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That was really good. But what the fuck happened to the orange guys voice? It was the best and now it sounds like he has a harmonica in his throat with tonsilitis.
hey I never wanted a 'war', I just thought you were wrong to call my series 'retarded' and a 'clone of hard justice', by using a lot of sarcassm...why am I wasting my time on this?
Pretty good I'd say. It has nice potential, and has has a great story, too. Only problem : Some of the acting is over-the-top. I mean, I realise these people are trying to be Scottish(if they really are scottish, then my apologies), but c'mon! Some of the voice acting is hilarious to listen to at times.
I give it a B+, meaning it's good, but it could be better. None the less, keep up the good work!
haha im bak aand im here to stay that was better than the others but stil not A material or like C- material rofl sooo as i was sayin if u put a little bit of extra work (i mean a lot of work by that) it will be half decent
I completely agree, The american accent irritates me so much it's all i ever hear on the internet, The only time you hear different it gets badmouthed by a bunch of asshole americans :\
Eh this is better then the other two. It's progressing but still way to much Halo machinima guys Uncharted 2 and Dragon Age: Origins both have film editors you should really try them out.
Hmmm, could use a lot of work in almost every aspect. The voice acting is off (especially concerning the asian in blue). The sounds and music seem to just cut in randomly, you need to learn how to make them subtle and/or fade them in and out. The camera work was also very plain, just nothing special to it. You showed what was going on, but that was it. Overall I say 2/5, not trying to be a dick, but I know this has some potential, you just need to learn from your mistakes like everyone else.
5/5 this show really improved the camera does not sway as much during action scenes the quality improved same with voice acting the creator listened to the fan base are the viewers and took the advice and fixed the series (:
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wow, your stupid... this is at the very least ok. Are you one of those type of people that jerk off to a women's voice and just her voice. All of the voice are just fine the way they are. Fucking pig
it could use a bit of improvement. specifically in the audio. There where a lot of parts where speech or noises abruptly cut off, or music would start playing out of nowhere. For the sounds just take some time to make sure everything completes naturally. As for the music, you might want to use some fade effects so it doesn't seem so out of place when it comes in. when writing scripts, try to avoid reusing the exact same lines like at 3:25 and 3:45 or 1:25 and 6:25. hope that helps.
at 0:54 i swear alice is blushing, if u can imagine it.
Scarifar1 10 months ago
I know this is kiddish but keep replaying 6:00 sexual sounds ;)
OpTicSweRve 1 year ago
1:23 oh somebody is jelus and it's troy !!!
PQH1612 1 year ago
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PQH1612 1 year ago
The absolutely most excellent Machinima series I've ever seen Great Job
WTFninjaz 1 year ago
this is a fucking alsome machinima
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abeyancelaa 1 year ago
Lol. Great seires btw =)
Penguin89788 1 year ago
4:00 shut up bitch
L05TKID1034 1 year ago
whats with the arbiters voice from arby 'n the chief
duke4700 1 year ago
my birth day was dec 6
epickankamru 1 year ago
i dont care if she kills evewy tewawist in the city lol
MrCoolkid60000 1 year ago
wheres my sniper rifle lol
MrCoolkid60000 1 year ago
the orange guy sounds like ewan from mercenaries 2
transformers918 1 year ago
You go girl :)
zombieslayerful 1 year ago
Where's my sniper wifle.
Gunnery0Sgt0Hartman 1 year ago
"Call the hospital, and tell them to kill me."
"Ok."
*pistol shot*
"ARG! Wrong me idiot!!"
koolglitch 1 year ago
when Alice said Who promoted you? my comp stopped and buffered and the first thing that sprang to mind was "fucking asshole level 2?"
mackalexd307 1 year ago
yay unfaked british accent everyone else fails at it.
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prestige162 1 year ago
yeah, imagine if they were watchin...well...
porn lol
lionsrage9 1 year ago
0:37 is from arby'n'chief
robrussell9 1 year ago
@robrussell9 just cuz it has arbys voicd doesnt mean anything people used those voices even b4 digitalph33r or john
commanddoc09 1 year ago
@commanddoc09 My god I sent that like a year ago
robrussell9 1 year ago
all this series needs is better voice acting in my opinion. otherwise I love it :)
chaxter123 1 year ago
lol u im a tu re b as t ar d
colmodskill 1 year ago
everything sound awesome in a british acsent,,AWESOME
RESIDENTCREED4 1 year ago
0:36 omgomgomgomgomgomgom arby's voice from arby n the chief!!!!
