Very nice melody, and congratulations for finishing a composition, composing is certainly difficult. One little thing though, you use a very common progression with your left hand parts, and your chords don't really change that much throughout the song so it gets quite repetitive, so just work on changing up the left hand parts abit :)
@kupOnut11 Thank you for your feedback, which is very important for me because this is my first composition! I am aware that my left hand is rather repetitive, but I am definitely finetuning it now. My friend is going to add lyrics to this song and I will post a new video with her singing in it. Thanks again! :)
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RiceNPixieDust 4 months ago
Love this.
JDioon 6 months ago
Omgosh, you are soooo wonderful!!!! (: And congratulations on composing your first song- it really reached my heart! :) Please keep playing!!
PrincessYoshicakes 10 months ago
you are my favorite pianist on youtube! <3
pigs2fly 10 months ago
Very nice melody, and congratulations for finishing a composition, composing is certainly difficult. One little thing though, you use a very common progression with your left hand parts, and your chords don't really change that much throughout the song so it gets quite repetitive, so just work on changing up the left hand parts abit :)
kupOnut11 10 months ago
@kupOnut11 Thank you for your feedback, which is very important for me because this is my first composition! I am aware that my left hand is rather repetitive, but I am definitely finetuning it now. My friend is going to add lyrics to this song and I will post a new video with her singing in it. Thanks again! :)
Hensjjj 10 months ago
WOohooo! You're back and with an awesome composition too!
nugety 10 months ago 2
wow this piece is addicting to listen to! =] amazing keep up the amazing work!
KenChowOw 10 months ago
Very beautiful composition! Wish I played as well as you do... Keep up the amazing work! ^^
TR4J1Kx 10 months ago 2
A very nice piece! Thanks for uploading and do continue to compose these beautiful pieces :)
Inyuhn 10 months ago