@saph2104, mate good terminology, ordering people around is known as directing. Also why do you feel the urge to swear, is your vocabulary that limited, besides, this is old material, watch my new stuff, i am alot older and more professional now, i also think that you could not produce a video up to quarter of this ones standard, do you even know what masking or colour grading are? Don't think you are amazing at something you haven't tried. Don't critisise me because you don't have skill
@smyile117 No you moron, in the video (you know the shitty one that you created) there was a little kid voicing as the person that orders them. Oh, I just watched your new video also, terrible. You really should give up. On a last note, masking and colour grading are some of the most basic editing so don't think you're "good" just because you know how to do it. I know you think these are good videos, but truly, anything you create will have a positive outlook in your mind.
@saph2104 actually i do not beliveve i am "good". But do not make a negative comment without constructive critisism, that is just a waste of time. I do not belive i am terrible but im not going "I'm the best film director eva!!??!!". So don't make assumptions about me. And don't call me a moron because you did not portray your comment properly.
@smyile117 tbh, the video was a bit hard to follow. Also, you repeated cannons twice considering MAC stands for Magnetic Accelerator Cannon. Other than those two things, and a few other minor issues, this was fairly good. Keep up the good work, son. 3/5
LOL no offense, but don't associate your name with rooster teeth. Your machinima was terrible. Adding productions to your "company name" doesn't make it good. And your episode was short, terrible, and you tried to copy "Why are we here" to a degree that no one would find out. But guess what! I did..
@smyile117.. AWESOME. well thought out, well written, good voice acting, good music selection ;D overall 8/10
@ohenry345 hey thanks man, when you were speaking to clutchwallet i thought you were talking to me, thank god you wernt, thanks for the comment, i will send you a FR
no offence but this isnt infiltrating and it definitely isnt stealthy, infiltrating would be when you send in someone stealthy to silently get a job done these guys walk in and kill everyone in there path lol
@Littleguy42 Actually it is infiltrating. they are infiltrating enemy lines to reach there target. You might have to kill a patrol or two to get there. But primarily that is the name because i couldn't think of another.
Hey smyile117 i just watched this video and i wanted to know if i could help out. So.. if i can message me on XBOX LIVE and let me know my GT: Stripes213
@PvtChurchBA lol hey man i dont think i need help with camera work, but id be ahppy to have you as a screen actor. i will add you later today or tommorow
@117Glitchmaster ?? idont understand the comment, but i tried was trying to get you to not make comments like, does ayone care you have an 8 yr old voice. cause that makes you sound like your trying to piss me off. anyway whatever
at some parts the music volume goes down abruptly, one of the spartans speak, and then it violently goes back up. you should try to smooth that out a bit, and speak up. when your at war you don't speak so smoothly, make the characters kind of yell. not necessarily yell, but at least a half yell, you know what i mean? other wise good job.
@DoYouLakBanannas hey man, thanks for the comment, it's annoying my videos dont get more views, especially infiltrartion part 2. I will send you a YT FR. cheers mate
ive always wanted yo do a machinima, but my friends keep leaving whenever i try to to it. and there never online. can i be in yours? GT: InfamousKing741
Okay, i mean its good great sstory line and all but voice acting threw it apart i mean like im not saying their bad or anything but get "older" people to voice it over, just a suggestion
@smyile117 shut the fuck up I'm just trying to find someone with a capture card so I can make machinimas that could probally kick your infagetration videos ass so shut the fuck up and suck a German cock
I'm lookin for a friend with a capture card to make machinimas if you have one and are interrested in staring in machinimas contact me on xbox live my gamertag is bargl917
@3pencilsss hey hey, dont come to this vid and try to take screen actors from it without commenting or rating it well, i am going to reomve this comment, make a promo vi if you are looking for screen actors
No offense but the voice over was... Amateur? I could really careless but it seemed like this was meant to be serious i took it... Like a comedy mostly. Don't get me wrong the script was good it was just the tones,etc used. Anyways good machinima.
well, always keep him as the rebel, plus, was he the rocket guy? And after you boot him, we will have a ten minute tea-bag party. I can get some people
@smyile117 I was saying that the whole time. XD! Hey dude, don't tell him, but next time when you film, and he's there and acting retarded again, I'm gonna film for my series. Don't tell him. It's called Xbox Live LOLs!
I am a complete stranger who happened to find this vid, i felt kind, so i rated 5 stars. p.s i totally like was not acting in this and my gamertag is definately not super small. (giant wink).
fast and effiently = spam rockets at light infantry lol
RapidReaperJohn 1 month ago
@RapidReaperJohn lolz
smyile117 1 month ago
pro like a boss my friend
great editing
CallumsVNETWoRK 1 month ago
wow that was really cool thumbs up all the ways guys
CallumsVNETWoRK 1 month ago
Not half bad voice acting, great soundtrack, and a decent story. Overall, good work.
nobodysman143 4 months ago
@nobodysman143 thanks man
smyile117 4 months ago
-_-
VilaV809 1 year ago
wow russians who didnt see that 1 comeing
HahaIShotU 1 year ago
@HahaIShotU They sare not ll russians, the hierarch just happens to be russian :)
smyile117 1 year ago
1:29-2:11 What is that songs name? I have looked and looked for it and can not find it....by the way good video!
