It Started at a concert: A Jonas Brothers love Chapter 5 PAR

[PeacexLovexMusic95]

i sooo wish i was kayla<3

[HockeyGoddess15]

HOTTT!!!!!!

[loser2luv]

pushes her against the wall...

i was like someone's little forceful!

but then i saw the GENTLY part...aha :D

[fuzzynice77]

heh heh u kno who makes good stories like her!?!?!?!? xprettyhomeskilletx well i dont rlly kno her name but yea!!!!

[TiffBen67]

like their song says "im burning up, burning up with you baby"

[Tambasco511]

the Nick/Kayla relationship is "Burning Up" so

"Hold On" to your pants kiddies. lol

[jesslynn31993]

lmfao wow!

[summer416]

WHOA BABY! GO NICK!

[Ciinderellla]

You Made Me Laugh!

[kmesmiley94]

wow

[nickjonasfreak1123]

i luv how descriptive that chapter is! im pretending im kayla.... and its rlly fun to!!! i♥ nick jonas!!!!!

[beachgal18]

WOAH BABY!!!!!!! things are heating up and im pretending to be olivia

[xoxtiziana]

omg omg omg omg more more more

[Melyjonas]

yeah lets start over!

NICK-Hey Mely, you see, there's this girl that I really like, but I don't know what to do. I don't know if she even likes me back. But there's one thing I want to do, but I'm a little nervous to do it.

MELY-Well what is it?

NICK-This...

(Nick pushes MELY up against the wall, gently, and starts to kiss her. MELY's surprised at first, but then she relaxes and kisses him back. She puts her arms around his neck as he puts his hands on her waist

*THATS MORE LIKE IT!!*

[DominiqueAZV]

lol

[year3000totheextreme]

oooohh intense!

[lostinmusic313]

wow gaahhh is the word! nick is bad! ( who cares he is hoottt!

[Nickjonasgirl816]

So bad. Dirty dirty boy! I agree who cares he's hot. And if Nick was doing this I wouldn't have no problem with that.

[JonasSisterz08]

WHOOAAAAAAAAAAA BAYBAY;

things were heating up!

you need to make moree like that! :D

[jobrofan16]

LOVE IT.

keep put nick as a bad boy.

i like it.

[mrsnickjonas109]

yeah. i'm definitely gonna pretend that's me there instead'a kayla!!!!!! nick= bad boy! <3

[joejonasluver55]

i no rite?!?! im soooooo gonna b olivia!;)

[mrsnickjonas109]

wow! how.....descriptive! lol i'm just gonna pretend that's me instead of kayla for a minute! lol <3 woooooo! this story is heatin' up if u know what i mean!!!!

[HMJHTrakStar14]

HAHAH XD your funny

[mrsnickjonas109]

oooh! we see nick's bad boy side in this! me like VERY much! how awesome would that be to have nick kiss you???? UH-MAZING!!!!!!!

[joejonasluver55]

i soooooo wish that was joe! it wud be sooooo fridgin awsum if i was oliva and that was joe!

[objmgirl4life]

omg that was soooo steamy haha

[kimjoyp]

INTENSE

[kimjoyp]

GAHHHHH, OMJ nick is a bad boy, a VERY BAD BOY. dang!

[schijnsbabe17]

EGAD!!!! haha sorry i will read chapter 6 now......

[CroBabe0978]

....hey nick is a bad boy in this chapter! lol!......tsk tsk hahaha

[nickjonasismyhero]

omj, it's sooo amazing, i wish nick would kiss me

[ImHisDreamGirl]

WHO DOSENT!!!! LOL

[ejenal1106]

Awesome

[k8lyncruz]

this is sooo freakin' good!

make the next ones please!

[Smofey91]

OMG!! i love this!! its so awesome!! i can not wait to read the next one!! i don't mean to be rude but....HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT ONE.....please!!!

[jbloverX789]

omj omj omj plz more more more more more ok i cannot sleep without reading da nxt part plz more more more more

[OliviaJonas]

haha were trying to come up with ideas ...

GOT ANY??

[sportsjunkiexox]

i wanna read the next part real bad

post more!!

[OliviaJonas]

we will once we get more ideas

[joansbrothersrock]

omg. it is.. (no words to discribe it)

[jonascrazy113]

OMJ

i cant breath

o crap

that was really ummmm descriptive

and awesome

[OliviaJonas]

hahaha don't forget to take a breath haha thanks

[x0x0xNicoleex0x0x]

Im actaully speachless, it was so good o don't know what to say! :D can't wait to find out what happens next!

[LaRee11]

please post more!

STOP READING THIS COMMENT!

no stop!

go write more!

if you are reading this...ohh boy.

JUST STOP!

no!

go write!

please!

;]

[OliviaJonas]

ahaha your hilarious well.. were working on it ... kinda stuck right now.. we'll see but thanks for loving it so much aha

[cougfanakd101]

woah

crazy!

make the next one fast!

its getting good!

[kakeonastik39]

omg!!!!!!!!! that was good!!!!

i suggested that too!!

u guys are amazing!!

write more soon!!

[cutie12311]

Omg this was sooooo UMMM iiDK ive already had subscribed =].......MAKE MORE FAST....

[ImHisDreamGirl]

wow they need to get a room. jk. add the next asap i'm like peeing in my pants i want to know what happens so bad

[OCbeachgirl72]

omg intense

[MrsNicholasJonas114]

sheesh. thats a little..um..well...

[Miroku93]

Hey to anyone that's reading this!!!! It would mean a TON to Olivia and I (Kayla) if you would PLEASE comment/rate and maybe even favorite our stories!!!! Don't forget to take a breath!!!!