FunkyPajamaMan 1 year ago
I can't get over that one guys childish voice.
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this is decent, deus ex machina is 300x better, but then again i am comparing u guys to Jon CJG or however u spell his name so 6/10
Dishioniz 1 year ago
lmao
"agh my nose!"
maniacboyz7 2 years ago
zack should have knocked out troy lol
CaucasianAsian23 2 years ago
Lol Gay Fight Scene 'Arrgh My Nose' Great Episode.
ynotmoney2 2 years ago
i love the British vocabulary :D (it sounds kinda weird if your American)
MrKingkiller101 2 years ago
The computor sounds like the arbiter from arby n the chief
TheBIGMAN352 2 years ago 3
this is just coooooooooooooooolllllllll
kamilusstepnius 2 years ago
awsome awsome :D
meenboy12 2 years ago 8
Call the hospital and tell them to kill me.
DIGITALPH33RFAN123 2 years ago
aaah my nose lol
mastercarl328 2 years ago
you-im-a-ture-bas-tard XD lmao
Gaizer687 2 years ago 12
microsoft mike
nolunch97 2 years ago
"call the hospital and tell them to kill me" that kinda sounds weird.
FrankScorpion7 2 years ago 3
Kinda repetetive, and makes no sense at times.
PadawanJB 2 years ago
LOL, the little moanies got in trouble fighting XD
TheDoctorWho1231 2 years ago
That was really good. But what the fuck happened to the orange guys voice? It was the best and now it sounds like he has a harmonica in his throat with tonsilitis.
jjboy157 2 years ago
I think he had a sore throat, it goes back to the way it was before in the next ep
jacobmasta 2 years ago
3:58 and 6:40 are so funny
legamehacker19 2 years ago
3:58 funny as all hell
legamehacker19 2 years ago
I'm lovin it. Keep up the good job.
Kaitowolf07 2 years ago
lol last part u i m a t u r e b a s t e r d thats it scoty
iBlazeStudios 2 years ago
fail
voodoodolll 2 years ago
its a good series, it has a style all its own so it shouldnt be accused of coppying hard justice
JYC576 2 years ago 2
r u guys making mor
Guthix90444 2 years ago
6:35-6:45 You Im-a-ture bast-ard Funny
PSObigFAN 2 years ago 2
sounds kinda cheesy. not enough emotion,
COD40002 2 years ago
yas Orange Scottish guy FTW!!!!!
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blackpanda16 2 years ago
shut the FUCK UP about it copying hard justice
this is not even near justice except for the cop part.
triangle8343 2 years ago 4
second best vid series ever
jakobogg 2 years ago
lol its just like hard justice, exept srs!
linkinparkrool 2 years ago
thats wt i said then me and the director got in a fight and our now still in it aint dat right jacobmasta
nitro3184 2 years ago
hey I never wanted a 'war', I just thought you were wrong to call my series 'retarded' and a 'clone of hard justice', by using a lot of sarcassm...why am I wasting my time on this?
jacobmasta 2 years ago 2
dudee it can all be better under one condition
nitro3184 2 years ago
blue guy reminds me of homstarrunner
songcaller12 2 years ago
Pretty good I'd say. It has nice potential, and has has a great story, too. Only problem : Some of the acting is over-the-top. I mean, I realise these people are trying to be Scottish(if they really are scottish, then my apologies), but c'mon! Some of the voice acting is hilarious to listen to at times.
I give it a B+, meaning it's good, but it could be better. None the less, keep up the good work!
PPKDude852 2 years ago 3
People don't try to be Scottish. People are Scottish.
I would give it a B+ too. Main killer is the soundtrack.
bioniclecollector123 2 years ago
haha im bak aand im here to stay that was better than the others but stil not A material or like C- material rofl sooo as i was sayin if u put a little bit of extra work (i mean a lot of work by that) it will be half decent
nitro3184 2 years ago
The blue male Spartan is the best voice actor ever! hes sounds so sexy!!!
Markkoh94 2 years ago
lol
Geezyk 2 years ago
melee war lol
albanyacosta 2 years ago
BOOOOOOOOOOO!
MrNoobalicious 2 years ago
sick, i think the dude with the office is the enemy
3t3rn4ldr34m1ng 2 years ago
SCOTLAND = EPIC WIN
Electroguy1996 2 years ago
epic win = epic fail =P
ledgendaryk 2 years ago
Your just stupid.
