Wow this song is great, the lyrics are really special :) But yeah I agree with you on saying the tune needs touching up.. its not bad at all :) Just needs to be more catchy :D
omg i really like it but when you kinda yelled and i was typing this comment that kinda scared me but im ok and i really like your song you dont need to change it
let me say something , you can sing, i mean honestly, your GIFTED with an INERADICABLE AMAZING voice. But you beat rhythm and beat needs some touch ups, nothing major, but keep singing and writing, you are AMAZING
i didnt like it at first but ur very convincing. awesome idea- great song! i agree it need a little revising but over all id give you 3.5 out of 5 stars :)
your really good the song needs some work but you have a great voice and your really pretty... overall it was pretty good btw im also a huge taylor swift fan :)
I saw this a couple years ago when i was actually in 6th grade, and i thought it was pretty good... I just found it again yesterday, and the lyrics are really good, but the melody needs some work. Just a helpful suggestion. (:
if anything u dont really have a chorus besides this cant be real, oh kenzie pinch me this is goin in my diary... also u kinda have lik 3 different tunes in the same song
i think once you figure out the harmony and melody and stuff this will be an awesome song:) i love the lyrics a lot and its really cool cuz my names Kenzie:)
@11saralyn I'm pretty sure your the one that needs to get a life. What do you do all day just search youtube for people you can put down? This girl did nothing to you. Go find something better to do with your time.
as soon as i heard u i said u can die u suck at singing and i bet u have no friends I can sing better and well at least i have over 170 friends on facebook so get a life loser if a ever meet u I will shoot u in ur fricken head so just watch ur back
i would keep the octaves or whatever they're called a bit more close... the lyrics are amazing and otherwise the song is amazing... You should work a bit on how to sing it (i would know because whenever i sing i test out new pitches and styles to sing in) good luck. So far so good!
i would keep the octaves or whatever they're called a bit more close... the lyrics are amazing and otherwise the song is amazing... You should work a bit on how to sing it (i would know because whenever i sing i test out new pitches and styles to sing in) good luck. So far so good!
its uhhh, well this song is kinda off a little like in the way like ..hmmmm you are singing like your reading..or talking you got a great voice but ya that needs a little help lol !
OMG I LOVE YOU YOUR PRETTY AND AN AMAZING SINGER I LOVE THIS SONG and btw talk SLOWEERRR!! you talk waayyy to fast but everything besides that your amazing !!!!(:
ur are right it does need some work but not much. its really good and cute.keep up the good work and maybe you could be just like taylor swift.dont give up on your dreams!!!!!!! stay true to yourself and dont change for anybody no matter if they say that you cant sing and u suck. just listen to yourself and folliow your dreams. people only write bad comments because most of them are jealous of you.so keep up the good work, dont give up,and stay tue to yourself. its really important in life
ur are right it does need some work but not much. its really good and cute.keep up the good work and maybe you could be just like taylor swift.dont give up on your dreams!!!!!!! stay true to yourself and dont change for anybody no matter if they say that you cant sing and u suck. just listen to yourself and folliow your dreams. people only write bad comments because most of them are jealous of you.so keep up the good work, dont give up,and stay tue to yourself. its really importanat in life
ur are right it does need some work but not much. its really good and cute.keep up the good work and maybe you could be just like taylor swift.dont give up on your dreams!!!!!!! stay true to yourself and dont change for anybody no matter if they say that you cant sing and u suck. just listen to yourself and folliow your dreams. people only wrie bad comments because most of them are jealous of you.so keep up the good work, dont give up,and stay tue to yourself. its really importanat in life
ur are right it does need some work but not much. its really good and cute.keep up the good work and maybe you could be just like taylor swift.dont give up on your dreams!!!!!!!
Ok so my friends moms sisters friends cousin works for demi lavato so I'll see if maybe she can give you a chance to record something or work with taylor swift or something like that
Its not actaully bad its reminds me a lot of Taylor Swift and that is what she sings a lot so i get it.... Anyways im pretty bad at writing songs so yeah lol... :)
luv it! :) im a bit of a songwriter myself and i think with a little hard work, this could get up there :) if u want to u can watch a vid of the song i wrote on my channel
565 people are deaf
gothgeminideed 3 days ago
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what the fuck is this !
are you traying to be justin biber ?
rappigonen 5 days ago
That's really good for a first try at writing your own song. Just keep trying and never give up
dfk4life1 1 week ago
AWESOME!