HaShim383 1 year ago
loooooooooooool
jdbmin 1 year ago
u cant get much older in the length of twelve months
mandude778 1 year ago
LMAO 12 year old ordering people in the video. How fucking lame is this
saph2104 1 year ago
@saph2104, mate good terminology, ordering people around is known as directing. Also why do you feel the urge to swear, is your vocabulary that limited, besides, this is old material, watch my new stuff, i am alot older and more professional now, i also think that you could not produce a video up to quarter of this ones standard, do you even know what masking or colour grading are? Don't think you are amazing at something you haven't tried. Don't critisise me because you don't have skill
smyile117 1 year ago 2
@smyile117 No you moron, in the video (you know the shitty one that you created) there was a little kid voicing as the person that orders them. Oh, I just watched your new video also, terrible. You really should give up. On a last note, masking and colour grading are some of the most basic editing so don't think you're "good" just because you know how to do it. I know you think these are good videos, but truly, anything you create will have a positive outlook in your mind.
saph2104 1 year ago
@saph2104 actually i do not beliveve i am "good". But do not make a negative comment without constructive critisism, that is just a waste of time. I do not belive i am terrible but im not going "I'm the best film director eva!!??!!". So don't make assumptions about me. And don't call me a moron because you did not portray your comment properly.
smyile117 1 year ago
@saph2104 both of you cut it out if you critizise him so much then dont watch the video dumbass
TheDemonoftheleaf 1 year ago
@TheDemonoftheleaf yeah, but it is my video and he is critisiing it so i am just trying to see why he does not like it
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 tbh, the video was a bit hard to follow. Also, you repeated cannons twice considering MAC stands for Magnetic Accelerator Cannon. Other than those two things, and a few other minor issues, this was fairly good. Keep up the good work, son. 3/5
irishceaser 1 year ago
@saph2104 i still dont see any good uploads from you, in fact no uploads, and i have been working on CGI, and that is not basic u fag.
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 are you guys done fighting this is pointless
TheDemonoftheleaf 1 year ago
THIZ R GAY FUCKIGHN SHIT I HOP U DIE 2MORROW!!!!!!!111!!1!!!1!!one1!!!
JK i thought this was very original, exeptional camera angles, and i love this even more due to the fact its British!
kingLego123 1 year ago
that comment is to far get lost you dream ruiner id laugh if hes sucsssesful and your working as a bin man in future
Funkyproductions182 7 months ago
@Funkyproductions182 Lol are yo talking to me?
smyile117 7 months ago
@Funkyproductions182 I apologize if i went to far
smyile117 2 months ago
Great effects, great angles, everything was great. I thought it was awesome that all your actors actually cooperate.
GruntHappyStudios 1 year ago
uh wow this was BAD i couldnt tell who the fuck was talking the entire fucking time. Nah, JK good story but i really could tell who was talking :)
mattdickson2 1 year ago
@1:08- Let's avoid the enemy convoy stealthily, now a few seconds later, let's blow the living fuck out of an enemy patrol. Make up your mind!
Good story though, much more original than the everyday- "Oh my God! The Covenant are coming!!!"
Ginger0spark 1 year ago
@Ginger0spark lol i know, watch part 2 it is much improved
smyile117 1 year ago
@1:08- Let's avoid the enemy convoy stealthily, now a few seconds later, let's blow the living fuck out of an enemy patrol. Make up your mind!
Ginger0spark 1 year ago
well this fails
BrokenXboxProduction 1 year ago
@BrokenXboxProduction back up your statements, also watch part 2 i have improved alot and have good voice actors such a stormray an aidannms
smyile117 1 year ago
i like the military style thing
fatlizzard19 1 year ago
ad me gt:Mike dog25
mikedog251 1 year ago
i would luv to make a machinima but no one will help
08al08al 1 year ago
awsome vids. if u can add me.gamertag: TCOG66
Nfs0072005 1 year ago
nice camra work are you familiar with Rooster Teeth And Clutch Wallet Productions
Clutchwallet 1 year ago
@Clutchwallet
LOL no offense, but don't associate your name with rooster teeth. Your machinima was terrible. Adding productions to your "company name" doesn't make it good. And your episode was short, terrible, and you tried to copy "Why are we here" to a degree that no one would find out. But guess what! I did..