Electroguy1996 2 years ago
cool
theking199012 2 years ago
A MA TE UR BAS TARD!
loved that scene
keep your series up guys!
noxyc 2 years ago
Not being nit picky but it was immature.
Electroguy1996 2 years ago
Is this supposed to be a comedy, or serious? and either way i ididn't like it as either. the voice acting sucked hairy ass
00destroyer1 2 years ago
the voice overs were a bit wierd especialy the slow- mo u bastard bit. but story was ok
killpaddy47 2 years ago
isnt brain the voice of arby ??
barneyrules64 2 years ago
Microsoft Mike, yeah
omegaisdabomb 2 years ago
cool how do you get microsoft mike on your computer i cant get it and i want to make him say funny lines?
barneyrules64 2 years ago
go on google and search for a download
it will take at least 2-3 hours at most since it is a voice
omegaisdabomb 2 years ago
that was great, this series is really compelling
chiro1994 2 years ago 2
MON THE SCOTTS !! the blue sounds retarded
Iamandyf 2 years ago
the golden one is scottish, he talks funny
Dolleduck13 2 years ago
the audio editing wasnt the best but otherwise it was great!!!
burningcusader 2 years ago
so go home.
marcusnns 2 years ago
i dont get the end of this?
Moshejetz 2 years ago
who made these?
RcNmaker 2 years ago
is this a drama or somethin coz i dont think its that good but thats just my opinion
and by the way im english and its about time michinima did an english vid
shame it isnt a comedy tho
rocklords789 2 years ago
Don't you think there's enough comedy out there already? :l
ChucklezLol 2 years ago 2
computer voice sounds like arby
CabooseWillPwnCheif 2 years ago
it is arby...
romansrule3 2 years ago
Awesome. Plainly awesome.
cskipworth 2 years ago
this is pretty cool keep it going
skateonsurf 2 years ago
what cant be at the end?
Bomberboy365 2 years ago
i think it is great even with the acccent its a change for once. But don't think iam English just because i said that iam Aussie
TheEliteSniper727 2 years ago
I don't see why everyone's against this Machinima.
It's great. Or, maybe it's because you dislike their accents because your American accents are so good? I think it's great.
DarkMasteLink101 2 years ago
I'm Swedish. Think it's great too ^^
playerstill123 2 years ago
the horrible limey voice work is like insult to injury when it comes to this shit pile
nick45644564 2 years ago
well the american accent can go up my arse because I am sick of hearing american voices on every machinima so bugger off if you don't like it
romansrule3 2 years ago 2
*High Five*
hutchy1k94 2 years ago
I completely agree, The american accent irritates me so much it's all i ever hear on the internet, The only time you hear different it gets badmouthed by a bunch of asshole americans :\
ChucklezLol 2 years ago
that was asome 5 stares
duraine22 2 years ago
i love u guys ur awsome keep these vids comeing please
nateboy2133 2 years ago
This is gay
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XxTheDestroyedxX 2 years ago
wow really nice! =D
smhaenlly 2 years ago
That was awesome! One of my alltime favs
DikeDialga 2 years ago
that was gay..
punisher255147 2 years ago
i think this is all meant to be like drama like jhoncjg but instead it turns out to be funny
hippl642 2 years ago
i hate the commercials before the vids
dddeeedddfffrrr 2 years ago
brain is arby lololololololo
Magith1 2 years ago
I could tell Markkoh was Troy. The second I heard his voice, I knew.
Not bad, a little slow and boring, but it has a good story going. I bet its going to pick up in the next few episodes.
chambers110 2 years ago
that blue spartan was the best voice actor ever!!!!
don't mind the username. I just like markkoh so much.
Markkoh94 2 years ago
Gay?
ODLESxNxNOODLES 2 years ago
scoatttishhhh
Foreverfront 2 years ago
i am sorry but i hate it
koner7 2 years ago
he said immature
Rabuco1 2 years ago
this guy said u ameture bastard lol scottish accents r funny
bearbooty101 2 years ago 2
Great! So funny lolol !
adrienchew 2 years ago
yeh just quietly.. this is pretty bad
MuppetSexShow 2 years ago
lol Brain is Arby lol.
KrEwD121 2 years ago
Improving from the last two episodes, well done.
Darmelton 2 years ago 2
lolololol "shut up, bitch"
dynasty33677 2 years ago
Eh this is better then the other two. It's progressing but still way to much Halo machinima guys Uncharted 2 and Dragon Age: Origins both have film editors you should really try them out.