SkySonFP 1 week ago
i think you have a winner here. a little work but a winner.
aljernon805 1 week ago
holy cow !!! your so young in this video =D
missshelbyjo12 2 weeks ago
Words*
misskris1011 2 weeks ago
I like the beat but not the world
misskris1011 2 weeks ago
i'm really glad you ended up getting braces and fixing your teeth. it made a big difference!
marywbitch 4 weeks ago
You have a nice voice and a great song writer
guitarsix6 4 weeks ago
omg you are so inspring it would be soo cool if you could make a video menting my user name !! :D your soo pretty just to let you know :))
kesha15589 1 month ago
OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!! BRILLIANT
msp123455 1 month ago
How old WERE you? lol
cherrytheberry1 1 month ago in playlist Song 'covers'
How old are you?
cherrytheberry1 1 month ago in playlist Song 'covers'
but thats probly obvious lol
AmandaCat9913 1 month ago
This is better than i can do!
AmandaCat9913 1 month ago
YOUR AMAZING!!! You should be on American Idol!
babysnowtiger09 1 month ago
Wow this song is great, the lyrics are really special :) But yeah I agree with you on saying the tune needs touching up.. its not bad at all :) Just needs to be more catchy :D
XxMcflyhyperxX 1 month ago
Ive been watching to you sing since 2008, holy crap.
SmileLatelyBaby 1 month ago
crap singing
amsbams101 1 month ago
=D KOOL
Moviestarplanetroxs 1 month ago
When she posted this video it was my birthday October16 I was turning 9 but now I'm 12 :D
dfghj700 2 months ago
my friend told me she made this song up IDK but.......... yeah
sookieloveshailey 2 months ago
I LIKE IT!!!! you dont need ANY changes!(:
sel153667 2 months ago
omg i really like it but when you kinda yelled and i was typing this comment that kinda scared me but im ok and i really like your song you dont need to change it
xXrockstar499Xx 2 months ago 4
I mean idk but I like it
miley27superstar1 2 months ago
Idk but o k
miley27superstar1 2 months ago
let me say something , you can sing, i mean honestly, your GIFTED with an INERADICABLE AMAZING voice. But you beat rhythm and beat needs some touch ups, nothing major, but keep singing and writing, you are AMAZING
Iceinilla 2 months ago
you look differnet wih oout your braces
Allison756456 2 months ago
not bad, not bad at all!
MrMomoProductions 2 months ago
your voice is great but do not do the you look like your mother part! but i love your voice!
emmy11ification 2 months ago
i love your so talented but yer touch it up and it will be amazing
GeorginaAnstee1123 2 months ago
Love your voice but your writing needs some work.
nmpaz1998 3 months ago 2
look how far you've come!
girltalkwithkiara 3 months ago
it could be improved if u added some back music you know it could also improve the melody of the song,great song and voice though
TaylorRoberts14 3 months ago
i love the verses, the melody really sticks in my mind! i love it <3
SMtweet07 3 months ago
OMG U WROTE THAT IT IS VERY GOOD I CAN NOT EVEN WRITE MY OWN SONG DO NOT LET NO ONE GET THAT SONG K?!?!
Raeannvalencia2001 3 months ago
That was great don't let anybody get you down ok? keep it up.....
friendlymany 3 months ago
keep up the good work dont let anyone put u off
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SongSangification 4 months ago
listen, you had a lot of guts to do this. Great song, great singing. You are so inspiring. :)
Iceinilla 4 months ago
That was amazing!! :D
PARADISExCHICK6231 4 months ago
i didnt like it at first but ur very convincing. awesome idea- great song! i agree it need a little revising but over all id give you 3.5 out of 5 stars :)
usmiechnijsie18 4 months ago in playlist More videos from pawsonmagic
very messy
guineapigs4eva123 4 months ago
I can't believe that you've wrote it xx
amazing x!
wikuuu3 4 months ago
i remember watching this in 2008(:
IceGeek911 4 months ago 12
you wrote it???haha,it's awesome!!
zmijavci123 4 months ago in playlist Više videozapisa korisnika pawsonmagic
I Have Brown Hair And Blue Eyess! :D Yesss(: <3
andrshea2009 4 months ago
i might sing this at my talent show lol
Lovestoiresx3 5 months ago
love it? it looked a bit like you were singing about something rather than you just writing it writing it aabout someone? lolx
musicloverannie 5 months ago
your really good the song needs some work but you have a great voice and your really pretty... overall it was pretty good btw im also a huge taylor swift fan :)
rhen2341 5 months ago
your good!! goood job!! I like the song!
