Your material needs alot of polishing and it needs to be tighter. You're speaking too quickly and your transitions are also not smoothly executed. You need to lose the bit about fire in theatres, as well as John Wilkes Booth, your audience appears to young for that material. Keep your bits tight, clever and current, your bit with Lady Gaga was a good start but you didn't go far enough with it. Don't try to be a "Maine" comic, branch out and be yourself. Hope this helps.
You friendly neighborhood Dilly, here. You did good bro. A few rough spots but I think that's more "nerves" than anything else. You'll loosen up a bit more and things will flow better for you once you get some more experience. Even so, you did very well, keep it up homie.
Your material needs alot of polishing and it needs to be tighter. You're speaking too quickly and your transitions are also not smoothly executed. You need to lose the bit about fire in theatres, as well as John Wilkes Booth, your audience appears to young for that material. Keep your bits tight, clever and current, your bit with Lady Gaga was a good start but you didn't go far enough with it. Don't try to be a "Maine" comic, branch out and be yourself. Hope this helps.
Furkin44 2 months ago
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maiko882 5 months ago
You friendly neighborhood Dilly, here. You did good bro. A few rough spots but I think that's more "nerves" than anything else. You'll loosen up a bit more and things will flow better for you once you get some more experience. Even so, you did very well, keep it up homie.
UniverseAndI 5 months ago