A Short Story

[Hey1822]

how long is china (look at the end)

[Hey1822]

1:58 look lol



[Flowerenniferting]

What is this song called?

[Amytaylorful]

@xXcracyRainbowXx they are called maplestory characters

[AiSliNgChiA]

OMG should watch this vid with the pirates of the caribbean theme song

[kingdom4tifa]

LOL AT THE FIRST SCENE THE GUY WITH SPIKEY HAIR LOOK AT HIS FACE XD....

[iLuveLyrix]

but why lily said it was over he never do anytihing to her?

[rosepetal29]

Random girl at the end: How long is a china man?

Lol :D

Random guy at start crying: NOOOO I DROPPED MY MUFFIN ; n ;

[rosepetal29]

Random girl at the end: How long is a china man?

Lol :D

[lovelygirl619]

omfg at the end at that my fav song as independent by webbie

[FunsizedBytch]

What game is this?

[miyuchi12]

@FunsizedBytch its maplestory

[JessicaTheWolf1]

this is so beautiful -crys-

[chadman905]

Stunning story, both romantic and dramatic, with an unexpected twist at the end! Simply amazing! YKS Productions voted and your video has been suggested by us as a favorite! If you want YKS Productions will be honored to help in future videos.

Signed,

The owner of YKS Productions

[Chelsea7246]

This video doesnt really make sense but still good storyline =P !

[xXCrazyrainbowXx]

awwwwwwww sooo cute hey ummm where do you get those people i'vre asked everyone and they all said ???????

[98908077]

wad is the name of the first song

[meganemp]

Great Video :D

Oh and where do you find those backgrounds? <3

[thesmiles780]

@meganemp you can download then from the internet, like if you search on google you can find them under images them press file, save image as.

[MasterpezeProduction]

lol the story doesnt make sense, but its good xD

[Fire5G]

Awe so romantic and dramatic at the same time so cool. <33333

[BlackPride01]

LOL AT THE ENDING 5:02 !!!

[UltimaAdrian97]

That was a sweet story.

[xXxbubblyxXx]

this story is almost exactly like my ms like i like a guy named andrew and he looks exactly like that..

[TiffTiff191919]

LOL AT THE END I WAS LIKE WDF

[BiieBoo]

wads with the last part of hw long is a chinaman o_O

[JasonMuchXD]

hmm.......i dont feel a thing after this vid and in between it OO_O_O_O_O

[Nerd3yaznNinja]

hmm, i THINK (psssh, i kno) that the song is..

Boa-moon and sunrise

=^w^=

[iCupcakiex3]

haha love it<3 it made me laugh though *giggles*

[yayawwww146]

wats the name of the song in he beginning>

[cinnabonne]

I honestly love teh story..but it couldve..it really shouldve been extended..

[Gumdrops8423]

woo-hoo 'No dying' XD tht is how all the maple vid.s usually end </3

[asdfghjklzsify]

♥"" Love、、Ｉ　Ｌｉｋｅ　ｉｔ！！！

[TheMaplesuckers]

:D ! finally A happy ending!!! <3 FINALLY NO DYING:D

[DORKiEEx]

o_o .........

[movieclipmaniac]

The short story is pretty good. :D

[cece55443]

hey wats the song that u used?

[vanessa18952]

OMG FINALLY NO DYING!

[thecheergurl4u]

i liked the black sonara wave better...

[Yugioh43ver]

todd dude why you watchin these stuff???? oh yeah im gonna see u at chu yungs house

[XDM0vi3M4k3rXD]

so sad 0.0

[LoveSyalo]

i dont understand =.=''

Ps .

love It!

♥

[TheCivicprincess]

how do they kiss???????? stupid bullshit...

[cookiegirlx5]

They kissed because the girl accidently fell on him.

[sakura1127]

i dnt rly get it...

[SorrowHeart789]

-Crying-

[PrincessJoycie]

Lol, My name is Joyce. xD

andand, I used to have a friend called Lily.

