The Thin Red Line - A New Original

[Shopaholic871]

stumbled upon this again, randomly scrowling through my Favourites... still amazing :3

[camjamza]

I feel your pain!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for the lovely song.

[Easmithv]

How can I get this onto my ipod

[9Anki6]

Oh, this song was really good, man ! Love your voice.

Keep up the good work!

9Anki6

[cetera06]

Excellent my friend!

[Shopaholic871]

wow nice i like it thanks for telln me bout it

[SportyMusician]

Very goood thanks for telling me bout this :)

[0maxmax0]

Great song! Love the melody.

[manatwork101]

great song

[joedruo]

good voice. but the lyrics are AWFUL. utter tripe. to actually have 'high school graduation' as a line.. i mean come on???!!!

[ouwie]

WOW! Jeimusu love the song brother. Your voise is really good! Gonna check out you site! Have a great day bro, keep up the writting!

[NeverAfterForever]

May I suggest starting out the song with the picking pattern. Not the strumming. Save the strumming for the chorus, then maybe the second verse. Good song, but you need to change your look. Keep it up. Great voice.

[daveyphotos]

This is an amazing tune! You have an exceptional voice! You sound very similar to Roche Voisine, the French Canadian musician! I love his stuff too.

[glk4324]

Dude! That was fkn great. Lookn forward to hearing more of yo stuff!

[saintdee]

its good. =]

favourited.

[nigel1866]

its me stevie janowski

[CuZineSS]

well done bro nice original man

[ingetxu]

I like your voice

[AliciaJBB]

awesome voice dude !! :)

[maxzimop2]

Nice music, great voice and guitar strumming!!!! keep up the good work dude!!!!

[lulavina]

Nice, dude.

[phibah]

very nice

[vonne7979]

Great voice :)

[cristinak7]

very nice:) but you should change your clothes U.U

[StephanieRuizTv]

i like your voice your really good

[johnnywriight]

love it!

[GlenviewLane]

you got an awesome voice dude

[madalo]

Hi. I don't usually comment on these but I really like this. Nice voice.

[provostg]

so sick dude....

[simplepine]

btw. u got talent go get a record deal

[dewaradja]

Nice job bro...

[RosePeddals]

Wow! What a voice & great guitar playing!!

[95Parker]

i love this song :)

nice voice ♥

[afterburner94]

That was awesome ;) love the

[CURIOSOCHICO]

''The Thin Red Line" rules!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[vandeman10]

Still your best song. I didn't like into the night. Maby you want to try a bit more different styles in your songs cause they all sound very similar. Also please don't edit your vids any more made it look really unprofessional. Just a stil image of your perforce is way better.

[g0318998n]

nice job. *subscribed*

[dbeater1]

just watched into the night you sent ...thought it was pretty cool ..but this ..man you got a really nice voice ,very good range easy to listen to. writing alright to mind if i subscribe?

[JeimusuJones]

Thanks so much! Please subscribe.

[nNnilsson]

that was really good! keep it up

[wolfmane14]

.. lol ... good song..

[Bloodrushin]

oh, BTW, i think you did a great job. your voice is good :D

[Bloodrushin]

hey... it's BloodRushin. I love your song. The thing is... i love it so much i like to sing it. :) I wish i could sing it with you on a youtube video so my voice could be heard, but you probably live far away, so not possible. i also don't think you would want me to either... People think that 12 year olds are just developing their voices, so no one wants me to be in their band in Montana... it's kinda bad feeling getting rejected for it so many times that it makes you want to stop singing.REPLY

[JeimusuJones]

Keep trying. Everything your doing now is just a warmup for when you make it!

[codyuhing]

I love this

[mochaman1984]

nice job man. You've got a great voice.  I'd turn the guitar up just a tad bit. Take it easy

[MariaJesusFreakKK]

Niceee.

:)

[SotoGx89]

has a bit of an oldies rock feel to it. i like it.

