Write both! I found it really helpful writing songs because it helps me express my emotions in a safe way that can possibly help or inspire other people! But make sure you write the songs for yourself, not because you feel you need to or because someone is asking it of you. Whatever feels right to you is the best, but don't hold back. Write both if you need to!
1. I love the song, it totally suits your voice and the guitar is good to. great stuff!!!
2. The lyrics are good and i understand this is a draft, but i think piano and strings like violin or something will sound nice with the song
3. Could you perhaps post the lyrics in the side bar? that way people can read the lyrics clearly and we could think of some video ideas. do you have any video ideas yet??
4. sorry im not sure id be able to help you on that one
Thank you! And i plan on having at least piano, but I also wanted violin as well! Idk if I can get that though... I do have a few friends who play violin though! I'll definetly ask! And sure, I'll post the lyrics asap! They do change slightly from draft to draft btw lol, so if they are different slightly, sorry!
Wow! Thanks! Can't wait to get a better version of it done though! Right now a few people are writing some other instrument parts for me, then I'll record it again w/all those parts as another rough draft, and then if everyone likes it, imma either rent out a studio or make my own home studio and record it! So hopefully I'll have the finished version ready and on iTunes by early next fall at the latest! Thanks so much for watching!
yeah, I could definitely compose piano arrangements for you. I'm just gonna need those guitar chords as a base for me, if you could get them from Adele..
overall the song is fine. It needs more shape (dynamics - building before chorus, consistent timing, and some melodic changes) to keep it interesting throughout. I like the Don't surrender line - it's catchy and the bridge was good too. Sorry...no idea about a video right now. good work on the song! : )
Thanks! That is really helpful! And the vid idea, its ok, cuz you gave me an idea a few weeks ago when i sent you a pm w/the lyrics! And we'll definetly work on timing, that was only our 1st time together all the way through the song! As for building the verse up to the chorus, any more suggestions (in detail)? Thanks again!
hmm, a good song paul, well, i can try to come up w/ somthing on my keyboard (i have music sheets, and once i write it up, i'll give u the music sheets *if u want*) so :P, ya, i'll c wat i can do :P
this is gonna be awesome when you finish it :)
whoarly 2 years ago
thanks! we start recording in about 2 and a half weeks, and then it should b up late july! so close! lol, im really glad you enjoyed it!
-Paul
PaulAlexScott 2 years ago
Ill make u a CD!!! (im a computer freak) ur pretty good! (my friend told me to say ur amazing!) shes right! LIVE DA DREAM DUDE!!!
MrTherese 2 years ago
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Maddiandella 2 years ago
Write both! I found it really helpful writing songs because it helps me express my emotions in a safe way that can possibly help or inspire other people! But make sure you write the songs for yourself, not because you feel you need to or because someone is asking it of you. Whatever feels right to you is the best, but don't hold back. Write both if you need to!
-Paul Scott
PaulAlexScott 2 years ago
LOVED IT!! <33
Can´t wait ´til its Done ! <33
Keep It Up, And Dont Stuck <33
Niileey 2 years ago
Thank you so much! I can't wait for it to be done either! lol, it should be recorded this July and on Itunes shortly after that!
-Paul Scott
ps i will make a music video, but thats a while away!
PaulAlexScott 2 years ago
Your Welcome!! And I Will check it out when its Done !! :) And I will wait for the video too :)
Niileey 2 years ago
1. I love the song, it totally suits your voice and the guitar is good to. great stuff!!!
2. The lyrics are good and i understand this is a draft, but i think piano and strings like violin or something will sound nice with the song
3. Could you perhaps post the lyrics in the side bar? that way people can read the lyrics clearly and we could think of some video ideas. do you have any video ideas yet??
4. sorry im not sure id be able to help you on that one
thekiilll101 2 years ago
Thank you! And i plan on having at least piano, but I also wanted violin as well! Idk if I can get that though... I do have a few friends who play violin though! I'll definetly ask! And sure, I'll post the lyrics asap! They do change slightly from draft to draft btw lol, so if they are different slightly, sorry!
-Paul Scott
PaulAlexScott 2 years ago
hey thanks for posting the lyrics, they are great!!
thekiilll101 2 years ago
fuck, paul im gona do a covor!
ThatBoyAintRightProd 2 years ago
wow, that was a great song!!! =D I love it!
rollercoastergirl12 2 years ago
Wow! Thanks! Can't wait to get a better version of it done though! Right now a few people are writing some other instrument parts for me, then I'll record it again w/all those parts as another rough draft, and then if everyone likes it, imma either rent out a studio or make my own home studio and record it! So hopefully I'll have the finished version ready and on iTunes by early next fall at the latest! Thanks so much for watching!
-Paul Scott
PaulAlexScott 2 years ago
yay! i want that song on my ipod! =]
rollercoastergirl12 2 years ago
It's a really good song Paul. I bet you that when you do the official video, it'll be great.
-CC from the Mac and CC Show.
JobroConcertCoverage 2 years ago
Thanks CC for the support! Can't wait to hear what you come up with for me! Thanks again!
-Paul Scott
PaulAlexScott 2 years ago
yeah, I could definitely compose piano arrangements for you. I'm just gonna need those guitar chords as a base for me, if you could get them from Adele..
JobroConcertCoverage 2 years ago
awesome man :DDD
JBismycandy 2 years ago
Thanks! If you get the chance, please answer my questions! It would be awesome!
-Paul Scott
PaulAlexScott 2 years ago
your welcome paul.....lol jk it was good for like 5 mins of practice lol
blondefromtheinside 2 years ago
overall the song is fine. It needs more shape (dynamics - building before chorus, consistent timing, and some melodic changes) to keep it interesting throughout. I like the Don't surrender line - it's catchy and the bridge was good too. Sorry...no idea about a video right now. good work on the song! : )
emilyharder 2 years ago
Thanks! That is really helpful! And the vid idea, its ok, cuz you gave me an idea a few weeks ago when i sent you a pm w/the lyrics! And we'll definetly work on timing, that was only our 1st time together all the way through the song! As for building the verse up to the chorus, any more suggestions (in detail)? Thanks again!
-Paul Scott
PaulAlexScott 2 years ago
Pretty good song (: Not BAD but not, awesome (: But, I like the idea of the song (:
urfuturelawyer 2 years ago
Can you answer the other questions if you get a chance? Thanks!
-Paul Scott
PaulAlexScott 2 years ago
hmm, a good song paul, well, i can try to come up w/ somthing on my keyboard (i have music sheets, and once i write it up, i'll give u the music sheets *if u want*) so :P, ya, i'll c wat i can do :P
cinnamonroll6676 2 years ago
sure! that would b cool! i was thinkin more of like actual music though, like being played lol, but that would b very helpful 2!
PaulAlexScott 2 years ago
lol, all i need is a piano, then i can play it for you :P
cinnamonroll6676 2 years ago