it needs more polish to achieve the gay standard. Thanks.
Ok please don't get mad when i say this but I personally thought it was a good concept but ruined by bad execution. The acting I thought was a tad bit overexagerated. There seemed to be parts of the video where nothing happened and it just seemed like filler. Also the parts where you were singing the lyrics the camera just stayed in that one position where you were just sitting down it was very boring and uneventful.
However I did love the storyline and the subtitles were a nice catch (In fact I copied that concept for my own Landed video I hope you don't mind please don't sue me!). So overall I think that it was a great idea it just didn't flesh out well.
A suggestion if I may give one would be when you're singing try to move the camera around get different shots and angles maybe a pan or two.
ahhhhh this is song version i've been looking forr! not the other version. the one that has all the extras at 1:30. this one just has ben folds rockin the solo at 1:31 :)
SoMiami2007 3 years ago
Hey that's the Syracuse, NY Airport!
FoxReality 4 years ago
sigh.
knoxIII 4 years ago
omgosh! great song and VID!
michelle43xox 4 years ago
not bad at all
DontGiveHimTheStick 5 years ago
That is not bad. I like the style.
sjalabs 5 years ago
Wow.. Tough crowd. It is so much easier to critique than create. It is a lot of work and I couldn't have done better if tried. Although it is good, I think it needs more polish to achieve the gay standard. Thanks.
uhighersire 5 years ago
Great job. I have a new spin in my mind of the tune from Ben
slimgoat 5 years ago
Ok please don't get mad when i say this but I personally thought it was a good concept but ruined by bad execution. The acting I thought was a tad bit overexagerated. There seemed to be parts of the video where nothing happened and it just seemed like filler. Also the parts where you were singing the lyrics the camera just stayed in that one position where you were just sitting down it was very boring and uneventful.
Mallrat109 5 years ago
However I did love the storyline and the subtitles were a nice catch (In fact I copied that concept for my own Landed video I hope you don't mind please don't sue me!). So overall I think that it was a great idea it just didn't flesh out well.
A suggestion if I may give one would be when you're singing try to move the camera around get different shots and angles maybe a pan or two.
Mallrat109 5 years ago
Great storyline.
MagicalLobster 5 years ago