[kzyess]

Thumbs up for you man

[AshleyMasl]

I Usually Dont Check Out Much of My Emails That Have Links To Videos. But I Decided To Check This Out And Omg.. I Rated It 5 Star! I Love This! I Just Might Be A Subscriber >.> TeeHee

[EmilySuzanne38]

this is beautiful!

I love how your lyrics are so pure!

btw this kinda reminds me of one of my songs called "fire". I would be honored if you would check it out and give me some pointers. im definitely not as vocally strong as you are

[sparkythekiller]

all i can say is wow your music is great man keep it up i look forward to seein your stuff on itunes :)

[renrengrin]

I wish I had your voice it's amazing man

[fd9w4dncm]

I was about to give this and all your videos 1/5 stars, because I don't like people spamming my inbox with "come see my awsome videos". But I ended up giving it 5/5 because it was too cool, and I can in a way relate to this song.

[coreybhayes]

sersiouly i really like it! and i really like your voice and this is deffinitely chill. great listen..

Props

[ilyas8]

i recieved your message but haven't checked my box for a while lets hear. . .quite good ^ ^

[BoxMyHeart]

Vnice!

[twiliteXskylite]

thank you for the link :]

great finds should be shared, after all ^~^

[amberlica25]

i. love. this. now how do I steal it?

[lxworld2808]

Wow..... i couldnt wait for u to make an album.... nice vocal, lyrics and melody!

[ThatFoolishBoy]

thank you sadly I'm living this song at this moment but it feels so true and real

[DeathToTacos]

Hey, I don't know you, but you sent me a message linking to this song. Thanks for that :) this is a good song...I feel like harmonizing with it. In fact, I may do that and post it! Yay for providing mp3s xD

The lyrics are great btw. Although I may not be able to sympathize completely, because I am still 17 myself...heh.

[cheaok8]

that was really good. beautiful. loved it ! :)

[ComseeYang]

thanx man! awsome! just awesome!

[applejax19562]

The song brings back memories and reminds me of the song "Killing Me Softly With His Song". Your song pretty much nailed my feelings when I was 17. Broken hearts and broken dreams.....yep. Great job by the way....five stars for sure.

[MissMaxima21]

nice ;]

[cavanherk]

Strong vocals.

[desdinova22]

very nice melody and lyrics, thanks

[danbreen13]

i think it would have been better if you had kept picking during the verse and used chords in the chorus but good voice

[Kayla7898]

ths is really good

[kiorsly]

wow, it's cool.. loved this song..

[WHATtheTUGNUT]

I don't think this style suits you frankly, you have a good voice - just not for this kind of music. I love your songwriting though. Beautiful bridge, memorable message.

[kenmasters007]

You're good. You should try to hit top 10 weekly videos.. you may need to do some covers to gain some popularity and your views will start going up. Thanks for sharing your great songs!

[levyDK]

thanks for sharing..u r such a good singer :) keep it up...

[JonWunderlichMusic]

Great song! I really like your songwriting, this one has a very memorable hook!!!

[Nic123400]

Teenage?

[WishfulMusician616]

This is good!

[AznVi3tx]

I would play the guitar slower

[0CityLights0]

Nice Voice - great song!

[LolaYiang]

I don´t care what other people say about this video ...I think it´s a really good song and the voice is really good ...it´s really soothing and calming I love it ...

[1Burninhouse1]

Nice shirt! :P

[SatoKiba]

You're really great, I just can't look at your face without laughing 8D

[nigel1866]

its me stevie janowski. You look and sound like stevie from eastbound and down

[shingyangkusho]

wow!!!

[msmyci]

good job, great music and voice.

keep it up.

[wickedradicalmandude]

you are clearly not a teenager?

or woman, so why the hell would you cover this? wear that shirt? and have your hat backwards like that?

[bramel]

what a ridiculous comment, why waste your time typing that crap?