@smyile117.. AWESOME. well thought out, well written, good voice acting, good music selection ;D overall 8/10
Also great camera work!
ohenry345 1 year ago
@ohenry345 hey thanks man, when you were speaking to clutchwallet i thought you were talking to me, thank god you wernt, thanks for the comment, i will send you a FR
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 20\20 nice work
MrCodmw223 1 year ago
@ohenry345 what did clutchwallet say? the comment was removed
fatlizzard19 1 year ago
no offence but this isnt infiltrating and it definitely isnt stealthy, infiltrating would be when you send in someone stealthy to silently get a job done these guys walk in and kill everyone in there path lol
Littleguy42 1 year ago
@Littleguy42 Actually it is infiltrating. they are infiltrating enemy lines to reach there target. You might have to kill a patrol or two to get there. But primarily that is the name because i couldn't think of another.
smyile117 1 year ago
good vid but lead was only used in muskets......
AK47VSM162010 1 year ago
Its always the dumasses who dislike the good stuff
yemster13 1 year ago
id like to be in one of ur videos my gamertag is. dlza .exactly as it is
G2Gproduction 1 year ago
Hey smyile117 i just watched this video and i wanted to know if i could help out. So.. if i can message me on XBOX LIVE and let me know my GT: Stripes213
LilBrown213 1 year ago
Hey, if you ever need help, i can voice act pretty well! Like, i can make a radio sounding voice for walkie talkies and stuff.
DeathfallStudios 1 year ago
if you want to get this machinima to be any better, i suggest you get better voice actors
blueskittle1885 1 year ago
@blueskittle1885 i have got better voice actors now watch part 2 :)
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 yeah dude, I'd love to help, anything from driving to camera work. Message me. GT: Agent Stallings
PvtChurchBA 1 year ago
@PvtChurchBA lol hey man i dont think i need help with camera work, but id be ahppy to have you as a screen actor. i will add you later today or tommorow
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 Thats fine, but, my mic isnt working, like, i can talk and all but sometimes it goes extremely faint. just a little heads up
PvtChurchBA 1 year ago
@smyile117 If you need any spare help still, (if any) message me, GT: Drak1234. Thanks
valleeproductions2 1 year ago
@smyile117 if there is any possible way i could join this it would be great
yemster13 1 year ago
@smyile117 does anybody kare u have a 12 year old voice or 13. i dont
117Glitchmaster 1 year ago
@117Glitchmaster ermm i actually was thirteen when this was made... so arnt you cool.
smyile117 1 year ago
@117Glitchmaster and look its better than any shit you have made, oh wait you havn't made anything, watch part 2, i made that recently.
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 i wasnt trying to piss you off i actually liked it. like 20 times and cant wate for your 3rd part
117Glitchmaster 1 year ago
@117Glitchmaster thanks man, sorry i was in a bad mood, thanks for the support.
peace
smyile117 1 year ago
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117Glitchmaster 1 year ago
@117Glitchmaster ?? idont understand the comment, but i tried was trying to get you to not make comments like, does ayone care you have an 8 yr old voice. cause that makes you sound like your trying to piss me off. anyway whatever
smyile117 1 year ago
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117Glitchmaster 1 year ago
@117Glitchmaster yeah, kl, part 3 is nearly co,plete and shouold be ready in the next few weeks.
smyile117 1 year ago
@117Glitchmaster also sorry about beiing a dick, i will talk to you later.
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 kay last comm for a while can you be in my machinima? i need body and voice actors.
117Glitchmaster 1 year ago
I've seen a lot of crap machinima's, but this one's realy good
good job mate
flytrap1234 1 year ago
at some parts the music volume goes down abruptly, one of the spartans speak, and then it violently goes back up. you should try to smooth that out a bit, and speak up. when your at war you don't speak so smoothly, make the characters kind of yell. not necessarily yell, but at least a half yell, you know what i mean? other wise good job.
ha1ofanc51 1 year ago
this is good.... cant believe no body watches it!!!!!
DoYouLakBanannas 1 year ago
@DoYouLakBanannas hey man, thanks for the comment, it's annoying my videos dont get more views, especially infiltrartion part 2. I will send you a YT FR. cheers mate
Matt
smyile117 1 year ago
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rOFwAFFLEz 1 year ago
Wow Good machinima man :D
rOFwAFFLEz 1 year ago
hi i got loads of good idears for machimas can i help with one some time my GM is: djfuzz1 thanks
CrazyHaloCrap 1 year ago
ive always wanted yo do a machinima, but my friends keep leaving whenever i try to to it. and there never online. can i be in yours? GT: InfamousKing741
fear741 1 year ago
can I be in someones machinima (XxRalphyBoyxX) is my gamertag
XxRalphyBoyxX 1 year ago
@XxRalphyBoyxX sur eman i will add you
smyile117 1 year ago
hey mayby i can be in a mahinima too. (Bear Jew xNukex) i have all armours including recon. ':)
xAssassin09x 1 year ago
bad ass straight up nice vid dudes
kalebkills 1 year ago
......................................
