Besides the grammar errors you've already acknowledged, this looks great so far. It was actually pretty interesting, unlike a lot of RPG exposition; I can see you've done a decent amount of world-building.
I'm looking forward to playing the finished project. :) Keep up the good work!
A very nice sequence, man! o_o There were a few tiny, grammatical errors in there. Other than those, though, very, very lovely. ^_^ Did you make all those graphics yourself???
Besides the grammar errors you've already acknowledged, this looks great so far. It was actually pretty interesting, unlike a lot of RPG exposition; I can see you've done a decent amount of world-building.
I'm looking forward to playing the finished project. :) Keep up the good work!
february4sunbeams 2 years ago
I realised that I uploaded an uneditted rough draft :\. I'll make sure I correct the mistakes (I can see them already myself).
macubex12 2 years ago
A very nice sequence, man! o_o There were a few tiny, grammatical errors in there. Other than those, though, very, very lovely. ^_^ Did you make all those graphics yourself???
doughnutdoofus1 2 years ago
suck my deck betch.
kefkarz 2 years ago
oh, kefkar, you sillykins
CielBlanche 2 years ago