[wickedradicalmandude]

the same reason you did

[ErinTheLilCrazy1]

"ORIGINAL" means something

[kenmasters007]

Great song, great voice..

[nico3641]

i like bacon

[1954shadow]

Hit and fav'd!

[seon1239]

really good song...hope you become famous some day!

[fatulalaloo]

very deep song thought the concept was pure and the story was very sincere. interesting to see that people can find hate mail where talent is obvious.. i'd call that jelousy, much ups to you bud.....

[jonasbrothersfan8141]

wow. i love these lyrics :]

[HarperJlol]

This will be on the radio sooon.... I hope!

Totally awesome song!

I am subscribed..

[robem10]

you have a fantastic voice, thanks for sending me the mail about this song, glad you sent it. i also subbed you.

[koriepfrank]

Not bad, I dig it. It paints a nice youthful picture.

[nigel1866]

good melody

[shameusyo]

TRULY LOVELY.

[Koepex]

well done !

[maidouacooleo]

hmmm.. not bad... :)

[eliseo20]

awesome! sounds like a song I would hear on KOST, the radio station.  :)

[cowboyBebop321]

absolutly amazing im glad you pm'd the link

[209fool]

nice lyrics

[driftking1817]

thanks for the link man, this was tight, consider me subscribed

[OneQuarkMore]

I love it!!

[xxafrosamuraixx]

if felt liek this before. wonderful art bro! ty

[matjordan15]

Damn dude that is awesome you good deff get a deal with that song

GOOD LUCK !

[Genzofan]

i think you´ve got potential

the song sounds good

[plastic7error]

I listened your song and I think that you've got potential :))

Very, very nice ^^

[LannahDear]

That was totally amazing <3

[vandeman10]

Real good job. Nice song. I onlt didn't like this part "Why did you go?

Why did I stay?

It was so long ago

Still my love, wont fade away" it was less fluent then the rest of the song

[PopGarbStank]

You're very talented. : )

[EvaDigout09]

amazing job, i'm very glad i clicked on your link! keep it up!

[abeautifulnightsky]

That was wonderful! I'm also glad that I clicked on the link that you sent. ^.^ Your lyrics are beautiful, and your voice sets it off quite nicely.

[shithead1992]

nice one man!

[layeredmusic13]

i likee

[JN535]

nice

[CarlineJonas]

reely good.

im glad i clicked one the message you sent me!~

[Beatboxbeginner]

very nice

good job

[namnoiz]

Great sounding song !!!

[anthony122]

hmm ur pretty good =) glad i clicked on the msg u sent lol

[magicalangel0]

I gave you 5/5

[bbypwincess90]

u gotta go to american idol...

[CachaHardt]

Good job. Since I came and checked out your vid, think you could check out ours? We've got quite a few covers and include CHORDS on all of them.

Thanks! Enjoy!

-Alex

[Chamelea]

Awesome job ^^

[pleasesweetie]

Wow...you sound great like a professional already....now go and make that money....

[RandomMelodiousTune]

Great job! This sounds amazing...really.

[Cutieforever100]

i love it! the lyrics especially!

[Pikachu25xMew151]

Awesome!~ ^^

[miissLips]

Wow. I really like this. Beautiful voice..and simple chords, yet beautiful. Love the lyrics. A bit simple, but the meaning comes across very well. I can totally relate the lyrics, though perhaps in a different way....:) I want to check your other stuff now!

[djpersephone]

Amazing. <3

[cidrose]

5 ***** !

[SUPERMEGADUARTE]

Great job!!!!!!!

[fudge00444]

i disagree my bands maniger must see you sing he might be able to get you in the spotlight the hol song was great keep that up and youll get to the top

[BfeoAdmin]

My honest opinion:

I like the vocals. Very clean and crisp. Perhaps the cleanest I've ever heard from this kind of youtube video.

I like the tune. It was plain, but I liked it.