[littleprincessxxxxx]

good story, I loved the ending...

[TeeOnKnee]

i don't get it.... o_O"

[arbour1234]

omgsh! it made me sad!

[kutiestar]

i know a short story too!

*Ahem*

Once upon a tome there was the end....

and well that's about it....

GREAT VID!!!

[Ninjaxgirlx]

Well I'll try and be honest with you. I don't mean to hurt you or anything, but the storyline didn't really have any point or plot to it, and the beginning part where the girl ditched the boy, I don't understand why :\ I just think it's sorta like a bunch of cleashay stuff put together into one video, but don't let my destructive mean words get you down! Maybe try watching some dramas to help build up an inspiriation. Well I hope you get better.

[mariel0222]

haha.. i agree with her!! i also dont have a good talent in writing stories but i still do know how to make one.. ahmm.. like what she said, i suggest you to make sme stories that will suite to your intro. i dont even get the point of pissing out theboy at the first part and then make some weird twist ont he endng.. maybe its better if the girl likes the new guy and something like friendship love.. or something... dont be upset.. maybe it can build up your talent ;) nice vids! :* MORE POWER !!

[ayesha36]

Omgg nice story =] whats up with the end how long is a china man? is dat the song o_O

[xAznxCupcakex]

Lol. i think its someone in the airplane. xDD

[Mztluv3ee]

In my opinion the short story is great..XD.

[kazumasaru69]

This short film was not so great by my opinion. Although I have to admit the storyline was kind of pointless and the music was terrible. Don't let yourself down just by the comment I made or any other comments here on YouTube. I'm just trying to be honest here. All you need is just need a little bit more practice and then you'll succeed if you put a lot of effort into your videos. Just practice some more. :)

[TiffTiff191919]

lol the last part

[SingingGirl90]

I think its a good story and all but its just a little boring like you could at least put some action in it ; D

[Seieukos]

Smooth.

[collinsweek]

Pretty excellent, try to put more sophisticated language into it =]

Anyways love it all.

Well done 5/5 =D

[theCute0ne12]

i luv the first song wats the title?

plz tell me

anyone plz!

[xluvpuffx]

umm that wuz cuteeeee x3

um im bored 0-0

[seacreatures808]

this is boring..... i cannot understand wat is she singing.. poor. :(. hate this song.......

[rainbow76116]

awesome

!!!!

O.o by me *thats my sign*

[mnario]

this is boring

[Vi3tgirlSK]

What is the song? :]

[DragonLordXweetok]

ummm im sry but im getting confused, she broke up w/ him then he has a new gf and he tells her he loves her then she leaves and says she likes jason?? huh? wat?!

[kellfriends2]

lol...

[xKawaiiCrunchx]

@XxAznStarzzxX

oh, just delete dannytheaznguy's comments and mine, too. i'd rather have that then talk to him, its like talking to a wall. =_=

[xKawaiiCrunchx]

how is it good at all? it's fantabulous. x]

[Kewl9090]

ITS NOT GAY!!!!!!!!! It was good xD

[xlVlapleStory]

that made me cried =(

[xlilaznrose4818]

lol nice

[WapleZtory]

lol.

whats with the 'How long is a China man.'

what does that related to the story? o.o''

[gogomis1]

gay

[DannyTheAznGuy]

agreed. its like a 5 year old made it. bad grammar and the storyline doesnt make sense

[xKawaiiCrunchx]

@DannyTheAznGuy

dude, try to make a video yourself, and no one needs to have proper grammar. in fact, everybody uses faces and short form, so you might as well know that typing in full and complete sentences on youtube is really a little old-fashioned. =__=

[DannyTheAznGuy]

only mexicans dont have proper grammar just like u, and lets see u make a video. i had some on but i took them off. and to every1 else jk about the mexican thing o-o

[xKawaiiCrunchx]

i do have a video, smart one.

