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  • 565 people are deaf

  • That's really good for a first try at writing your own song. Just keep trying and never give up

  • AWESOME!

  • i think you have a winner here.  a little work but a winner.

  • holy cow !!! your so young in this video =D

  • Words*

  • I like the beat but not the world

  • i'm really glad you ended up getting braces and fixing your teeth. it made a big difference!

  • You have a nice voice and a great song writer

  • omg you are so inspring it would be soo cool if you could make a video menting my user name !! :D your soo pretty just to let you know :))

  • OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!! BRILLIANT

  • How old WERE you? lol

  • How old are you?

  • but thats probly obvious lol

  • This is better than i can do!

  • YOUR AMAZING!!! You should be on American Idol!

  • Wow this song is great, the lyrics are really special :) But yeah I agree with you on saying the tune needs touching up.. its not bad at all :) Just needs to be more catchy :D

  • Ive been watching to you sing since 2008, holy crap.

  • crap singing

  • =D KOOL

  • When she posted this video it was my birthday October16 I was turning 9 but now I'm 12 :D

  • my friend told me she made this song up IDK but.......... yeah

  • I LIKE IT!!!! you dont need ANY changes!(:

  • omg i really like it but when you kinda yelled and i was typing this comment that kinda scared me but im ok and i really like your song you dont need to change it

  • I mean idk but I like it

  • Idk but o k

  • let me say something , you can sing, i mean honestly, your GIFTED with an INERADICABLE AMAZING voice. But you beat rhythm and beat needs some touch ups, nothing major, but keep singing and writing, you are AMAZING

  • you look differnet wih oout your braces

  • not bad, not bad at all!

  • your voice is great but do not do the you look like your mother part! but i love your voice!

  • i love your so talented but yer touch it up and it will be amazing

  • Love your voice but your writing needs some work.

  • look how far you've come!

  • it could be improved if u added some back music you know it could also improve the melody of the song,great song and voice though

  • i love the verses, the melody really sticks in my mind! i love it <3

  • OMG U WROTE THAT IT IS VERY GOOD I CAN NOT EVEN WRITE MY OWN SONG DO NOT LET NO ONE GET THAT SONG K?!?!

  • That was great don't let anybody get you down ok? keep it up.....

  • keep up the good work dont let anyone put u off

  • listen, you had a lot of guts to do this. Great song, great singing. You are so inspiring. :)

  • That was amazing!! :D

  • i didnt like it at first but ur very convincing. awesome idea- great song! i agree it need a little revising but over all id give you 3.5 out of 5 stars :)

  • very messy

  • I can't believe that you've wrote it xx

    amazing x!

  • i remember watching this in 2008(:

  • you wrote it???haha,it's awesome!!

  • I Have Brown Hair And Blue Eyess! :D Yesss(: <3

  • i might sing this at my talent show lol

  • love it? it looked a bit like you were singing about something rather than you just writing it writing it aabout someone? lolx

  • your really good the song needs some work but you have a great voice and your really pretty... overall it was pretty good btw im also a huge taylor swift fan :)

  • your good!! goood job!! I like the song!

  • WTF?!!

  • Woah That Was Amazing!! American Idol? Lol (:

  • I saw this a couple years ago when i was actually in 6th grade, and i thought it was pretty good... I just found it again yesterday, and the lyrics are really good, but the melody needs some work. Just a helpful suggestion. (:

    But I totally did thumbs up! ;D

  • ur a gret singer

  • Sooo goood!

  • This is a good song,the rythem needs work though

  • jeez calm the fuck down you scared me when it started.

  • your a good singer

  • its great

    

  • @klara1051 dnt hate

  • I think the song is AMAZING!! It just needs some notes and a tune to it and it would be GREAT!

  • This Song Is Amazing And So Are You !

  • I Think it got better further on the song,But really great;)

  • your piche is of

    soom parts u r singing high and low

  • you have a good voice just work on the melody and switch a few of the words here and there its a great song though

  • this was realllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyy­yyyyyy good can u check my videoesssssssssss outt

  • that was realllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyy­yt my videoes pleaseyyyyy good check ou

  • Guys she did the is three years ago she is sooooooo much better now check out her latest video it rocks

  • if anything u dont really have a chorus besides this cant be real, oh kenzie pinch me this is goin in my diary... also u kinda have lik 3 different tunes in the same song

  • wow

  • your very good i like this song

  • i like it

  • i really loved it does need a little bit of touches i <3 u though great song :D

  • You should try finding some chords on a guitar or keyboard/piano to have a backup sound. It makes anybody sound better. You've got a great voice!