The only issue I would say lies in the lyrics. They are boring and just bland. You should work for something more abstract or symbolic--or you should work on something less depressing.

[SWinger7]

ghey.

[Frienever]

nice song, 5/5

[Stenchyboxcar]

poop

[KorazyA]

seems like the 90s or something...

[koiOnofish]

i really like the song. thumbs up. thanks. :D

[AngelicAcid453]

Nice :)

[zeroelliott4146]

who r u? good song (although sappiness isn't my style). it would go good in brokeback mountain though

[JustinRiray]

lol totally true. good song tho, but not my style

[lllCo2lll]

i don't know you so that was pretty random to hit me up like that

nice song i guess

[henlos]

its nice nice voice but how did u came in contac with me

[JDMaddaloni]

that was very good man

keep it up

:D

[LiLbAbYgUrLjUdY]

i like it

[SeuiJaii]

love it! 5*

[ambiRose12]

nice voice. nice lyrics. favorited it.

[Baylor390]

really really great voice

[iamzouthurn]

goo voice. the guitar was kinda annoying though... dont know why it just was. but ya I agree with the others lol loose the shirt hahah no offense man

[Lexx787]

Yeah u emailed this to me...

please don't do that anymore.

i don't mean to be harsh but i really disliked this.

like A LOT.

sorry..

but if its music that makes u happy, best of luck :]

[No1ZeBoMB]

Whats wrong with you,

just broke up with ur boyfriend?

[wolffman25]

You're style sucks, but you got skills.

[Val224]

wow.. this was great!

I think everyone has a thin red-line in their life- I think it's absolutely amazing that someone noticed it.= you!

Absolutely wonderful song!

[Angeladn75]

Love the Led Zep sound. Nice guitar work, been playing long dude? Thanks for the music.

[shaggylee122]

Teenage heart?

Dude looks like he's 36

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[Val224]

He's reminiscing...

lol

[shaggylee122]

ohhh, alright.

[Val224]

haha...

cyber high5!!!

[clueworm82]

eschelar is right. You look like you belong in Fast times at Ridgemont High. Its hard to take you serious looking like that.

[eschelar]

nice sound on the guitar and the vocals remind me of Led Zep.

However, the vid makes you look like a 35 year old loser singing songs about a lost love from when he was 13. Ditch the hat, get someone to do your hair and wear solid colors.

This video is 99% better without the video.

[littledrummerboy989]

Hahahaha

Wear solid colors.

Fuckin hilarious

[ReviewNoob]

wow, pretty amazing

[AvAndEv]

nice =)

[danner]

awesome song bro! keep it up!!

[micaelakong]

This song is grea and your singing tottaly rocks btw love your guitar i will soon learn!

[Disenchanted09]

hey haha so what if you've writer's block

your lyrics are awesome!!!

and they're so true

it doesn't matter if it takes a long time to write stuff out

because the world will always have time to listen :)

SMASHING AWESOME VOICE YOU'VE GOT THERE!!

[viktorftw]

n1n1

[Subfightr]

Ok, I was gonna post a big fuck you for what I figgured was spam but this deserves clapping insted. (claps). Great job man, I can really appreciate the tallent and lyrics, wonderful lyrics. Love it! Thanks for the spam :)

[Dynamix599]

great song, i loved it

[Shogun2k7]

Hope you become successful! Great sound!

[jcchandley]

Beautiful voice, dude. Thank u for sharing with me. BTW, awesome shirt! I'd love to hear more from u. U've got a bright future ahead...ur talent is apparent.

[charlylp08]

like your shirt !!

XD

Good song !!

[epicstorm2006]

Very nice... thank you for sharing it.

[seanmee1]

very nice man :) thanks for sharing!

[neettim]

aye man! thanks for sending me a message for this song! awesome song!

[jarhead58]

nice song i like it great job

[silentmirage]

Nicely done! :D Love the song!

[Scottmaster84]

nice chords!