I'm not gonna rip on you guys too much....because I know how much work it takes to produce a short film...but this was honestly pretty terrible...If i were you...I would revisit this later after I had a bit of practice...and there was no need for this to be a bit over 9 min....You could have fit all this into maybe four min. if you worked at it...it would have made the film more bearable to watch...
It isn't really supposed to have a plot or solid lines--the appeal is in how bad it is. Check out the original cut--it's somewhere on the web. Cuts out all that annoying "plot"
I'm not gonna rip on you guys too much....because I know how much work it takes to produce a short film...but this was honestly pretty terrible...If i were you...I would revisit this later after I had a bit of practice...and there was no need for this to be a bit over 9 min....You could have fit all this into maybe four min. if you worked at it...it would have made the film more bearable to watch...
JAYSPH 1 year ago
extremely LONG (and boring) credit sequence...
JAYSPH 1 year ago
i graduated in 07. feels like a long time ago.
mattbradleyu 2 years ago
this was the worst movie i have ever seen.
jjachura1 3 years ago
Donald Ford deserves an Oscar for this.
theprogen2003 3 years ago
Watch:
1:52-2:21
3:35-9:50
The rest is confusing "plot" added in the directors cut.
pretzelcommander 4 years ago
Frank makes the movie . Words don't make men, but they do make for a better film- look into getting a writer.
nervouschatter 4 years ago
It isn't really supposed to have a plot or solid lines--the appeal is in how bad it is. Check out the original cut--it's somewhere on the web. Cuts out all that annoying "plot"
pretzelcommander in reply to nervouschatter (Show the comment) 4 years ago
so lame.
roonstein 5 years ago
The begining was too long, my attention was divered from the video. I think you should make it faster. xD
vampyr 5 years ago