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  • Very nice, but maybe a bit slow.

  • I don't know how to do typography, but I am overly obsessed with it, so I suppose that gives me some authority.

    Anyway, this is what I recommend: Increase the speed (it drags on, leaving the reader hanging: they should never stop reading except during a dramatic pause)

    and get it to flow more smoothly: it seems to come in bits and pieces, sentence by sentence, where it should be kept flowing constantly, save again for dramatic effect.

    Hope this is useful to you.

  • its not too bad, but it wouldve been better if you added some appropriate music to it.

  • THiS IS COOOL!

  • 5* for this fine video !

  • Omg i just re-watched this and I'm still laughing my ass off at the end.

    I have no idea why it's so funny to me.

  • wow that was really well done! You got the punchline just right ;)

  • Lol nicely done

  • well done! the glass shape made me thirsty...

  • LMAO I adore Terry Pratchett

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