honestly, the lisp isn't that noticeable anymore. When you rap like you don't care, and you don't pay attention to it, it sounds better and less noticeable. I could be wrong...
I think 'presently' the very effect this "lisp" has on your 'current' confidence and energy, when rapping, is the only thing blocking you. In other words, I think you've had this lisp for so long there is already an answer within you as to how to fix it.
Not sure how to address the lisp, maybe you don't need to address it: I want to see VBL bring energy and confidence on that fast mellow flow, even if it doesn't go well. VBL has his own tone (I misused the word) the confidence + energy has to be there. With energy and confidence maybe things will work. I am doing my best to help w/o being uselessly technical.
Beat and rap should go together <-- meaning the artist, and what he does - with his flow and/ tone, should MATCH the beat. Again, the "SOUND" of both BEAT and RAP should match. Yes juggalojak3, he spits very on beat.
This video got negative feedback on the Tech N9ne site. I give this feedback to help fix: Some may say you have a lisp, you don't pronounce well, that you're sloppy. But check this: 1)Sometimes your tone changes in a way that doesn't work: (e.g. 20s, 37s, 30s, 36s, 43s, 47s, 55s) Maybe 3 things combined: you lose energy+fall asleep+lose confidence. Not sure.
2)Beat and rap should go together.
Listenin to FleshNBone -Master, the energy is still present in his mellow fast flow.
@juggalojak3 they just saying that cause of what people say on the Tech site, its like monkey see monkey do, if one person says something negative, the others feed off it, alot of people on that site are just a bunch of fan-boys, now if we ever get on Strange music or TL or something watch how many people act like they were never negative towards me, same thing goes for alot of rappers that did songs wit Tech, once they do a song wit him everyone is like oh he's dope, when there really not
Well man i heard that jay rock dude rap and i think you have way better lyrics than him but everyone is riding his dick now, personally i think he kind of sucks
@v1wax your the man man keep it up...unique sounds w/ excellent skills my dude...let me know if you wanna do some work with some other hard ass thats been number 1 on reverb nation for a long time
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playajdog 11 months ago
Dam dude fuckin kills it why aint this shit blown up yet... fuckin got a hint of a little bone fast rap in that to me diggin it
declisal7 1 year ago
honestly, the lisp isn't that noticeable anymore. When you rap like you don't care, and you don't pay attention to it, it sounds better and less noticeable. I could be wrong...
But I'm not ;p
car1it077 1 year ago 2
one day ull get into strange music there no way they can keep this out forever haha
TheRealToxicrated 1 year ago 9
see man.. you get better every new video! keep it goin man!
baked840levi 1 year ago
I think 'presently' the very effect this "lisp" has on your 'current' confidence and energy, when rapping, is the only thing blocking you. In other words, I think you've had this lisp for so long there is already an answer within you as to how to fix it.
mzane175 1 year ago
Not sure how to address the lisp, maybe you don't need to address it: I want to see VBL bring energy and confidence on that fast mellow flow, even if it doesn't go well. VBL has his own tone (I misused the word) the confidence + energy has to be there. With energy and confidence maybe things will work. I am doing my best to help w/o being uselessly technical.
mzane175 1 year ago
Beat and rap should go together <-- meaning the artist, and what he does - with his flow and/ tone, should MATCH the beat. Again, the "SOUND" of both BEAT and RAP should match. Yes juggalojak3, he spits very on beat.
mzane175 1 year ago
This video got negative feedback on the Tech N9ne site. I give this feedback to help fix: Some may say you have a lisp, you don't pronounce well, that you're sloppy. But check this: 1)Sometimes your tone changes in a way that doesn't work: (e.g. 20s, 37s, 30s, 36s, 43s, 47s, 55s) Maybe 3 things combined: you lose energy+fall asleep+lose confidence. Not sure.
2)Beat and rap should go together.
Listenin to FleshNBone -Master, the energy is still present in his mellow fast flow.
mzane175 1 year ago
@mzane175
his rap goes almost perfectly with the beat
juggalojak3 1 year ago
@juggalojak3 they just saying that cause of what people say on the Tech site, its like monkey see monkey do, if one person says something negative, the others feed off it, alot of people on that site are just a bunch of fan-boys, now if we ever get on Strange music or TL or something watch how many people act like they were never negative towards me, same thing goes for alot of rappers that did songs wit Tech, once they do a song wit him everyone is like oh he's dope, when there really not
v1wax 1 year ago
@v1wax
Well man i heard that jay rock dude rap and i think you have way better lyrics than him but everyone is riding his dick now, personally i think he kind of sucks
juggalojak3 1 year ago
Good shit homie
XkillerHopsX 1 year ago
I see the hair coming back. :D
ToxsickLP 1 year ago
I cant take v1wax serious, its hes face expression, his sound/tone... He sounds/look more like a comician.. But nicely done beside that :)
SecretMisery 1 year ago
lol its hard to take you serius
wispers187 1 year ago
that was awesome mann
TheRealRedbullet 1 year ago
@v1wax your the man man keep it up...unique sounds w/ excellent skills my dude...let me know if you wanna do some work with some other hard ass thats been number 1 on reverb nation for a long time
Magz405 1 year ago
Its godat gudgud.! Hella madboyy.!
SHARN274 1 year ago
pretty good; i gotta "spit-fast" song im working on; you down VBL?
let me know a.s.a.p(remember, exposure builds fan base)
-BLOOD aka "MistaAK-47"
vidalassasin 1 year ago
Gah, fucking brilliant. How is such talent so underated. Treehouse shall rise.
CarnivalofCarnag3 1 year ago
You don't wanna see TREEHOUSE act out like we don't know how to behave...
TreehouseVids 1 year ago
dope!
TheBoyBlue91982 1 year ago
I like this bro thats some psycho status you got goin but i like this lol
ElRomell2K 1 year ago
off da chain u know what it is
travisengel89 1 year ago
scary face at the first but sick ass song
bizzy523 1 year ago