shealynk12 5 months ago
WTF?!!
grapefruitandguava 5 months ago
Woah That Was Amazing!! American Idol? Lol (:
AidenLover34 5 months ago
I saw this a couple years ago when i was actually in 6th grade, and i thought it was pretty good... I just found it again yesterday, and the lyrics are really good, but the melody needs some work. Just a helpful suggestion. (:
But I totally did thumbs up! ;D
JadeLexus1996 5 months ago
ur a gret singer
chicoy2k1 5 months ago
Sooo goood!
angieXcute813 5 months ago
This is a good song,the rythem needs work though
cutiepaige101 5 months ago
jeez calm the fuck down you scared me when it started.
angelynedonai 5 months ago
your a good singer
niamhiscool100 6 months ago
its great
EgyptLiz 6 months ago
@klara1051 dnt hate
Bobbywright101 6 months ago
I think the song is AMAZING!! It just needs some notes and a tune to it and it would be GREAT!
JustinluvH2Ochugging 6 months ago
This Song Is Amazing And So Are You !
MsCoolmiley 6 months ago
I Think it got better further on the song,But really great;)
Beckynaomibestieemo1 6 months ago
your piche is of
soom parts u r singing high and low
brittstar7 6 months ago
you have a good voice just work on the melody and switch a few of the words here and there its a great song though
codegurl99 6 months ago
this was realllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy good can u check my videoesssssssssss outt
MegaJessieanne 6 months ago
that was realllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyt my videoes pleaseyyyyy good check ou
MegaJessieanne 6 months ago
Guys she did the is three years ago she is sooooooo much better now check out her latest video it rocks
SweetPanda401 6 months ago
if anything u dont really have a chorus besides this cant be real, oh kenzie pinch me this is goin in my diary... also u kinda have lik 3 different tunes in the same song
123star22 6 months ago
wow
critter2009 6 months ago
your very good i like this song
TheRockstargirl17 6 months ago
i like it
SuperTaylorsbiggestf 6 months ago
i really loved it does need a little bit of touches i <3 u though great song :D
frankielover411 6 months ago
You should try finding some chords on a guitar or keyboard/piano to have a backup sound. It makes anybody sound better. You've got a great voice!
MadsterAwesome 6 months ago
I love the lyrics... kind of reminds me of alot of taylor swifts songs.... the melody needs help but it's really good
SuperMusicalPassion1 6 months ago
sucks
19burak 6 months ago
i think once you figure out the harmony and melody and stuff this will be an awesome song:) i love the lyrics a lot and its really cool cuz my names Kenzie:)
xFairytalesIntrosx 6 months ago
That was so good!!!!!
cookiecakes33 6 months ago
you have a nice voice!! BTW i <3 the hamster in the background lol
lovehpff0429 6 months ago
not that badd !<3
MrRolly2222 6 months ago
Fucking amazinggggggg
33coolbeth33 6 months ago
omg.. my names kenzie xD but this is REALLY good :D keep it upp! :)
MackenzieBvids 6 months ago
I love the lyrics! It's a really sweet song!
MsLovetosing101 6 months ago
the idea is good, but as already said, the melody is sometimes a bit weird.
Also some partys in the lyrics sound weird. :)
but all in all its okay ;)
YoungieGirl 7 months ago
awesome :) maybe u could get somebody to do the instrumental or something :) love it.
sarastarp99 7 months ago
Is it me or at the start she kinda sounds like Kylie or Kendall Kardashian?
TheBritneyBlack 7 months ago
You have evolved so much as a singer since then... you're still pretty and have a great voice, but you've grown up since then, and ur amazing!
brbgurlll 7 months ago
ok 11sarlyn you can get over it cuz she is she good and you need to stop being butt
lorraina1996 7 months ago
@11saralyn I'm pretty sure your the one that needs to get a life. What do you do all day just search youtube for people you can put down? This girl did nothing to you. Go find something better to do with your time.