  • I love the lyrics... kind of reminds me of alot of taylor swifts songs.... the melody needs help but it's really good

  • sucks

    

  • i think once you figure out the harmony and melody and stuff this will be an awesome song:) i love the lyrics a lot and its really cool cuz my names Kenzie:)

  • That was so good!!!!!

  • you have a nice voice!! BTW i <3 the hamster in the background lol

  • not that badd !<3

  • Fucking amazinggggggg

  • omg.. my names kenzie xD but this is REALLY good :D keep it upp! :)

  • I love the lyrics! It's a really sweet song!

  • the idea is good, but as already said, the melody is sometimes a bit weird.

    Also some partys in the lyrics sound weird. :)

    but all in all its okay ;)

  • awesome :) maybe u could get somebody to do the instrumental or something :) love it.

  • Is it me or at the start she kinda sounds like Kylie or Kendall Kardashian?

  • You have evolved so much as a singer since then... you're still pretty and have a great voice, but you've grown up since then, and ur amazing!

  • ok 11sarlyn you can get over it cuz she is she good and you need to stop being butt

  • @11saralyn I'm pretty sure your the one that needs to get a life. What do you do all day just search youtube for people you can put down? This girl did nothing to you. Go find something better to do with your time.

  • you should sing this song over again (:

  • I really enjoyed this.(: & you are really pretty! Keep it up girl.

  • I love this. I think it's wonderful.

  • i dont get it

  • @11saralyn ahahaha, 170 friends on facebook? oooo! shes got 30,000 subscribers. stop being horrible. she was 11 years old and it was a first attempt!

  • @11saralyn oh wow. someone jealous? she can sing. look at her new songs haha. your lame. 170 friends on facebook?? look at her hahaha

  • @11saralyn Wow your a bitch WOW you got 170 friends on Facebook impressive GETA LIFE YOU PEICE OF CRAP

  • i HAVE TO MEET YOU I JUST LOVE YOU!!! I wish i could :(

  • That was amazing!!!

  • The melody is not so good. I think you should practice more. it whas a amateur song. But... Practice! Practice! Practice! 

  • @Klara1051

    i get what youre saying but Lemme ask u this. can you sing better ?

  • i love this song and your voice your amazing

    

  • it doesnt make that sense

    

  • My favourite song. I think you should sing it now because it'll be perfecto'

  • i would keep the octaves or whatever they're called a bit more close... the lyrics are amazing and otherwise the song is amazing... You should work a bit on how to sing it (i would know because whenever i sing i test out new pitches and styles to sing in) good luck. So far so good!

  • well some people are just rude. at least you have the nerve to write the song AND post it. i liked it. i subscribed just because of this video.

  • @brooklyngomez brooklyn is my name

  • @bieberfeaver213 what?

  • you sound like shit stop singing

  • its uhhh, well this song is kinda off a little like in the way like ..hmmmm you are singing like your reading..or talking you got a great voice but ya that needs a little help lol !

  • no ofense your a good singer but you cat really write song so i would just stick with song famous people write

  • Great voice and great writing!!!! A lil off but for a fresh writin song it's great!!!

  • OMG I LOVE YOU YOUR PRETTY AND AN AMAZING SINGER I LOVE THIS SONG and btw talk SLOWEERRR!! you talk waayyy to fast but everything besides that your amazing !!!!(:

  • good job!

  • you were so happy here now your videos look nervous and by the way this song is amazing dont let hate bring you down you rock then and now :)

  • this is cute(: hahahahaha, you are soooo much better now! It's amazing!(: how much you've improved!

  • you are really good! keep writing and you are pretty

  • not the best

  • you shud write it down in measures and make a key signature, cuz the notes seem a bit funky. but definately keep the lyrics!

  • i really loved ur song and ur sing....