[DannyTheAznGuy]

wow u call that a video? 3 seconds of bullshit? thier just channel icons and some noob entry and ur videos dont even have good ratings

[0BlackRosePetal0]

er....0-0 okay??? proper grammer isn't that important....

[undeadlanttu]

''How long is a china man'' O.o

well yah, but the story is.. I wouldnt leave anybody.. Its just because of long time. If I would ever have somebody xP

[AnzJacky08]

nice video my brother cryed but i nearly cried too.... well... 5/5 XD

[OMGitsITAI3]

i love it

[moniprincesslollipop]

i love it!

[brokendollzx]

lol?

[Cartimis]

lolz no offense, but the ending, haha its like a video game where ur on a quest. "Lily is leaving and never coming back. Andrew, go stop her." oh, and HOW DO THEY KNOW ABOUT HER LEAVING??? it doesnt show a scene where she tells her friends, they would stop her.

[OneTrueMedia]

What is this song called? Plz tell. Thx.

[xluluangel]

whats the first song and no offense its good but the story kinda corny soryyy =(

[iSN0W]

hello

[LoVeMeViEt]

this video is really effing bad quality. bad grammar. too cheesy. typical love story. HORRiBLE(:

[kauma16]

i do agree with u

[CutieKat9812]

love the video!!!!

[musaxrivenrocks]

ehhem wht was ur first song?

plz tell me

ps kool video ;D

[firebombgirl]

wats ur first song?

[MapleMadGal]

That was niceee the 1st HAPPY short story I ever watched

[XxPrince486]

whats the first song called?!?!!??!?!? D:

[connie7479522]

lmao how long is a china man?

[karusha1224]

Lol. Do ya get it? Ish actually a name Hao Long ish china man x3

[spongefreak26]

If Lily was real i would say to her "lily you dont have to cry.You broke up with him.You had to think of it first"

[Mrsteddyz]

*eyes flood with tears*

[yola0507]

srry misyalo has two s like this: missyalo. the blue girl that was behind andrew while they were at the resturant

[yola0507]

hey the girl wif the blue hair thats staight looks like misyalo the one on the first party

[CamoKatXD]

Pretty good story, but could have used more detail. 4 stars!

[iFlipz]

"How long is a china man?" Rofl. xD I cracked at the end. ;D

[XxPrince486]

whats this song called?

Reply please (first song) :P

[icejunai]

lmao lola china man? haha so sad then a china man[].()0.0 lol XP

[MissLadehAqua]

What is the song called at first?

[xlilfunniazngrlx]

yep yep wats it called?

[lovemaple4EVER]

yaya wats it called... lol? 3 ppl?

[xxknockxxx]

Aww. Wasnt that cute. Lol. It was like the shortess drama story. Kinda confusinf how the characters just popped out of nowhere. Lol

[maplesyrupxD]

what's the song in the video?

[xangellove0]

LMAO "how long a china man"HAHHA ANYWAYZ THE VIDEO IS SOOO AWESOMEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!1 i love itttttttttt <3333333

[beastlyybabby]

AAHAHAH

how longs a china man rofl XD

[LenaleeFanClub]

guys don't u all get it the end was randome on purpose to make ppl laugh after all that dramatic stuff xD I cracket when I saw it! Good job whoever made this awsome vid! :3

[skywaterfaire]

wth how long is a china man???? o.o

[Akeeelah]

when they cry, they cry blue tears...

[OMGitsITAI3]

waoh i love the song <33333333333

[sasukeruler]

idk y i luv vids like this so much o0

[flowervanessa]

So SAD!! I breaked out tears :(

[x3BabyxAngel]

lol o.o

[Hunterpham189]

AH MY NAME IS JASON TOO

"O______O"

[iFishii]

The grammar is not really good...and it doesnt make any sense. the animating was pretty good though, but when using banned story and pasting, you need to fill in the whites.