NvVanity 2 years ago
I have to say at 6:38 i laughed for about 10 minutes, hopefully this wasnt supposed to be a comedy
XXHSMCXX 2 years ago
There is WAY too much Halo Machinima...
Nerevarineownsyou 2 years ago
Hmmm, could use a lot of work in almost every aspect. The voice acting is off (especially concerning the asian in blue). The sounds and music seem to just cut in randomly, you need to learn how to make them subtle and/or fade them in and out. The camera work was also very plain, just nothing special to it. You showed what was going on, but that was it. Overall I say 2/5, not trying to be a dick, but I know this has some potential, you just need to learn from your mistakes like everyone else.
RediculousSandwich 2 years ago
can't be who? at the end
XForRealzXX 2 years ago
same question who is that guy
DragonpantsX88 2 years ago
wait, maybe he is the guy who dies in ep 1
since patients in hospitals wear white uniforms, he was wearing white.
XForRealzXX 2 years ago
Ugh, I was going to use the recording chip idea for one of my machinmas, but now people may just say I stole it from saints : /
Fishback24 2 years ago
you should still do it
SyntheticsV2 2 years ago
doesnt matter anymore, there are practically no more original ideas left in machinima, they high directors today took most of them
XForRealzXX 2 years ago
or arby n the chief
UltimatelyFinal7 2 years ago
WHOOOOO!!!!!! go european ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
TheIddiotChannel 2 years ago
why is the computers voice the Arbiter from Arby 'n' Chief?!?!?!
SargentNaggles 2 years ago
It's Microsoft Sam. Standard with every PC.
rafis117 2 years ago
good episode, I would have said great but the voice acting needs just a little more work, after that it'll be GREAT! 4/5
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drakosinxx 2 years ago
they all have the sae symbols XD
zhaoify 2 years ago
5/5 this show really improved the camera does not sway as much during action scenes the quality improved same with voice acting the creator listened to the fan base are the viewers and took the advice and fixed the series (:
elitecrank617 2 years ago
(brit accent)
Troi?
leadergdgp 2 years ago
HAHA probobly the worst voice acting exept the irish dude.
stefansnake 2 years ago
pftt the blue spartan was fucking awesome!
Markkoh94 2 years ago
you immature bastard
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crisiscorefen908 2 years ago
shit
Zero1859 2 years ago
they get catch by the leader
MrMikeQuan 2 years ago
they get cought by the leader.
ShmekalofUBCS 2 years ago
if they made a tv show out of this i would watch it
chese789 2 years ago
"Both of you in my office, NOW!"
like seeing the principal LOL
Undermostnewjoe 2 years ago 3
The best of the best... spontaneously lose 90% of their IQ in the presence of a girl, who appears to channel the lost intellect.
I mean, it was a great episode and all, but the storyline was a little... overcompensating.
rafis117 2 years ago
yeah, i could use more story telling here...
colekiker 2 years ago
That was shit
diddymidget 2 years ago
shittiest machinima ever! especially the voices, except for Alice :D
ohh Alice!!!! sexiest voice eva!
DarkFlarePrince 2 years ago
wow, your stupid... this is at the very least ok. Are you one of those type of people that jerk off to a women's voice and just her voice. All of the voice are just fine the way they are. Fucking pig
colekiker 2 years ago
would you like to suck my dick?
DarkFlarePrince 2 years ago
yes
shankineagle 2 years ago
Mr.Scotty Lol
predetor69 2 years ago
lol 5 stars for microsoft sam =)
ProjectD13X 2 years ago
Thats Microsoft Mike not Sam
102skull3 2 years ago 2
it could use a bit of improvement. specifically in the audio. There where a lot of parts where speech or noises abruptly cut off, or music would start playing out of nowhere. For the sounds just take some time to make sure everything completes naturally. As for the music, you might want to use some fade effects so it doesn't seem so out of place when it comes in. when writing scripts, try to avoid reusing the exact same lines like at 3:25 and 3:45 or 1:25 and 6:25. hope that helps.
theloopholeistheahol 2 years ago
lol
nintndofrk800 2 years ago
Awesome vid.
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Talkingdvd 2 years ago
none gives a flying fuck
darksydekyle 2 years ago
really ? :(
Talkingdvd 2 years ago
its okay man, lets just all have some bananas =]
shankineagle 2 years ago
liked it.
cloakedknight321 2 years ago
love the accents :D
yoshypoo 2 years ago
Cool.
zeBIGnoob 2 years ago 2
Nice!!!
Randomtypeofguy 2 years ago 2