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1212darci 7 months ago
you should sing this song over again (:
nkmxoxo28 7 months ago
I really enjoyed this.(: & you are really pretty! Keep it up girl.
lisalanes4343 7 months ago
I love this. I think it's wonderful.
propertyofjesus94 7 months ago
i dont get it
982MeGaN 7 months ago
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as soon as i heard u i said u can die u suck at singing and i bet u have no friends I can sing better and well at least i have over 170 friends on facebook so get a life loser if a ever meet u I will shoot u in ur fricken head so just watch ur back
11saralyn 7 months ago
@11saralyn ahahaha, 170 friends on facebook? oooo! shes got 30,000 subscribers. stop being horrible. she was 11 years old and it was a first attempt!
electricunicorn97 7 months ago
@11saralyn oh wow. someone jealous? she can sing. look at her new songs haha. your lame. 170 friends on facebook?? look at her hahaha
mathenyboo 7 months ago
@11saralyn Wow your a bitch WOW you got 170 friends on Facebook impressive GETA LIFE YOU PEICE OF CRAP
AngeliquePung 7 months ago
i HAVE TO MEET YOU I JUST LOVE YOU!!! I wish i could :(
bieberfeaver213 7 months ago
That was amazing!!!
MsAustinMahone4ever 7 months ago
The melody is not so good. I think you should practice more. it whas a amateur song. But... Practice! Practice! Practice!
Klara1051 7 months ago 18
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i get what youre saying but Lemme ask u this. can you sing better ?
AshleyBoo8520 6 months ago
i love this song and your voice your amazing
frankielover411 7 months ago
it doesnt make that sense
bartnom1 7 months ago in playlist amazing grace
My favourite song. I think you should sing it now because it'll be perfecto'
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i would keep the octaves or whatever they're called a bit more close... the lyrics are amazing and otherwise the song is amazing... You should work a bit on how to sing it (i would know because whenever i sing i test out new pitches and styles to sing in) good luck. So far so good!
Heartfly0 7 months ago
i would keep the octaves or whatever they're called a bit more close... the lyrics are amazing and otherwise the song is amazing... You should work a bit on how to sing it (i would know because whenever i sing i test out new pitches and styles to sing in) good luck. So far so good!
Heartfly0 7 months ago
well some people are just rude. at least you have the nerve to write the song AND post it. i liked it. i subscribed just because of this video.
brooklyngomez 7 months ago 2
@brooklyngomez brooklyn is my name
bieberfeaver213 7 months ago
@bieberfeaver213 what?
brooklyngomez 7 months ago
you sound like shit stop singing
jbomb71 7 months ago
its uhhh, well this song is kinda off a little like in the way like ..hmmmm you are singing like your reading..or talking you got a great voice but ya that needs a little help lol !
0teaddy0bears0rule 7 months ago
no ofense your a good singer but you cat really write song so i would just stick with song famous people write
XokaitlinxoXo 7 months ago
Great voice and great writing!!!! A lil off but for a fresh writin song it's great!!!
TheRokkstar21 7 months ago
OMG I LOVE YOU YOUR PRETTY AND AN AMAZING SINGER I LOVE THIS SONG and btw talk SLOWEERRR!! you talk waayyy to fast but everything besides that your amazing !!!!(:
faithypie16 7 months ago
good job!
LadyGagaLuver1028 7 months ago
you were so happy here now your videos look nervous and by the way this song is amazing dont let hate bring you down you rock then and now :)
MUSIKlover4LYFE 7 months ago
this is cute(: hahahahaha, you are soooo much better now! It's amazing!(: how much you've improved!
713jordannnelise 7 months ago
you are really good! keep writing and you are pretty
Clara327 7 months ago
not the best
dinosaursarekoolio 7 months ago
you shud write it down in measures and make a key signature, cuz the notes seem a bit funky. but definately keep the lyrics!
xkittykittenx 7 months ago
i really loved ur song and ur sing....
yasmin13331 7 months ago
i dont know why all does people say you cant write
wel girl, i think you are a damn good songwritter and singer!
fifysoify 7 months ago
0:54 LOL
danaais2000 7 months ago
ur voice :amazing
ur songs : keep working on it
sry thats the truth
danaais2000 7 months ago
what the fuck
Cutiecrab 7 months ago
shit!
TheCeliniiify 7 months ago
Lyrics are great! A little pitchy but I have a question. If I gave you the lyrics to the song I wrote could you sing it for me?
8624gracie 7 months ago
It's really good!
cutiegrl97916 7 months ago
Pretty good! Needs a little touching up... but thata it!!
butchersydney80 7 months ago
its so not messy and youve a better voice than myley cyrus
charlieot9 7 months ago
Pretty voice but seriously stupid lyrics.
