Josh Theisen - Surviving The Times Remix(Nas)

[MortaL1F3]

bad. quit

[indefinable88]

That was Good. Sounds like u spat the whole thing live, and u didn't warm up properly until the 3rd verse.. or maybe they were just better flows.. but either way i think your a Good writer and if the first half of the track was as Good as the last bit then the whole thing would be bang on..

Contradict my statement just to cause a fucking argument! haha

[killthenakedcat]

@indefinable88 Hey man thanks....and I agree completely with the whole flow switch-up being for the better...thats my biggest issue generally...always felt comfortable as a writer. And ya man it's generally a 1 take deal with me...thanks for the criticism, I definitely can use it.

[indefinable88]

@killthenakedcat cool. if u really wanna get ur name heard and stuff, getting ur own beats would be an advantage, n get a chorus to link the verses. n record each verse individually. Peace bro

[Wilbanian]

man keep going