I like the song, but might I suggest a high pass (low cut) filter just above 60 Hz? you are getting that low frequency wah wah wah wah sound from your recording equipment, this can be easily removed with an equalizer. Just set all frequencies below 63 hz to -15 dB or so.
Nice skills man...ive been playing guitar for about two months, and I try to play stuff like by just doing simple cords, and they work out very well. Keep it up, you have a lot of potencial
thats Great!!!! fuckin awesome dude, get a band get a label man. this is top grade stuff. i want my band to sound kinda like this. good simple guitar part, and interesting vocal melody its great!! i want u in my band!!
lol i feel pity on people who tries to insult other people, and you dont even have a video to prove that your better, more over by just commenting negatively your showing everyone who reads this comment how bad your personality is. i feel sorry for you man =]
ERM What can I say without being offensive... I like the song and you play the guitar so well however I agree with 1 of the other comments you are a bit out of key when you sing so maybe touch up on that a bit and also why not try doing a bit of McFly or Busted style in there at the chorus like be slow at first and then really jamm....that would be more interesting. Otherwise you are a very talented guitarist and writer if you wrote the song.
Wonderfull song.. almost got me speechless there! very sweet lyrics.. love the guitar.. and your voice.. would be kinda nice if you wrote to me sometime (:
Seems like good idea, it was just poorly performed. Vocally it was out of tune in some spots and lacked emotion and feel. Guitar wise...Its a pretty basic theme and to be honest, it lacked feel and dynamics. It was somewhat zombie-ish. Sorry dude, I'll check out some more videos but jake coco was alot better and this sounded nothing like John Mayer, maybe more like JJ but then again JJ shouldn't even be spoken about in the same sentence as JM.
Sorry, didn't do anything for me. Weak singing that's hard to understand, trite guitar playing, and rather annoying all the way around. If I find a different opinion on your other songs, I'll leave a comment.
hehe yeah your right its good. Btw i have a fine trick for you. If you want to be sure your voice tone is alright, just block one of your ear. You'll hear yourself better. ;) Don't stop you have talent, :3
this are for people who tries to type but can't correctly.
dids42 2 years ago
Nice simple guitar and great singing and song......well done . I'd agree with the 1st comment about improving your recording equip. slightly .
mikmc 2 years ago
I like the song, but might I suggest a high pass (low cut) filter just above 60 Hz? you are getting that low frequency wah wah wah wah sound from your recording equipment, this can be easily removed with an equalizer. Just set all frequencies below 63 hz to -15 dB or so.
arg13415 3 years ago
Nice skills man...ive been playing guitar for about two months, and I try to play stuff like by just doing simple cords, and they work out very well. Keep it up, you have a lot of potencial
jorgeltm 3 years ago
love it :d
krulie123 3 years ago
thats Great!!!! fuckin awesome dude, get a band get a label man. this is top grade stuff. i want my band to sound kinda like this. good simple guitar part, and interesting vocal melody its great!! i want u in my band!!
allguitarsforme 3 years ago
woooow, thanks so much!
Trickofdisaster 3 years ago
you suck hard ahh da da da da da da i think your guitar is broken all i hear is crap
gstrings50 3 years ago
pointless comment buddy. keep that shit to yourself or just skip to the next vid! easy as that.
Royal11Eleven 2 years ago
lol i wouldnt trust anything anyone with gstring in their name says :P very nice song...
cymropur 3 years ago
pretty sweet song mate.
Levottomat01 3 years ago
This comment has received too many negative votes show
break your guitar and swallow arsenic
gstrings50 4 years ago
That makes my list of most negative comments ever. Thank you!
Trickofdisaster 4 years ago
lol i feel pity on people who tries to insult other people, and you dont even have a video to prove that your better, more over by just commenting negatively your showing everyone who reads this comment how bad your personality is. i feel sorry for you man =]
SimpleBassist 3 years ago
this are for the people who tries to insult this guy who helped me a lot with my piano skills thru his videos.
SimpleBassist 3 years ago
Definitly jack's style. if any one wants to see some similiar stuff click the name (note- is in tune).
samblakelock 4 years ago
are you implying im not in tune?
Trickofdisaster 4 years ago
still my favorite of your songs
BillyBughead 5 years ago
Thanks!
Trickofdisaster 5 years ago
I think... this song is perfect. ^__^ Another amazing one.
IzzaTHEgreat 5 years ago
"I think your perfect, I think your simply wonderful"
I LOVE YOU, YOUR MUSIC, & ALL your songs !
I would love to have your videos on myspace, if its ok
and if you have a myspace band account i would love to add you ! <3 Aliscia
aliscia13 5 years ago
Keep writing !
There's nothing like creating origional stuff.
Peace,
J.L.
JackHL 5 years ago
ERM What can I say without being offensive... I like the song and you play the guitar so well however I agree with 1 of the other comments you are a bit out of key when you sing so maybe touch up on that a bit and also why not try doing a bit of McFly or Busted style in there at the chorus like be slow at first and then really jamm....that would be more interesting. Otherwise you are a very talented guitarist and writer if you wrote the song.
angiec0307 5 years ago
Thanks so much!
Trickofdisaster 5 years ago
Wonderfull song.. almost got me speechless there! very sweet lyrics.. love the guitar.. and your voice.. would be kinda nice if you wrote to me sometime (:
KisslingPRP 5 years ago
not quite coco
morsosky 5 years ago
Seems like good idea, it was just poorly performed. Vocally it was out of tune in some spots and lacked emotion and feel. Guitar wise...Its a pretty basic theme and to be honest, it lacked feel and dynamics. It was somewhat zombie-ish. Sorry dude, I'll check out some more videos but jake coco was alot better and this sounded nothing like John Mayer, maybe more like JJ but then again JJ shouldn't even be spoken about in the same sentence as JM.
steevo124 5 years ago
Sorry, didn't do anything for me. Weak singing that's hard to understand, trite guitar playing, and rather annoying all the way around. If I find a different opinion on your other songs, I'll leave a comment.
gregarious24 5 years ago
hehe yeah your right its good. Btw i have a fine trick for you. If you want to be sure your voice tone is alright, just block one of your ear. You'll hear yourself better. ;) Don't stop you have talent, :3
Yameki 5 years ago
i love your songs. you should have album ( i like have fun in iran too~ ^^)
shuddupfirst 5 years ago
I really liked this one!
cjharlow 5 years ago
Nice job!
Fangfueler 5 years ago
That was beautiful. I hope our intrested in helping out with the youtube music collaboration.
quarantinejosh 5 years ago
very good! you have great talent.
MrsPeacock 5 years ago
Thanks!
Trickofdisaster 5 years ago
PRETTY GOOD SONG
evanescence4 5 years ago
Thanks so much!
Trickofdisaster 5 years ago
That was good.
hloosn8pgs 5 years ago
Thanks!
Trickofdisaster 5 years ago
Thanks guys!
Trickofdisaster 5 years ago
cool song :D and great voice dude
houjunlee 5 years ago
That's a nice song, you're a really good songwriter. This would be great to hear with full production done on it.
AngryAussie 5 years ago
Thanks!
Trickofdisaster 5 years ago
Post this as a response to one of my new videos and you'll get more plays : )
-Cory
smpfilms 5 years ago