Decent editing, but too much "modeling". Most of the shots are just you standing in the same spot mouthing the words. I would have included at least a few shots of a snowman, first half built and then finished; maybe with a nametag that says Parson Brown (and some religious clothes?). All together decent, but needs a better variety of shots. Take it from a college student with a Bachelor's in this field.
Decent editing, but too much "modeling". Most of the shots are just you standing in the same spot mouthing the words. I would have included at least a few shots of a snowman, first half built and then finished; maybe with a nametag that says Parson Brown (and some religious clothes?). All together decent, but needs a better variety of shots. Take it from a college student with a Bachelor's in this field.
SlamminStam 2 months ago
@SlamminStam i agree w/ u 2 much modeling
iloverainydays23 1 month ago
Enjoyable! I heard this song in wet seal
carshakillex 2 months ago
This is such a great version of this song by my favorite, Liz Phair. The video is excellent, too. Great work.
PhillyPhairPhan 1 year ago
not bad! great shots fast edits fun things going on, really good job!
MizztaPeppa 1 year ago