I don't know how to do typography, but I am overly obsessed with it, so I suppose that gives me some authority.
Anyway, this is what I recommend: Increase the speed (it drags on, leaving the reader hanging: they should never stop reading except during a dramatic pause)
and get it to flow more smoothly: it seems to come in bits and pieces, sentence by sentence, where it should be kept flowing constantly, save again for dramatic effect.
Very nice, but maybe a bit slow.
claressadubs 1 year ago
I don't know how to do typography, but I am overly obsessed with it, so I suppose that gives me some authority.
Anyway, this is what I recommend: Increase the speed (it drags on, leaving the reader hanging: they should never stop reading except during a dramatic pause)
and get it to flow more smoothly: it seems to come in bits and pieces, sentence by sentence, where it should be kept flowing constantly, save again for dramatic effect.
Hope this is useful to you.
MildlyObnoxious 1 year ago
its not too bad, but it wouldve been better if you added some appropriate music to it.
serbdetritus182 2 years ago
THiS IS COOOL!
goofygoober67 2 years ago
5* for this fine video !
bowman2064 3 years ago
Omg i just re-watched this and I'm still laughing my ass off at the end.
I have no idea why it's so funny to me.
lovelydepression77 3 years ago
wow that was really well done! You got the punchline just right ;)
noDsliw 3 years ago
Lol nicely done
aideen2 4 years ago
well done! the glass shape made me thirsty...
tamfska 4 years ago
LMAO I adore Terry Pratchett
MrBaye 4 years ago