Heyswimchick 7 months ago
U sing worse than a rottend pigen head
tigerliliana 7 months ago
-.-' no
12juliette12 7 months ago
it's not horrible..touch it up a little, but its not horrible
abbyyx2511 8 months ago
This is a nicee song , and i love the idea and the message !
bunchgirl10 8 months ago
you should re-sing this now <33333333
skittlekittle 8 months ago
Kenzie pinch me ? It needs alot of work
jjjgirl375 8 months ago
I kinda dnt get it srry
jjjgirl375 8 months ago
you should seriously sing this now.
kelsk1818 8 months ago
Brown hair. Green eyes they hypnotize! Haha :)
WhitneyRox15 8 months ago
ur are right it does need some work but not much. its really good and cute.keep up the good work and maybe you could be just like taylor swift.dont give up on your dreams!!!!!!! stay true to yourself and dont change for anybody no matter if they say that you cant sing and u suck. just listen to yourself and folliow your dreams. people only write bad comments because most of them are jealous of you.so keep up the good work, dont give up,and stay tue to yourself. its really important in life
laffytaffyisgood123 8 months ago
ur are right it does need some work but not much. its really good and cute.keep up the good work and maybe you could be just like taylor swift.dont give up on your dreams!!!!!!! stay true to yourself and dont change for anybody no matter if they say that you cant sing and u suck. just listen to yourself and folliow your dreams. people only write bad comments because most of them are jealous of you.so keep up the good work, dont give up,and stay tue to yourself. its really importanat in life
laffytaffyisgood123 8 months ago
ur are right it does need some work but not much. its really good and cute.keep up the good work and maybe you could be just like taylor swift.dont give up on your dreams!!!!!!! stay true to yourself and dont change for anybody no matter if they say that you cant sing and u suck. just listen to yourself and folliow your dreams. people only wrie bad comments because most of them are jealous of you.so keep up the good work, dont give up,and stay tue to yourself. its really importanat in life
laffytaffyisgood123 8 months ago
ur are right it does need some work but not much. its really good and cute.keep up the good work and maybe you could be just like taylor swift.dont give up on your dreams!!!!!!!
laffytaffyisgood123 8 months ago
You are a great singer but...you are right...it needs touching up...a lot of it
awesomeness265 8 months ago
WOW you have grown up SO much!!!! good job on your progress <3
MissShanyce97 8 months ago
NICE TEETH!
cristina6t9 8 months ago
IT JUST NEEDS MUSIC
JT6789998212 8 months ago
If you don't like this you need a life Bailey it is amazing your right it does need work but for your first song it is good
ibethany100 8 months ago
i dont like it..no offence.
scaredofthedark102 8 months ago
if yhu think this is gay, yhu obviously are <3 yhu bailie
Alyfab8 8 months ago
this is gay
nevemusic13113 8 months ago
you're a really good singer but this song doesn't flow right at all... sorry. :/
katherinetylar 8 months ago
good job :o
MsBlondie922 8 months ago
You are really good, I love taylor swift also and this was amazing! :)
pastrychef13 8 months ago
Wow I can't stop singing this! Lol I love it! I'm fave part it is like she's floating abov the clouds even tho surrounded! Lol :)
NICKJISUGLYNOT 8 months ago
u r GOOD keep on going make more
TheHote44 8 months ago
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beehdeee 8 months ago
It's really good i love this i could here this song on the radio!!! i hope you become famous!
toronna912 8 months ago
Hey please take a listen to my song i wrote 'STUPID SUPERSTITIONS' would mean alooooooooooot!! x
beehdeee 8 months ago
Ok so my friends moms sisters friends cousin works for demi lavato so I'll see if maybe she can give you a chance to record something or work with taylor swift or something like that
maddiedoyle10 8 months ago
I love it lol I was singing a little bit ago :)
WhitneyRox15 8 months ago
oh my gosh, i love that song :D
Jodi0128 8 months ago
are the begining of al these old covers, u say "OKAY..."
707JELLO 8 months ago
You can't sing. Is this real?!!! =(
Klara1051 8 months ago
Its not actaully bad its reminds me a lot of Taylor Swift and that is what she sings a lot so i get it.... Anyways im pretty bad at writing songs so yeah lol... :)
annasroom1 8 months ago
you have a very good voice, but personally i think the lyrics could use a little more work.
other then that i like it :)
cheersisters100 8 months ago
luv it! :) im a bit of a songwriter myself and i think with a little hard work, this could get up there :) if u want to u can watch a vid of the song i wrote on my channel
godschick98 8 months ago
HORRIBLE
shellybug1234 8 months ago
good singer, keep ur writing in ur diary though hun. (:
maddiee20101 8 months ago
way to pichy
pjpebbles13 8 months ago
Oh my gosh. I love this.(:
BrittneyBest 8 months ago
just need a little makeup and u can be a singer love this song i cant make up one
socommedic 8 months ago