Short Film | 5th Monday

[harvey288]

hahaha the link is now at the bottom so this was funny to watch

[gatitoroulette15]

Wow u'r great I liked both saranoia and Bittersweet! .. so have u taken film courses or what? ur so good with editing!! I cannot even use windows moviemaker lol ok too dramatic haha

[VDFM1]

FIlm looks great, my compliments!

check out one of my shorts

[TheBrokeProductions]

amazing film! ive made two short movies (very amateur) using my cell phone cam corder, i know, im not very smart. haha. my parents wont let me even buy a camera with my own money. but hey, i gotta start some where. thank you for all the amazing tips and movies. ;)

[uSpacho]

wow that was amazing

i loved it

thanks

[theshawn10]

it was cool

[simeneggeboe]

NICE!!! It was a bit scary ((()))

[Joeyz444]

good job

[funface324]

wow that was a great film the whole time i thoght i was watching a film from a older directer good great awsome

[sunshinegirl510]

How old are you and Evan? I read your website and it doesn't say. I read about Evan and saw it said he helped with commercials?! I don't know but it sounds impressive and I just wanted to know how old you guys are because you really inspired me to follow my dream.

[filmtipsandtutorials]

Haha, sorry for the late response, youtube is messed up with comments. We are so glad to hear that! Evan and I are 14.

:-)

[Film5tutorials]

Nice ! This is a good film.

[ImJoshUrNot]

yuck

[Chromajt]

Great job luca i will be sure to let u see geocache when we are done with it

[MartinTheDude123]

Really good!

[kalaniman1movies]

exactly what was your input into this film?

[filmtipsandtutorials]

What do you mean?

Like my job on set?

I was the director and co-writer

[kalaniman1movies]

COOL

how many people where involved in the production?

and what film school type thingy did you make it at

[Untadaike]

That was really, really, really good. Subscribed!

You had some nice actors! Also, really gould continuity with camera angles.

I would've like to see more shots and/or scenes somewhere else besides in their apartment/house. Just to have a break from the other stuff and wouldn't elongated the time nicely. Another thing, the lip sinc was a little off at some points but maybe that's due to the video player or something.

Besides that, really excellent!

[Andrahim]

Great Vid but how did you pay 2000$ for that camera is it worth it I am looking for a new camera

[elazarn2]

great film, but who is Sara?

[filmtipsandtutorials]

Saranoia = Sleep + Paranoia

[elazarn2]

:-D i know the feeling well.

[jclarey1297]

very nice shortfilm! 9/10

[nitronixasd]

There were some parts that need looking at...agreed...but its a tremendous effort on your part. Good planning, lots of good psychology in there, well done!

[jinjaboy1]

the film was great

[FotoShopped]

Awesome!! Dude this is great! Where'd you find the actors?

[ChaoticCorey]

nice shortfilm! I really enjoyed it!

[swetrich]

i liked it

im in the process of scripting my first serious short film.

I liked that you used adults because it seemed more professional

who wrote that?

also how come it wasnt hd the only thing that really bugged me was the quality not being as high as your tutorials and such

[mrpa8ntball]

i kept seeing how much time waz left cuz i didnt want it to end 10/10 awesome

[0riginalSam]

lol i made the titles for the movie it was awesome

[federeriscol]

nice film man, 8/10

two epic fails in this video lol

[NkostelMedia]

I liked it. How much did the camera cost that you filmed with? A where did you get your actors?

[TheEIPfan]

I thought it was awesome dude its nice to see some of your work i give it a 9/10

[goldenjabba]

Suprise FAIL.

Lol, just kidding, I'll be sure to watch it :)

[sethhardtoget]

it had good acting and story, but i heard a little too much background noise. Did you use an external mic? Also you should've had some steadier shots with the walking scenes. But the rest is awesome!

[filmtipsandtutorials]

We didn't have the most amazing equipment, or boom operator, haha, we just used a dynamic microphone that singers use in live performances

[supertom123]

A surprise ending? now its no longer a surprise lol

[filmtipsandtutorials]

lol

[SportsCurry]

very good film in my opinion... it was slightly predictable though (the reason for the earrings being moved, etc.) but i feel that the main idea for the film was great. I'd give it 8.5/10

[Techwebolution]

Watched it earlier today. Good job!