[scribbleyyx]

i don't like this storyline ,

.. it's liek so weird . how did lily's friend

and jason even know that she was leaving?

she didn't call or anything . <___<; yeah i know it's "fake" but you know , i .. just . .yea.

[iFudggyuu]

LOls

i agree with u (:

i dont get the ending @___@;..its like...it went

-BAM-

like how does she just go "i do" just like that? .____.;kinda confused here lmao;

lmao

[PurpleGlitterStars]

When you made them cry, it looked like they were sweating ;P

[starlightbandit9]

i dont dink i saw dis yt so .. .ya very good story kinda confusin but still good

[aisukii]

xD loll

[InUrCloSeTxD]

haha rofl how long is a china man

[aznlovegurl]

WTF!!!

i dont like this story...

it dont make any sense at all

BSBSBSBSBSBS~~~~~

[demdemhappy]

wats up wit the ending 0.O

[SnowMinn]

china is 16 hours XO

[Katsurui]

LOLLOL. How long is a china man!?!?!?

LMAOOOO. If people don't get that at first. then you are not a perverted mind. ROFL.

Nice [;

[SlushiesR0ck]

how long is a china man???

[iCandeex3]

nice job :] the picture at the end is funny xD

[angelstar1994]

if she loved him why did she dumb him confused.... but good job....

[SunBreak]

Lol! The picture at the ending.

[lVlaplecrazygirl]

don't really understand but i still like it :D

[AznNLonely]

the grammar is horrible...it kills the story...

[SuikaHime]

....nor offence....but...this rlly doesnt make sense...o-o im rlly confused.

[ebbica]

oooh nice video! >8D plus nice backgrounds. Where did u get them? O_O

[xXUAEXx123]

omg that hotel game is sooooo boring... it's worst then club penguins..but good with ur videos

[COSHERTHINGS]

Can someone tell's Me what's The song called?

[animefan1287]

The song is Moon and Sunrise by Boa~ hope that helps :]

[mayangelz]

lol cute!

[iiCl0uds]

*blurs.

wasnt lily q0inq t0 call jas0n? 0r maybe she did but idk. =x

[shahua12345]

Wait..Confuesd..Some guy takes the girls bag..And then she agrees to call him??? wth??

[ke0ni23]

uhh..some one please tell me about the ending....i dont get it??? with the china thing.....

[cRy4eVeRiNtEaRs]

omg ! so cute. <3 I love it

[SaffronsBow]

Holy shit my names Lily and I dumped my bf andrew O.o thats freaky but were just friends now

[xknocklyy]

wat is the last song?

=]reply plz <3

[1337Figaro]

Habbo hotel is boring

[xx1ststarxx]

hi anna lol

[XxAznStarzzxX]

hi leon so long no talk lol :]

[grapefruitx]

she has no reason to leave him behind so why??

[animalgirl92]

they have no hair....

[moonlightamy]

nice x]

[MiCEYBUTT]

What's the Song?

[XxAznStarzzxX]

Moon & sunrise by Boa

[MiCEYBUTT]

Thanks. (:

[roaringbunneh]

They're too poor to buy shoes? :[

Give them moneh.

[roaringbunneh]

Shame on you....

-shakes head-

[roaringbunneh]

Their feet will get all scratchy.

CONSIDERATION HELPS ANNA.

Even if it's pixels.

:D

[XxAznStarzzxX]

sheesh helen --_--"

[roaringbunneh]

My hand slipped over the keyboard and typed all that.....

Accidentally.

[roaringbunneh]

Look at this poor chap apologizing.

Clearly, the video maker should be apologizing.

-nods head-

[aznarol]

Lolz, the ending with the "How Long is a Chinaman." XD Lily should have not chosen anyone and went on with her life.

Better quote (IF it WAS the ending I just said):

"Parting is all we know of Heaven and all we need to know of Hell."

Nice video anyways... yes, it was a long comment like you claimed on the phone just seconds ago... XP

[roaringbunneh]

OBJECTION!

They have no shoes.....!

>:O