  • i dont know why all does people say you cant write

    wel girl, i think you are a damn good songwritter and singer!

  • 0:54 LOL

  • ur voice :amazing

    ur songs : keep working on it

    sry thats the truth

  • what the fuck

  • shit!

  • Lyrics are great! A little pitchy but I have a question. If I gave you the lyrics to the song I wrote could you sing it for me?

  • It's really good!

  • Pretty good! Needs a little touching up... but thata it!!

  • its so not messy and youve a better voice than myley cyrus

  • Pretty voice but seriously stupid lyrics.

  • U sing worse than a rottend pigen head 

  • -.-' no 

  • it's not horrible..touch it up a little, but its not horrible

  • This is a nicee song , and i love the idea and the message !

  • you should re-sing this now <33333333

  • Kenzie pinch me ? It needs alot of work

  • I kinda dnt get it srry

  • you should seriously sing this now.

  • Brown hair. Green eyes they hypnotize! Haha :)

  • ur are right it does need some work but not much. its really good and cute.keep up the good work and maybe you could be just like taylor swift.dont give up on your dreams!!!!!!! stay true to yourself and dont change for anybody no matter if they say that you cant sing and u suck. just listen to yourself and folliow your dreams. people only write bad comments because most of them are jealous of you.so keep up the good work, dont give up,and stay tue to yourself. its really important in life

  • ur are right it does need some work but not much. its really good and cute.keep up the good work and maybe you could be just like taylor swift.dont give up on your dreams!!!!!!! stay true to yourself and dont change for anybody no matter if they say that you cant sing and u suck. just listen to yourself and folliow your dreams. people only write bad comments because most of them are jealous of you.so keep up the good work, dont give up,and stay tue to yourself. its really importanat in life

  • ur are right it does need some work but not much. its really good and cute.keep up the good work and maybe you could be just like taylor swift.dont give up on your dreams!!!!!!! stay true to yourself and dont change for anybody no matter if they say that you cant sing and u suck. just listen to yourself and folliow your dreams. people only wrie bad comments because most of them are jealous of you.so keep up the good work, dont give up,and stay tue to yourself. its really importanat in life

  • ur are right it does need some work but not much. its really good and cute.keep up the good work and maybe you could be just like taylor swift.dont give up on your dreams!!!!!!!

  • You are a great singer but...you are right...it needs touching up...a lot of it

  • WOW you have grown up SO much!!!! good job on your progress <3

  • NICE TEETH!

    

  • IT JUST NEEDS MUSIC

  • If you don't like this you need a life Bailey it is amazing your right it does need work but for your first song it is good

  • i dont like it..no offence.

  • if yhu think this is gay, yhu obviously are <3 yhu bailie

  • this is gay

  • you're a really good singer but this song doesn't flow right at all... sorry. :/

  • good job :o

  • You are really good, I love taylor swift also and this was amazing! :)

  • Wow I can't stop singing this! Lol I love it! I'm fave part it is like she's floating abov the clouds even tho surrounded! Lol :)

  • u r GOOD keep on going make more

  • It's really good i love this i could here this song on the radio!!! i hope you become famous!

  • Hey please take a listen to my song i wrote 'STUPID SUPERSTITIONS' would mean alooooooooooot!! x

  • Ok so my friends moms sisters friends cousin works for demi lavato so I'll see if maybe she can give you a chance to record something or work with taylor swift or something like that

  • I love it lol I was singing a little bit ago :)

  • oh my gosh, i love that song :D

  • are the begining of al these old covers, u say "OKAY..."

  • You can't sing. Is this real?!!! =(

  • Its not actaully bad its reminds me a lot of Taylor Swift and that is what she sings a lot so i get it.... Anyways im pretty bad at writing songs so yeah lol... :)

  • you have a very good voice, but personally i think the lyrics could use a little more work.

    other then that i like it :)

  • luv it! :) im a bit of a songwriter myself and i think with a little hard work, this could get up there :) if u want to u can watch a vid of the song i wrote on my channel

  • HORRIBLE

  • good singer, keep ur writing in ur diary though hun. (:

  • way to pichy

  • Oh my gosh. I love this.(:

  • just need a little makeup  and u can be a singer love this song i cant make up one