killerwolfstudios 1 year ago
decent camera work. Voices a bit high, but overall good
macandfriends 1 year ago
Okay, i mean its good great sstory line and all but voice acting threw it apart i mean like im not saying their bad or anything but get "older" people to voice it over, just a suggestion
Alster104 1 year ago
evryone go to my channel and watch infiltration part 2
smyile117 1 year ago
can i be in ur next machinima too
jrock9522 1 year ago
@lilhoLm3z k man i will add you later
smyile117 1 year ago
hey smyile i was wondering if i could be in a machinima with u my gamertag is TraveledTie
jrock9522 1 year ago
the voices really suck, need to be improved
rberr28 1 year ago
I'd recommend that you take away shields and up the damage resistance,
unless you where intedning for them to have shields,
alos some of the character movements need refining but pretty good anyways!
3.8/5 stars
hyuugabrother 1 year ago
@smyile117 shut the fuck up I'm just trying to find someone with a capture card so I can make machinimas that could probally kick your infagetration videos ass so shut the fuck up and suck a German cock
3pencilsss 1 year ago
I'm lookin for a friend with a capture card to make machinimas if you have one and are interrested in staring in machinimas contact me on xbox live my gamertag is bargl917
3pencilsss 1 year ago
@3pencilsss hey hey, dont come to this vid and try to take screen actors from it without commenting or rating it well, i am going to reomve this comment, make a promo vi if you are looking for screen actors
smyile117 1 year ago
@3pencilsss ah shame, still no videos up, that can kick my ones assess. You wouldn't even be doing the camera work if you dont have a capure card
smyile117 1 year ago
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THIS SUCKS
Xx808SniperxX 1 year ago
cool lol
halomaster7691 1 year ago
oh oh can i be in your next vid gt is DEATH HUNTER 5
ODSTSPARTAN777 2 years ago
sure dd my gT on xobx... dontshooootme it might havespaces i can rmember
smyile117 2 years ago
No offense but the voice over was... Amateur? I could really careless but it seemed like this was meant to be serious i took it... Like a comedy mostly. Don't get me wrong the script was good it was just the tones,etc used. Anyways good machinima.
DETNAITE 2 years ago
yh thanks mate im gettig better voice actors in now and my nex episode looks really good.
smyile117 2 years ago
U Smyile, about True Ownage, dont be afraid to boot him if he acts like a 2 year old
HellHawkProductions 2 years ago
lol im not afraid 2 boot him hes my little bro its just that we need eery1 we can get sometimes
smyile117 2 years ago
well, always keep him as the rebel, plus, was he the rocket guy? And after you boot him, we will have a ten minute tea-bag party. I can get some people
HellHawkProductions 2 years ago
did you make the other episodes yet?
73mazzoni 2 years ago
they are nearly complete and very epic
smyile117 2 years ago
pretty sweet. really intense. i wanna make a machinima, but i dont know what software to use. what did u use? cuz that was great.
73mazzoni 2 years ago
srry, i did that, i was stupid XD. anywayz, hi.
Tiernan420
HellHawkProductions 2 years ago
thts k mate kinda my fault ture ownage was being a bit of a twat to
smyile117 2 years ago
@smyile117 I was saying that the whole time. XD! Hey dude, don't tell him, but next time when you film, and he's there and acting retarded again, I'm gonna film for my series. Don't tell him. It's called Xbox Live LOLs!
HellHawkProductions 2 years ago
lol
GhostGamingMW2 2 years ago
hi mate thx for commenting :) yh i made a bit of a slip up with the callender... that is the year.
smyile117 2 years ago
hey great vid:D ill subscribe if you at least watch my videos:)
XxFreakFighterxX 2 years ago
thx man ill check out your vids
smyile117 2 years ago
that was really good,u deffy got a whole lot better sice your other series
Boobumoog 2 years ago
thx mate, if you want to be init just say the word
smyile117 2 years ago
i would love to be in it,i jsut dont have xbox live right now,i should be sometime soon but im not 100% sure
Boobumoog 2 years ago
LOL i was looking backwards sorry smyile
WrongGaming 2 years ago
rofl thats alrite man thanks for helping
smyile117 2 years ago
gr8 work 5*
campbellstudi0s 2 years ago
thanx for helping man, oh do you want to direct a series togeather ill be happy to. oh BTW your voice acting was spot on mate
smyile117 2 years ago
I am a complete stranger who happened to find this vid, i felt kind, so i rated 5 stars. p.s i totally like was not acting in this and my gamertag is definately not super small. (giant wink).
TheWiseMan3000 2 years ago
rofl max thanx for helping man
smyile117 2 years ago
ye that would be gr8 man thnks
campbellstudi0s 2 years ago